||ZaYa FF: Dil Toh Pagal Hai||Chapter 12 pg. 85 - Page 34

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update.. Loved how they are getting comfortable with each other and like the slight awkwardness between the two 😳
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant update Kiret!Thanks for pm!Loved Zaya's OUTING!Love Maya!Waiting for next!Pls continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
this was a very cute one indeed!
aliya crying and Zain does not really care about the scene or infact has a different POV of it ...that strengthens their stand about love!
Zain had been observing her all through?? hope tamanna does not noe thisπŸ˜‰
it was a lovely update as usual and will be waiting for a longer next update😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awkward and more cute... it keeps getting better! update soon! thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update.zain observing aaliya abd eyelick.loved it update soin
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the pm πŸ˜ƒ
Lovely update!! πŸ‘
Zain observing her throughout the play was cute 😳
Loved the part where Zain and Aliya say goodbye to each other, the whole scene when they reach Aliya's hostel till Zain leaves from there was amazing.
Maya will always be Maya πŸ˜† I love the way she keeps referring it as a date while the people who went doesn't even consider it as a date πŸ˜† Well for now even I don't want it to be called a date 😳
Waiting for the next Update!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu

Res
unres

hey tht was sch a lvly one..
I loved it..
Indeed short but cute prt..

He slowly falling for her but dnt realising..

Continue soon..
Thnks for the pm


Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

-- Kiret (:
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: TashaForever

RES!!
Kiret! You found a stalker xP
Update soon! ---Unres-----

Too short re!!
You updated so late and now itna chota...lamba karo na please!!
Baaki sab perfect :D
The tragic play was osum...the way u described Aliya's sensitivity and Zain's lack of enthusiasm :P
The end part where Zain finally says it was lol and cute :*
Maya and ALiya are ROFL!!
Im waiting for anothe rupdate!
Jaldiii kar!!
~Tanya


Personally, I don't think that the length of the update really makes a difference compared to understanding the meaning of the update! But that's just my opinion!

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the update!

-- Kiret (:
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

sweet and cute update.zain observe aliya all the time.i love last part where they both had a eyelock.waiting for next part,update soon this time.


Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it!

-- Kiret (:
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ZaYaFan1

Just read both the 6th and 7th chapter! And I relaised that I missed something SO good 😳 Both the updates were lovely! Ohh I could imagine how pretty Aaliya must be looking in Black and red! By the way, I'm also wearing black and red right now! But it's not an anarkali πŸ˜‰ Maya was much more excited than Aaliya at the prospect of date (it was a date for me tooπŸ˜›) Zain has got that 'Kuch Kuch Hota Hai' feel πŸ˜† Hahah! PM me whenever you update, okayy? πŸ˜ƒ This was amaizng! I'm looking forward to read moree!! πŸ˜ƒ


Hehe! I just love that colour combo!

Lol yeah! Kuch kuch ho raha hai! πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Will pm you for sure!

I'm glad you liked the updates!

-- Kiret (:
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