Originally posted by: preity_d
beautifulll, this chappy was the best, we got to know how souls gets detached from their body, we got to know about a humanly kindness of The non human Zain... He gave him one more life in one life
this was what was seemed to happen... people should be at his mercy. Zain would grant death to sidestep from one out of kindness, but this girl.. aaliya.. she was alive and shockingly she wasn't at his mercy too. She somehow was immune to him... somehow could deflect his aura and power. Rideculous !!!!
so, this is the thinking of Zain, the non defeat able Aaliya hurt his ego ... Loved just loved how he adjusted himself beside Aaliya, so looking forward for the next...
Originally posted by: edwebllalover9
awesome update.zain gave a chance to the main that good.i feel bad for the man family.love the last part.waiting to see how zain will be take her soul.
Originally posted by: divikash
woaw loved it, it showed the depth of zain's character
and him staring at sleeping aaliya, im grinning like an idiot rite nw thinking of the scenethnks yaar for such a pretty updateupdate sooon
Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri
Amazing update!! Liked the way you have explained how Aaliya was able to see Zain when he had come to take away her soul.. Zain is neither that cruel nor immune to human emotions.. He shows mercy to those he wants to.. But Aaliya is a different case.. Though he is there to finish pending work yet he can't stop admiring her ;).. Lovely!! Will be waiting for the next.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care :)
Originally posted by: shaalivirman
wowowoow!!! awesome re :D
kind side f him awww i love it...this is too damn differentanther addicted story of clara ji :pthnx fr the pm update soonnn :D
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