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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: BlossomingRose

Wow, the prologue sounds fantastic! Can't wait to read more 😊

Thanks a lot dear...
You dont have to wait for long, am gonna update soon... 😃😃
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Originally posted by: niki795

awesome prologue Lara
loved it
something different
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Hello honey-bun... 😃😃...
I am supa.. dupa... happy that you are here in this forum...
Yeh dosti nahi chodenge... right ??? 😉😉
And thnks for your comment... love yaa..
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woww this is new and interesting ...update sooon
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Nice prologue Lara!! Sounds interesting.. Looking forward to the first chapter.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care :))
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Hello everyone...

Thank u so much for your likes and comments. Dedicating this first chapter to one of my new buddies here... " Emaani.95 "

I hope you like the first chapter of my very first ff on the dazzling couple zaya, aaliya truly looks like a baby doll.. I really like her in this show.

So no more blabbering, heres the first chappy... forgive all the mistakes please.


( Note: I dont intend to hurt any culture or religion or beliefs in this ff and the whole story is product of my imagination and creativity. Read it for entertainment purpose but please dont mind the religion and characters I am gonna create here, as its surely gonna be very much different from regular things and real world. I am gonna mix up Greek mythology.. their idea of religion.. name of the Gods and Godesses... with my own imaginations and ideas. If you have confusions or questions about anything, please feel free to ask through your valuable comments. )


Forever Yours



Chapter 1



In his peripheral vision he looked at his wings, they were white as snow with elegant designs upon them in black and dark blue. The soft feathers upon them were as if caressing through the wind while flapping. He looked at the picturesque view before him, the giant white clouds... he flew through them as they tingled his slightly tan skin and left his shirtless body with droplets of freezing water. The coldness was so refreshing upon his skin that he sighed in pleasure.


He is " Death ". The only son and heir of the lord of the underworld.. Hades and Persephone. His was named zain, he has been known with this name in all of the Gods and the Goddesses since the day he began existing in universe.


He wasn't evil... he wasn't some kind of demon or monster like most of the human cultures imagined him to be. When walking on earth among the mortal people hiding his true existence... he was used to see the affect he had on women around, they would swoon... sigh and they would shamelessly lust after him. His handsome face.. flawless tall body with mascular built and those irresistible abbs.. served as a magnet to the female race. But unlike other Gods he never took any interest on those beautiful, heavenly beauties, have affairs, create his offsprings and leave.. no he wasn't like this. Those womanizing traits of other Gods irritated the hell out of him, even the Goddesses were no less. Blame his arrogancy and stiff attitude, his neglengency to show any kind of emotions as he prefered keeping his heart a stone. For this, all the Gods and Goddesses in olympus laughed at him and his celebacy sometimes but he didnt mind. He didnt want to get himself familiar with any kind of emotions for they could make him weak which would never suit the powerful God of death.


Zain.. the God of death.. stretched his massive wings in a straight line with their ends pointing further. With a whoose of air he let his body travel downwards towards the earth and beneath the clouds. A vulture flew away from him in fear.. shreaking in a sharp tone. Zain furrowed his eyebrows in annoyance. Even the animals were scared of him, right after they could sense him with their sixth senses which were stronger than humans.. they would run away from him in a blink of an eye tucking their tails between their legs. More frustrating was the idea that humans had about him, they feared death and so they despised the God or Angel of death, they despised him. They imagined him as an ugly.. evil monster, they hated him and his arrival. Though it was true in some cases, when collecting the most evil human souls he took the most scary form to make their death experience and the beginning of their afterlife miserable. They deserved it and he enjoyed it.


But that was not the case with those few pious.. good souls, he went to collect them in his true form... surrounding by his godly aura and filling those souls with calm and happiness as they lead them to the light.. to the tunnel.. to the road which ends in the underworld, his home. After that it was his father.. hade's duty with his beloved wife persephone by his side to perform the judgement of all the souls and announce how will they pass their next life... their reincarnation. Their was no specific place called heaven or hell, instead of that one place even far beneath the underworld " Tartarus "... Tartarus was the dungeon of underworld where the most wicked creatures and beings, monsters, betraying.. unfaithful angels and evil titans are locked up for eternity.


Zain's thoughts got distracted as he sensed coming nearer down his destination. A beautiful.. town at the edge of a vast forest welcomed his view, it was such a gorgeous town across the mountains and rivers... he admitted to himself... but not as gorgeous as olympus.. the residence of most of the Gods and Goddesses.


He descended more downwards with ease as haywire winds from his wings ruffled his spiked hair making him look rugged with a touch of wildness. Making himself invisible he softly placed his feets on the ground, his black boots made scrunching sounds as they fell on the dried leaves.


He flipped through the forests and the roads of the small town as he appeared infront of his destination. The seven storied hospital stood high infront of him. He stirred his wings and then made them invisible, it was difficult to move around with his wings in these small buildings made by humans.


Zain looked at his left, he saw keren... one of the angels appointed under him standing there a few feets away from him. She bowed her head before him, her master zain. Zain just nodded and keren... one of his most faithful angels raised her head.


Keren: " We tried again my lord but couldnt seperate the soul from its body. Forgive us for our failure and for disturbing you but we are clueless and that's why had to call you. "


Keren looked at zain apologetically, her expression was genuine.


Zain: " Its okay keren, let's see what went wrong. "


Zain rubbed his thumb and forefinger across his chin and farm jaw with a serious expression, he was in his total God mode now. He had his army of angel spread across the whole world to perform the duty of collecting souls and leading them to the underworld. Zain only appeared to collect souls himself in special cases of certain people or if any problem arises. Such was a case now, something went wrong because of which his angels failed to rip this certain soul out of its body and this was the reason of his appearance...


Keren: " As you say my lord... "


Then zain closed his eyes and teleported himself to a hospital room. The room brightened with a white flash of light as he appeared and then reduced to normal. He opened his eyes to see a bed to his right, there was a female body lying unconscious on the bed. Her body was covered by a white sheet till her chest which was rising and falling very slowly with her weak breaths, he couldnt see her face as that big machine placed beside the bed in between that girl and him was working as a hindrance to his sight. Her hands which were kept unmoving upon her tiny stomach looked fragile and pale.


Zain breathed in the scent of lavender coming from that girl who seemed to be just 21 or 22 years old, he could unmistakingly seperate that smell from all the other smells of fenile, antibiotics, medicines... and that enticing smell was calling him. Zain furrowed his eyebrows in confusion, this never happened before.. never ever since the moment he was created and that moment was a couple of millenium.


" Strange.. "


He mumbled to himself.


He looked at the other side of the bed to see an old woman holding the hand of that girls who was lying on the bed. There were purple bags under the puffy eyes of that old woman, her curly brown hair mixed with white streaks was.. stuck upon her cheeks with the tears that flowed freely down from her eyes. Human emotions... zain felt a tuck in his heart but it was just for a second before he numbed it to a stone again. Grief of seperation... this was normal for human beings when their loved ones leave them for eternity. Zain... being the God of death... he was familiar with all these scenarios from forever.


Zain moved sideways taking a couple of slow steps to see the girls face. There was a sharp intake of breath which no one heard in the room, zains throat felt dry with what he saw. He was greeted with the most beautiful... most angelic... most heavenly face he had ever seen. Her long dark brown hair sprawled across the pillow, her spotless face... that little nose... her slightly pouted lips... and those endless lashes fell upon her cheeks as her eyes stayed closed. At that moment zain wished for nothing else but for her to open her eyes and look at him, he wanted to see the color of her eyes.


The old woman holding her hand spoke...


" You have to wake up for me, you have to. You are my only daughter, my only hope to live baby. Can you hear me.. please aaliya... aaliya... open your eyes.. "


With that zain's trance broke, he hardened himself for he was there for a reason. He was there to bring death to this girl which his army of angels failed to do for some unknown problem arised. So her name was ... aaliya... in between his determined thoughts he couldnt help but to say her name to know how it felt rolling out of his tongue...


" Aaliya... "


As if the girl whose name was aaliya could hear him, she moaned a little and replied in her deep slumber...


" Hmmm... "


A ghost of a smile involuntarily played on his lips which vanished immediately.


The old woman who seemed to be aaliyas mother he realised, sat straight and alert. No aaliya's mother couldnt hear zain's voice, she heard the loud beeping sound of the machines. " Aaliya.. " she cried frantically but aaliya didnt respond again.


Zain leant down upon her a little and kept his hand right upon her heart. A bright white light erupted from the skin where he touched, the entire room filled with that light but ofcourse any mortal person cant see that. Her heart beat stopped showing a straight line in the machine beside her bed. Immediately zain started missing her heart beats, it was as if he wanted to betray his duties for the first time but... but he couldnt do that. It was his job to make sure to bring death to the people in their destined time.


The old woman was now shouting for the doctors, wearing scrubs doctors ran to the bed and tried to revive the lifeless body of aaliya.


Satisfied.. zain smirked, he felt keren appear beside him in the room.


Zain: " Its done. "


Keren stood silent beside him but zain didnt thought anything of it, as he waited for aaliya's soul to distangle itself from her body. Usually the soul lefts the body in a couple of seconds after death. So he waited.


A minute passed, zain frowned as his lips formed a grim line. Why wasn't her soul leaving.. so that he could take the soul and return to underworld ??


The doctors were trying to revive her but zain knew that they couldnt. The God of death himself had arrived to collect her soul, so their was no possibility that anyone could revive her.


Zain was shocked beyond limits when aaliya's body jerked up as she coughed and inhaled a large breath, the doctors breathed out sighs of reliefes and aaliya's crying mother thanked all the Gods up in heaven smiling.


Keren: " This was what I was talking about, we have tried several times..."


Keren stated uncomfortably.


Zain felt uncontrolable fury building inside him. How was this possible ?? How was this fragile girl immune to his power ?? How could she escape death again and again ??


Keren disappered and went to some place in oblivion saving herself as she sensed zain's building anger. She was familiar with his temper and that's why didnt want to fall in the receiving end of his wrath.


His breath was coming out heavy and hot as anger started taking control of him. Wailing could be heard of wandering ghosts upon the earth who were not ready to leave to their afterlife and still stuck in this earth. Dark smoke appeared around him, the lights in the hospital room flickered and blasted one by one...


Doctors flinched in the room and paused with what they were doing. They couldnt see zain but they were scared of the sudden storm outside; the slamming of the windows and blasting of the lights inside the room.


In between the chaos no one noticed aaliya's fingers moving, she hummed in pain and then slowly opened her heavy eyelids. She squinted her eyes and adjusted her view in her consciousness. She looked around to see her mother.. her eyes twinkled in recognition, then she noticed the doctors around and the horrified and confused expression on all of their faces including her mother's too. Her eyes then fell upon him.


There was this man standing in the middle of the room, he had the most handsome face she had ever seen. She wanted to reach out and touch his dark stubble adoring his jaw and she felt a craving inside her to run her fingers through his ruffled hair. Her eyes travelled downwards on his broad chest, his firm abbs.. his well defined stomach and those two lines which got invisible to an unknown place in his black cargo pants. Aaliyas eyes then again travelled upwards and that's when she saw his eyes... red in rage... in anger. He looked murderous... his expression monsterous. Loud wailing sounds of thousands of people crying hit her ears, she flinched and tried to cover her ears but she didnt have the power to lift her weak hands. She pleaded softly...


" Stop... please.. stop... no more... "


Aaliya gasped, she had never seen such kind of fury in anyones eyes before and she couldnt help but feel scared. Her eyes widened as he took a step towards her. She saw him widening his eyes and the redness in those beautiful black eyes lessened just a bit.


Zain suddely noticed the two most beautiful brown eyes looking at him with... fear ?? His eyes were locked into her's and the distraction made the wailing of the spirits around him lessen.. so did his anger too. His eyes softened a bit as he took a step towards her but he stoped as he saw her getting more scared.


Her's was an innocent soul, she didnt deserve to die with fear. Her death was supposed to be beautiful.. as beautiful as her good deeds in her life. So he calmed himself as much as he could.. but the girl.. aaliya.. her fear wasn't reducing.


Zain sighed, it was too much waste of time.. he was trying but still the situation was getting more and more complicated. He decided to try once more and he would make it quick.


Aaliya saw the man lifting her hand up and clutching it in the air infront of him. She couldn't even get the chance to be confused as she felt her throat being strangled though no one was touching her, the machines which calmed down minutes ago started beeping wildly again.


Aaliya choked and thrashed upon the bed wanting nothing else but to breath a handful of air in her lungs, never had she felt this much helpless ever. She somehow realised that.. that handsome man was doing this to her but who was he ?? Why was he doing this to her ?? She wanted to cry.. wanted to ask that man those questions but she couldnt. She thrashed more violently but the invisible grip around her throat didnt loosen. An involuntere groan sounded through her lungs.


Aaliya looked directly at his eyes and saw his eyes too mirroring the pain she was filling. Why would he feel pain if this was what he wanted ?? She didnt understand. Then she saw frustration in those eyes, frustration of failure maybe but of what ?? Then she saw him throwing his hand back down and the fury returning in his eyes as they became dagerously red again. Aaliya gasped in lungful of breaths as the feeling of strangling disappeared and she slumped further in the bed in exhaustion.


Aaliya had crossed the edge of her strength and she felt so vacant inside her after suffering through that kind of pain. Her vision started blurring and foggy. Before she closed her eyes she saw something unbelievable, something unexpected. She saw that man spreading out his beautiful massive wings and growling in rage as the cries of thousands or maybe millions of people almost deafened her.


She closed her eyes.. giving in to a deep slumber. The last thought that crossed her mind was that... this was the most absurd dream or nightmare she had ever had...




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Will be soon back with the next chappy, till then take care and have fun...

Love you all... tada...

Clara or Lara... 😉😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Nice prologue Lara!! Sounds interesting.. Looking forward to the first chapter.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care :))

Thanks a lot dear... Hope you will like the first chapter too...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

woww this is new and interesting ...update sooon

Thanks dear... just updated, waiting for your comment now... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG!!!
Such a long part??
First of all thankyou for updating so soon and that too this much long part 🤗
Will post a comment on the update when I'll read it later 😃😳
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Originally posted by: aparnalokam

Awesome prologue...its quite interesting...

Hey.. thanks... 😃😃
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Originally posted by: Emaani.95

OMG!!!

Such a long part??
First of all thankyou for updating so soon and that too this much long part 🤗
Will post a comment on the update when I'll read it later 😃😳

I love writing long chapters sometimes... haa haa.. weird me 😕...
Will be eagerly waiting for your comment after you read... 😃
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