Zaya ff Forever Yours... chap 12: pg 40 - Page 21

Originally posted by: aparnalokam

Dear its outsanding update...
Really its awesome...
Waiting for ur nxt update...

Originally posted by: VIRMANVIAN

hai lara
first when you send the pm i thought what is this yaar boring and all
but when i read this yesterday
i have to say this ,
this ff is minblowing and fabbbulous.
u really did a great job.
looking forward for your updates.
here after you will be getting my response regularly.
i have read all the updates in one go.
pls update soon.
your works are really awesome

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

really beautiful and painful update.feel bad for aliya so much,zain was so rude why?hope he free aliya from that punishment.can't wait for next part.

Originally posted by: gowtu

Wow tht was fabulous updt..
U penned it very well..
Continue soon

Originally posted by: divikash

wow, it was amzing. truly, superb update

felt really sorry for aliya, but can't wait for more

update again sooner😃

thank u 4 the hard work👏

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

I'm also a fan of both 😛.. Gulab jamun over gulab ful !! 😆.. I can totally imagine your 'Someone' is trying to woo you with a bowl of gulab jamun 😳😆

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Originally posted by: shaalivirman

wwowwwooow !! wat a chap

omg por aaliya...with creatures :O

i will die in fear itself if tat happens :O

cary one mahn...continu sooonnn

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome n scary..aliya has been taken to hell for escaping death which she isn't aware of...n now left in cage..damn...eagrly waitin for next..hope shez fine n thanks for the PM!!

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Superb update Lara 👍🏼.. But quite emotional.. As of now I'm not liking Zain at all.. He is being so rude to Aaliya and treating her in such harsh manner.. Poor Aaliya 😭.. But I loved how you portrayed the moments inside the cage.. It was really scary and also very painful .. Hope Zain will realize his mistake soon.. Will be waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care 😃

Originally posted by: Jannat94

Great update Lara

thanx 4 the PM

update soon