||ZaYa FF: Dil Toh Pagal Hai||Chapter 12 pg. 85 - Page 29

Originally posted by: TAnAz_

Awesome

Originally posted by: CrazyKSGlover

Amazing update as usual

Originally posted by: ...Harmony...

thats a lovely update...
so they are finally feeling first spark of attraction toward each other...
will looking forward for next chapter.. thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: ananya2000

wow...lovely...dear

Originally posted by: mayur-arti.4eva

Hey Kiret,

Awesome CS and dil to pagal hai based ff, wow

Thanks! I'm glad you liked the concept!

Chapter 1:

Liked Zain's concern for Tamana, he cares about her alot and he bought her, her fav flowers

Aliya's mom are concerned about her is pretty obvious, afterall a mother she is to Aliya.

Mr. Popular...that was good 😆

Love ZaYa's passion for dance

I like Maya and Aliya's friendship

He does care a lot about her! After all, she is his girlfriend at the moment!

Yes! Mr. Popular! 😆

Chapter 2:

I like Rizwan calling Zain as bhai 😃

So, Zain is all set to find his new partner

Typical Aliya, what was so special about this Zain? 😆

Zain walking to the room reminded me of Dil toh pagal hai scene

Loved ZaYa's convo

When Aliya asked Zain "You want me to be your partner?" I was like of course you stupid girl he is asking you to be his partner 😉

Zain is so confident about his charm

Aliya still unsure 😆 but Zain's smile did it and she agreed...loved this part of the chapter

Maya is going to scream "I told you" or probably faint hearing the news 😆

Hehe! Yup! Typical Aaliyah!

Yes he's very confident! 😆

Chapter 3:

Liked Maya and Aliya's convo...Maya was so excited 😆

I liked it when Zain said Tamana is the best dancer

Poor Rizwan needs to keep Tamana disctracted 😆

I loved this line you wrote "Leave the poor guy alone" 😆

I liked the fact that Aliya wasn't feeling awkward at all and she was talking to Zain normally 😆

Maya is much more excited then Aaliyah! 😆

Most people hate it when Zain said that and you liked it? 😆

Aaliyah's not that sharmeli types right now 😆

Chapter 4:

Awesome start

But Rizwan, why did he had to come and break the moment *sigh*

Like the friendship of Rizwan and Zain

ZaYa talking about love and Aliya telling Maya what love is reminded me again of dil toh pagal hai

Maya knows Aliya's prince charming qualities is in someone from the academy and she was hell bent on not telling her 😉, loved this part!

I know, my heart was breaking when I made him come in between...

That scene was inspired from DTPH 😉

Chapter 5:

Liked Zain and Tamana's part

Rizwan is such a good friend

I can imagine the whole ZaYa's part, you have written it so well

Aliya must have looked so cute when that scary face of her shakes a 'no' contracting her 'yes' voiced out 😆

Aliya analyzing the worst situation is so funny 😆

Aliya finally trust Zain 😃

It just gets better and better 👍🏼

ZaYa doing kitkit, oops Aliya is angry, and Zain irritated 😆

Someone actually likes Zain & Tamaana? 😲😆

Thank you so much!

Yup! What's Zaya without kitkit? 😆

Chapter 6:

Zain apologizing and the whole scene before that is beautifully written

Maya and her obsession with Zain, 😆 loved her teasing Aliya 😆

So, Aliya is sad over the fact that Zain's first choice is not her, good going Aliya 😆

Thanks! Glad you liked that scene!

Yup! Aaliyah isn't even his girlfriend but she's already sad about that! 😆

Awesome story!

Your story is based on dil toh pagal hai, but it is unique as well, I like that fact!

I would love to read more of it.

Update soon and please do PM me when you update next time 😳

Thank you so much for reading the story and appreciating my work!

Will update asap and pm you for sure!

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

Originally posted by: mayur-arti.4eva

I have added my comments in pink and answers to your questions too. 😳

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