Zaya ff Forever Yours... chap 12: pg 40 - Page 17

Awesomeee update! I love ut. It was really good! Please update the next chapter soon. Can't wait! 😊

Tht was amzng..
Thy kissed.. Wow..
Well written..
Continue soon..

It was amazing dear 😊
Arey wah dey kissed 😉 😉
Waiting for your next update...
Update it soon...

Great update Lara

waiting for next

update soon

Amazing update Lara!!! ⭐️ Ekks Zain kissed her!! That was hot ;).. Very nicely portrayed 😳.. Aaliya is unique.. She bit his hand :D.. First mortal who dared to do this to the God of death.. One more thing which will hurt his ego.. Eager to read the next part.. Aaliya in underworld :p.. Please continue soon.. Thanks for the pm.. Btw ami rosogolla!! Then you are gulab jamun 😛.. Take care 😊

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

awesome update.Zain just kiss Aliya,their kiss was so hot.both are seems confuse about each other.waiting for next.update soon.

Originally posted by: Syed695

Amazing...loved it..kiss was sensual and well described😳...and hayee their confusion...its amazing in a way as it would draw them towards eachother. ...awesome update Lara...n Thanks for the PM!!!

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29

Amazing update..umm so dey kissed..it was unexpected..bt was amazing!!
😛 😃

Originally posted by: divikash

omg, i was reading the update with my mouth open

amazing update yaar

loved it to the core

pls continue soon, waiting 4 next part

Originally posted by: .LiveLaughLove.

Awesomeee update! I love ut. It was really good! Please update the next chapter soon. Can't wait! 😊