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Chapter6:
Their date <33
Its the wrong word for ZaYa, yet the right word for me!
Romeo n Juliet..hmm..couldnt that be a horror thing so Aliya could snuggle close to ZainπŸ˜†πŸ˜³
Update soon =)
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Aww its a lovely part...
ZaYa are attracted towards each other...
Its almost a date watching Romeo and julliet act :)))

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Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

Chapter 5:

The only words, I'm still dreaming about is that Aliya trusts Zain
And Zain says that he wont let anything happen to her.
Aw..that sounds so cute <33
I cant wait for their romance to start already. If they create such sparks in a cute moment..then my my..their love is supposed to be a whole lot of 10001 volts!


Yeah I loved writing that part!

Of course! Their romance is going to make sparks fly and hearts skip a beat!
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Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

Chapter6:

Their date <33
Its the wrong word for ZaYa, yet the right word for me!
Romeo n Juliet..hmm..couldnt that be a horror thing so Aliya could snuggle close to ZainπŸ˜†πŸ˜³
Update soon =)


I was thinking about making it a horror one but then I couldn't think of one at that moment! But don't worry! I've got quite a bit planned!

Glad you liked both of the updates and will update asap! πŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: mayur-arti.4eva

Hey Kiret,

Awesome CS and dil to pagal hai based ff, wow

Thanks! I'm glad you liked the concept!
Your welcome πŸ˜ƒ Of course, I had to like it, Dil Toh Pagal Hai is one of my favorites as well 😳
Yes! As a dancer myself, I love it! πŸ˜ƒ
No wonder, I love dancing as well, but am not a professional trained one 😳

Oh! Well I am trained! xD Not that much but I do have some formal training!


Most people hate it when Zain said that and you liked it? πŸ˜†
Yeah I liked it because Zain is honest about it, and she is actually one of the best dancers in the academy and Aliya just joined, Aliya can be the best dancer in the future better than Tamana but right now of course not. 😳
Glad someone understood that! Aaliyah just joined, she can't be the best yet!
Of course, a person needs a bit of experience and training to be the best.

Of course!

Aaliyah's not that sharmeli types right now πŸ˜†
I am glad for that as she is not his girlfriend right now to be all shy and hesitating types, although, I don't mind her being a little bit shy after she is Zain's girlfriend πŸ˜‰

Gotcha! πŸ˜‰


ZaYa talking about love and Aliya telling Maya what love is reminded me again of dil toh pagal hai
Maya knows Aliya's prince charming qualities is in someone from the academy and she was hell bent on not telling her πŸ˜‰, loved this part!


That scene was inspired from DTPH πŸ˜‰
Yes it was, but this has it's own ZaYa flavor added by you in it, and it is as good as it was in DTPH😳

Aww thank you! πŸ˜ƒ
You totally deserve that πŸ˜ƒ
xD


Someone actually likes Zain & Tamaana? πŸ˜²πŸ˜†
Tamana is not a bad girl or anything, and they are in a relationship, it is not that I want Zain and Tamana to be couple forever no chance am wishing for that, for sure Zain and Aliya are gonna be the soul-mates, but I like their relationship for now, if their friendship stays the same after they break up I would love that to happen. Anyways, Zain is not in love with Tamana so he can be friendly with anyone he wants to, as at the end of the day he is going to fall for Aliya. I would have hated Tamana if she was a bad person, but she is good at heart for now. 😳

Let's keep the words for now in mind! πŸ˜‰
True, although, if you are planning to make Tamana's characters similar to Karishma in DTPH, I will actually not hate her. Because what Karishma did was out of jealousy and for a spur of moment in DTPH. However, she understood and acted mature the very next day about it. So, if that same thing happens with Tamana, she is not going to get any hatred from me at least.

Well... you will get to see a little bit more then what you saw from Karishma. Some of it maybe the same but a lot of it will be different!


Yup! What's Zaya without kitkit? πŸ˜†
Of course, ZaYa without kitkit doesn't go in one sentence πŸ˜†
Kitkit and Zaya go hand in hand!πŸ˜†
So true! πŸ˜† ZaYa are incomplete without their kitkit! πŸ˜†

πŸ˜†Hehe I'll try to get some more kitkit for you guys!


Chapter 6:
Zain apologizing and the whole scene before that is beautifully written
Maya and her obsession with Zain, πŸ˜† loved her teasing Aliya πŸ˜†
So, Aliya is sad over the fact that Zain's first choice is not her, good going Aliya πŸ˜†

Thanks! Glad you liked that scene!
Your most welcome πŸ˜ƒ
Yup! Aaliyah isn't even his girlfriend but she's already sad about that! πŸ˜†
She is going to be very possessive when she will be his girlfriend πŸ˜†
We'll see when that time comes! πŸ˜†
Totally, it is your story, however you shape it, am sure it is going to be as awesome as it is right now. If not then it is definitely going to be more better than it is right now πŸ˜ƒ

Awwie! Thank you so much!


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Originally posted by: Maneesha_Shanak

Aww its a lovely part...

ZaYa are attracted towards each other...
Its almost a date watching Romeo and julliet act :)))


Thank you!

I'm glad you liked it!

Almost date! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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I'll try to have it up this weekend if possible!
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Someone actually likes Zain & Tamaana? πŸ˜²πŸ˜†
Tamana is not a bad girl or anything, and they are in a relationship, it is not that I want Zain and Tamana to be couple forever no chance am wishing for that, for sure Zain and Aliya are gonna be the soul-mates, but I like their relationship for now, if their friendship stays the same after they break up I would love that to happen. Anyways, Zain is not in love with Tamana so he can be friendly with anyone he wants to, as at the end of the day he is going to fall for Aliya. I would have hated Tamana if she was a bad person, but she is good at heart for now. 😳

Let's keep the words for now in mind! πŸ˜‰
True, although, if you are planning to make Tamana's characters similar to Karishma in DTPH, I will actually not hate her. Because what Karishma did was out of jealousy and for a spur of moment in DTPH. However, she understood and acted mature the very next day about it. So, if that same thing happens with Tamana, she is not going to get any hatred from me at least.

Well... you will get to see a little bit more then what you saw from Karishma. Some of it maybe the same but a lot of it will be different!
Sounds awesome, will be waiting for your twists in your stories πŸ˜‰
I hope you'll like them!

Yup! What's Zaya without kitkit? πŸ˜†
Of course, ZaYa without kitkit doesn't go in one sentence πŸ˜†
Kitkit and Zaya go hand in hand!πŸ˜†
So true! πŸ˜† ZaYa are incomplete without their kitkit! πŸ˜†

πŸ˜†Hehe I'll try to get some more kitkit for you guys!
Will be waiting for that!πŸ˜†

I'll do my best! πŸ˜†

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