Originally posted by: Emaani.95
OMG!! Clara? π² You dedicated this part to me?? π² I mean really?
Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou buddy π€
I felt so amused the moment I read your dedication π Thanks :*
Now coming to the chappy,
I was not at all wrong when I said 'You write stupendously' π
This concept is very much fresh for me as I haven't read any FF like this one on any Forum. π
You have all rights to write your imagination and I wouldn't say anything on it but I just hope that you'll not pen down something which would be against the muslim culture or would hurt any of your muslim readers. Though, what you wrote is not what actually happens but I am ok with ut as it's just a fiction. π³
I liked this segment of the chapter:
'So her name was ... aaliya... in between his determined thoughts he couldnt help but to say her name to know how it felt rolling out of his tongue...
" Aaliya... "
As if the girl whose name was aaliya could hear him, she moaned a little and replied in her deep slumber...
" Hmmm... "
A ghost of a smile involuntarily played on his lips.'
I am glad that Aaliya didn't die! π
Now, when are you gonna update the next part? π
I hope it would be up soon. ππ
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