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Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey
Chapter 5:
The only words, I'm still dreaming about is that Aliya trusts ZainAnd Zain says that he wont let anything happen to her.Aw..that sounds so cute <33I cant wait for their romance to start already. If they create such sparks in a cute moment..then my my..their love is supposed to be a whole lot of 10001 volts!
Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey
Chapter6:
Their date <33Its the wrong word for ZaYa, yet the right word for me!Romeo n Juliet..hmm..couldnt that be a horror thing so Aliya could snuggle close to Zainππ³Update soon =)
Originally posted by: mayur-arti.4eva
Hey Kiret,
Awesome CS and dil to pagal hai based ff, wowThanks! I'm glad you liked the concept!Your welcome π Of course, I had to like it, Dil Toh Pagal Hai is one of my favorites as well π³Yes! As a dancer myself, I love it! πNo wonder, I love dancing as well, but am not a professional trained one π³Oh! Well I am trained! xD Not that much but I do have some formal training!Most people hate it when Zain said that and you liked it? πYeah I liked it because Zain is honest about it, and she is actually one of the best dancers in the academy and Aliya just joined, Aliya can be the best dancer in the future better than Tamana but right now of course not. π³Glad someone understood that! Aaliyah just joined, she can't be the best yet!Of course, a person needs a bit of experience and training to be the best.Of course!Aaliyah's not that sharmeli types right now πI am glad for that as she is not his girlfriend right now to be all shy and hesitating types, although, I don't mind her being a little bit shy after she is Zain's girlfriend πGotcha! πZaYa talking about love and Aliya telling Maya what love is reminded me again of dil toh pagal haiMaya knows Aliya's prince charming qualities is in someone from the academy and she was hell bent on not telling her π, loved this part!That scene was inspired from DTPH πYes it was, but this has it's own ZaYa flavor added by you in it, and it is as good as it was in DTPHπ³Aww thank you! πYou totally deserve that πxDSomeone actually likes Zain & Tamaana? π²πTamana is not a bad girl or anything, and they are in a relationship, it is not that I want Zain and Tamana to be couple forever no chance am wishing for that, for sure Zain and Aliya are gonna be the soul-mates, but I like their relationship for now, if their friendship stays the same after they break up I would love that to happen. Anyways, Zain is not in love with Tamana so he can be friendly with anyone he wants to, as at the end of the day he is going to fall for Aliya. I would have hated Tamana if she was a bad person, but she is good at heart for now. π³Let's keep the words for now in mind! πTrue, although, if you are planning to make Tamana's characters similar to Karishma in DTPH, I will actually not hate her. Because what Karishma did was out of jealousy and for a spur of moment in DTPH. However, she understood and acted mature the very next day about it. So, if that same thing happens with Tamana, she is not going to get any hatred from me at least.Well... you will get to see a little bit more then what you saw from Karishma. Some of it maybe the same but a lot of it will be different!Yup! What's Zaya without kitkit? πOf course, ZaYa without kitkit doesn't go in one sentence πKitkit and Zaya go hand in hand!πSo true! π ZaYa are incomplete without their kitkit! ππHehe I'll try to get some more kitkit for you guys!Chapter 6:Zain apologizing and the whole scene before that is beautifully writtenMaya and her obsession with Zain, π loved her teasing Aliya πSo, Aliya is sad over the fact that Zain's first choice is not her, good going Aliya π
Thanks! Glad you liked that scene!Your most welcome πYup! Aaliyah isn't even his girlfriend but she's already sad about that! πShe is going to be very possessive when she will be his girlfriend πWe'll see when that time comes! πTotally, it is your story, however you shape it, am sure it is going to be as awesome as it is right now. If not then it is definitely going to be more better than it is right now πAwwie! Thank you so much!
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Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak
Aww its a lovely part...
ZaYa are attracted towards each other...Its almost a date watching Romeo and julliet act :)))
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Originally posted by: mayur-arti.4eva
Someone actually likes Zain & Tamaana? π²πTamana is not a bad girl or anything, and they are in a relationship, it is not that I want Zain and Tamana to be couple forever no chance am wishing for that, for sure Zain and Aliya are gonna be the soul-mates, but I like their relationship for now, if their friendship stays the same after they break up I would love that to happen. Anyways, Zain is not in love with Tamana so he can be friendly with anyone he wants to, as at the end of the day he is going to fall for Aliya. I would have hated Tamana if she was a bad person, but she is good at heart for now. π³Let's keep the words for now in mind! πTrue, although, if you are planning to make Tamana's characters similar to Karishma in DTPH, I will actually not hate her. Because what Karishma did was out of jealousy and for a spur of moment in DTPH. However, she understood and acted mature the very next day about it. So, if that same thing happens with Tamana, she is not going to get any hatred from me at least.Well... you will get to see a little bit more then what you saw from Karishma. Some of it maybe the same but a lot of it will be different!Sounds awesome, will be waiting for your twists in your stories πI hope you'll like them!Yup! What's Zaya without kitkit? πOf course, ZaYa without kitkit doesn't go in one sentence πKitkit and Zaya go hand in hand!πSo true! π ZaYa are incomplete without their kitkit! ππHehe I'll try to get some more kitkit for you guys!Will be waiting for that!πI'll do my best! π
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