Zaya FF: Dangerous Ishq ch 2 part A&B pg 6 & 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

when u'll be update first part.plz update soon.


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Originally posted by: rinku95

Fantastic
Continue soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
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intersting concept...
loved the cs...

plz plz update soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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fizu this is OUT OF THE WORLD...!!!!! im IN for it yaar... already in LOVE with the story n all the characters... the CS is too CAPTIVATING, INTERESTING n IMPACTFUL... Three different... no Four different stories in one ff n with JEALOUSY N PROTECTIVENESS as the main spice in them... abdulla brothers are in luv wid haider sisters n now they will cage them... INTERESTING Concept...!!! now please update soon n i will pm others informing about this wonderful piece of writing...
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Originally posted by: marium-zamamii

intersting concept...

loved the cs...

plz plz update soon...

and add me to ur pm list



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Originally posted by: naina927

fizu this is OUT OF THE WORLD...!!!!! im IN for it yaar... already in LOVE with the story n all the characters... the CS is too CAPTIVATING, INTERESTING n IMPACTFUL... Three different... no Four different stories in one ff n with JEALOUSY N PROTECTIVENESS as the main spice in them... abdulla brothers are in luv wid haider sisters n now they will cage them... INTERESTING Concept...!!! now please update soon n i will pm others informing about this wonderful piece of writing...
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2hrs before

His voice boomed in the entire House as he Yelled her name Aliyaaa! His eyes were filled with anger as they twitched his jaw clamped close yet his face showed how upset he was his both fists balled up he was fuming at the sight infront of him


She Knew now all Hell is about to be let loose.

She didn't know what to expect or how she was going to control this situation.

Zain had always been unpredictable in his anger only Allah knew how he would react, but she knew today something horrible would be the result of his anger she had never seen him like this before.

Reason being the uncompromising way she was in and who she was with made him flip he had lost his power to think calmly and understand what was happening.

"Allah Miya please please help me how did know where I was he and how will I explain " she silently did dua due to shock she hadn't even moved from where she was .


they were like this

He charged towards her and pulled her out of his Arms

And shoved Asad away

he looked at her up and down her disheveled hair and what the hell was she wearing


it made him even more upset.


He shot daggers at both of them with his eyes

It was pin drop silence

Finally she spoke

"Zain listen to me calmly jaan I know this doesn't look right but" she was cut off mid way

He looked at her and pointed a finger to her to stop

" Don't just Don't bother to explain I don't want hear a thing Ghar Chalo" said a fuming Zain(he grabbed her hand and was about to leave with her when)

"Zain listen to her let her explain it really isn't how it looks if you don't talk this out things will get out of hand uski baat tho sun lo " says Asad

He left her hand and charged forward and grabbed his collar and pinned him to the wall his forearm pinned to his neck and jaw

Asad was gasping for breath

"Don't you !%$@ Dare interfere in this and how dare you touch my wife mere biwi hai woh mere! Got that ... I only I have that right you bloody @#$%&" blasted Zain

Asad was trying to pull his arm away but h e was pinned to the wall

Aliya ran toward zain even though in such a halat she shouldn't be running

"Zain leave him zain charo usko charo I said leave him " she was trying to pull him off of Asad

"No Aliya I will not and how dare you uski itni Fikhar kyun why are you so worried usko tho aaj I won't Spare him." In a low angry tone

She grabbed his arm turned him around and gave him one tight slap

after manageing to get him off Asad who was holding his neck and gasping for breath

Zain stood there with his hand on his cheek his eyes were spitting venom

She moved near asad and gave him water

"Ya Allah Asad are you ok let me see dehke ne do" she said

That was it

He walked over to her picked her up in his arms and walked out of the house

The Drive was complete Silence

They reached home he opened his door and banged it he opened her door pulled her hand he pulled her all the way up to their room

And shut the door

"What were you doing in his House? and Tumne Aliya Muhjse jhoot kaha you lied ki you were with Nafisa Bhabi shopping for your baby shower then stay at your maayka"

"Zain I did not lie really we had gone shopping par after that we"

" Kya we what? And who is this WE? Asad was also their" ? Answer me damn it!" Yelled Zain

"Yes Kyunki Bhaijaan ko kaam tha tho Asad came along with bhabi and that is her brother I couldn't say anything" said Aliya

"couldn't or didn't want to " yelled Zain

"Zain we just went shopping then hum "

"Really just shopping my foot! Then tell me my dear wife Aliya begum how the hell did you end up sleeping in his arms on his lap on the bloody sofa in his house! Roared zain

"Zain please kaise baatein khe re ho tum chi I know it didn't seem right ad aap gussa ho par the truth isn't what you saw really" yelled aliya

"Eyes don't lie Aliya what I saw you can't hide" barked zain

(she cupped his face) "Zain really believe me I only love you and what you saw actually baat hai hai ki my head was pounding we had stopped at bhabi's maayka". " So she could get a few things her jewelry and then I didn't feel good you know aise halat main kya hota hai na".

"I felt dizzy and my head then bhabi got paged at hospital she left me there when I felt better I would go back home". "Asad just was massaging my head and I don't know when I dozed off and I didn't even know he did aswell that is all really please zain trust me".

He clapped his hands what a story( he grabbed her face and jaw and squessed it looking at her n other hand he twisted in back of her

"Ahh zain dard ho ra hai choro "

"Good muhje bhi dard hua when I saw you two like that "

"bull $h!t I saw the love you hav e for him the concern jab usko dard hua what did you do slapped me your husband shohar ko uski liye for him and you love me right pura din you where in his arms uski bahon mein sukoon than a and you love me "

"Zain let go jo bhi you want do with me fine par yeh baby pe asar hoga this can affect the baby it can sense everything "

He finally let go

"Aao come" he pulled her one hand tigtly ith her hand and other hand he grabbed her hair and opened the door and pulled her out of room

" bhai choro bhabi ko leave her yelled Rizwan

Zeeshan bhai ,Mom jaldi aaao yelled rizwan

they were walking really fast down the stairs "zain slowly please kya kare ho choro"

"No ab chalo" he yelled

Zain leave her Aliya ko chro said suriya

No Mom tum sab don't interfere yeh husband and wife ki beech ki baat hai "

Zeeshan was trying to pukl zain away

Zain bhai mat karo calm down leave bhabi

"Usman saab kahan hoo jaldi aao zain aliya ko tum bas jaldi aao" said Suriya

he was lookinga at her what slowly chalo jaao uske pass raho uski bahoon mein"

"Zain leave her she is expecting zain" yelled suriya

and he didn't realize it but he yanked her hand to hard and let go of her hair forcefully that the next minute

She slipped and was rolling down the stairs it all happened so fast

"Ahhh" she was in excruciating Pain And bleeding

Suriya, zeeshan and rizwan ran to her zain was in shock looking at her lying on the floor in pain suddenly she was unconscious

Suriya was rubbing her hands aliya talk to me aliya no lose consciousness aliya rizawan dad call karo ki OT ready rak ne Zeeshan get the car . zain what are you doing standing there come pick up aliya jaldi hospital jaana

Present

How could he this can't be happening not again why cant he control himself he thought'he loved her was this his love. No it couldn't be if you love someone then because of you they wouldn't end up in a ICU at a hospital.

Outside ICU

Doctor comes out

" Aliya how is she now she isn't badly hurt na she will be alright na " says Zain

"Don't you even dare to say my sisters name from your mouth I'm there for her there is no need for you to care for her Asad how is Aliya says Fahad

" please yeh hospital hai this not the time for this both of you please calm down ' Fahad bhai Aliya is out of danger she is fine don't worry there was a lot of loss of blood but she is stable now." Says Asad

"Thank you Allah " says everyone

"but bhai woh I'm so sorry we couldn't save the babies' she had a miscarriage we will have to keep her under observation for a few days she is still very weak .. you all can see her now .. but please no stress says Asad

"What Babies"? says Suriya

"Ji haan she was expecting twins" says Asad

" Miscarriage .. Twins What noo .. noo please noo Allah this can't be happening" says Zain

"Ya Allah" says Suriya

"How will we tell her ki uski bache poor Aliya kis ma ki liye yeh suna wont be easy" says Nafisa

Zain is about to walk in the room

" No don't you dare stay away from her after what you did I will not allow you near her '(looking at Zeeshan and Rizwan ) and not even your two brothers they too better stay away from Shaiza and Ayaat understood". Says Fahad

"Fahad I know you are upset at me and you have every right to be but please let me meet her please she is my wife and for my fault why are you making rizwan and zeeshan stay from shazia and Ayaat. I need to meet her please "begs Zain

"No Zain you've only seen my good side don't make me show you my ugly side I'm warning you stay away from my family all of you you have done enough damage."

Rizwan and Zeeshan walk near Shaiza and Ayaat

Nafisa comes in front: "didn't you hear my husband stay away from us got it

(walks to Zain slaps him) this just a small trailer if you or you brothers come near shazia , Ayaar or Aliya there will much more than that..

I cant believe I trusted you more them Fahad he was right you boys aren't what you show to be .

Fahad (moves Nafisa behind him): Jaan don't be near him we cant lose our child either says Fahad

"Fahad kya mein Aliya se" asks Suriya

He nods

They all go in side except for Abudullah bros

"Damn it they dare not stop me she is my wife "

Zain walks in Zeeshan Rizwan follow

Aliya see him

Aliya(yelling top of her lungs): you stay away from me bhai get this killer away from me he killed my baby get out leave goo

"Aliya baby nahi babies twins hone wale " says Nafisa

"Kya twins"

"killer Aliya what they were my babies to I didn't mean to " he was cut

Enough leave now out yells Fahad

Usman saab walks in

Aliya screaming at top of her lungs "bhai you were right he is a monster he killed my Babies zain Abudullah we are done I don't ever want see this murderer again get outtt!"

Usman grabs zain by the collar and pulls him out


Edited by Fiza28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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is it just teaser or part one.becz of zain agner aliya lose their babies really sad.now what will be happen in their life.update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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are u sure that was a teaser...
if yes then im waiting for part 1. if no then i m waiting for a teaser 😉
ohhh god im lovin this more n more fiza...
great work girl... ***hugs n kisses***
waiting for more n more...
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