Very interesting to read it...
Realy a diff story...keep it up π π its realy interesting π
Originally posted by: .LiveLaughLove.
Lara, this story is gonna rock! I am sure about that! I loved the prologue as well as the first chapter of this story. They were written very stupefyingly. Please update soon and pm me zaroor πTake care! β€οΈ
Originally posted by: devilaonmoon
OOpsieee... π€’π€’π€’...Me too typooo error ππ... I meant to write " preity_d " and that's you... π³π³...instead wrote " preety_di " ... Sorryyy huh...Thank u so much for ur comment...Aaliya being mortal and zain being immortal is a great difference betweenthem I know, but love always finds a way... ππ...So wait to see what is coming up next...Till then take care anddo more typo error... ππ...
Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
Wonderful Lara!! βοΈ Seriously the way you have described the underworld is simply awesome.. I so want to visit it right now π (I'm kidding btw π ).. Zain sounds damn hot .. He was so furious.. Aaliya bruised his ego unknowingly.. She's got some power π.. I like it :D.. Loved the moment when Zain entered the underworld.. You portrayed is superbly π.. Eager to know what Hades will say about the whole situation.. I hope he will order Zain to go back to Aaliya and try again.. It will hurt his ego even more π but at least they will meet again π.. Will be waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care π
Originally posted by: divikash
NOW IM A BIG FAN OF YOUR STORY
it really feels life im watching a tv seriespls all i request is regularly continuecoz most of the earlier ones i've read leave them hanging for agesso. pls update regularly and CONTINOUSLY
(What an idea siji)π
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aparnalokam
Superbb update dear Very interesting to read it... Realy a diff story...keep it up its realy interesting
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Reply: Thank u so much dear, yes its one diff one and I am so happy that u found it interesting... :)
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shaalivirman
Okiii sorry I read the first 2 parts together now so I dint comment before :) And abt this ff I'm actually liking its sooo different
I haven't read any story in this kind
Aaliya hitting zain ego nice strt still he he got mesmerised by her!!!
Cooolll :D continued soon Clara ji :D
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No sorry in friendship... ;), so chill. Thanks for your comment and am so glad that u liked it, yeah will cont real soon...
Till then.. take care... :)
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meera.chaudhuri
Wonderful Lara!! Seriously the way you have described the underworld is simply awesome.. I so want to visit it right now (I'm kidding btw ).. Zain sounds damn hot .. He was so furious.. Aaliya bruised his ego unknowingly.. She's got some power .. I like it :D.. Loved the moment when Zain entered the underworld.. You portrayed is superbly .. Eager to know what Hades will say about the whole situation.. I hope he will order Zain to go back to Aaliya and try again.. It will hurt his ego even more but at least they will meet again .. Will be waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care
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Ohh !! You want to go to underworld !! Let me see if I can get you a bus ticket to there.. haa haa..
Thanks for your vluable comment dear. Will cont asap.
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gowtu
Intrstng... Loved it..
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Thanks dear...
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zzinia2411
omg nicceee update! i just lovvveee the fact that Aliya won over him! Mr. egoistic handsome jerk ko pata to chale humans can be strong n conqueror too! really hope he comes to meet aliya again n then aliya does something unknowingly again that will make him super angry n question her about her power by cornering her n coming way too close to her by making her nervous BUT she'll 'try' to stay strong BUT personally i dont mind if she loses control!!!...Do update ASAP! will be waiting!
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Thanks a lot for your comment dear...
Yeah... dikha denge ke HU-MAN is the strongest ;)... Thanks for your suggestion too, lets see what happens next... will try to cont asap.
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edwebllalover9
awesome update.zain was so angre,i love the way his mother control his anger.waiting for zaya next meeting and update.
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Thanks dost... :)...
zaya next meeting coming soon... take care...
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.LiveLaughLove.
Amazing update, Clara or Lara
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thanks friend...
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