Zaya ff Forever Yours... chap 12: pg 40 - Page 20

Great update Lara

thanx 4 the PM

update soon

Superb update Lara 👍🏼.. But quite emotional.. As of now I'm not liking Zain at all.. He is being so rude to Aaliya and treating her in such harsh manner.. Poor Aaliya 😭.. But I loved how you portrayed the moments inside the cage.. It was really scary and also very painful .. Hope Zain will realize his mistake soon.. Will be waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care 😃

Awesome n scary..aliya has been taken to hell for escaping death which she isn't aware of...n now left in cage..damn...eagrly waitin for next..hope shez fine n thanks for the PM!!

Amazing chp..ohh god zain is such a bas***d..god aaliya i pity for her!!
😃 😆

omg so interesting, why is zain so rude? n now what will he do... res for long comment

totally awesome

devil..why dont you direct the serial...it will be lots fun...i m sure many will agree to thiss

amazing update
loved it
poor aaliya... Zain is very rude to her
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Awsm wrk dear..
Feel sad gor aaliya..
Waiting for nxt chapter. .
Continue soon
Thanks alot for pm

hai lara
first when you send the pm i thought what is this yaar boring and all
but when i read this yesterday
i have to say this ,
this ff is minblowing and fabbbulous.
u really did a great job.
looking forward for your updates.
here after you will be getting my response regularly.
i have read all the updates in one go.
pls update soon.
your works are really awesome