you are unbelievable! just UNBELIEVABLE!!!!!!i have already told u that your emotional stories lead me through a turmoil of emotions but this one outdid it all! is it the same thread where i read a chronicle that made me LMAO yesterday???
it took me a good 6 minutes to come out of this chronicle and type this one out againt the 1 minute i spent reading it!
the way you described the burial,the emotions of not just Zain but also every member of the family along with the new member..the pure innocent 3 months old soul...it just left me numb!
the last 3 lines! what am i supposed to say? i have no words..."i'm leaving a blank space...fill it up with whatever u want" --nope its not what i'm telling you..thats what i felt u intended to say to ur readers..even if not!thats what i felt!
so sensitively and beautifully potrayed what Zain felt at her abrupt departure from his life!
after this one, its an official declaration! I'm your FAN!
bye
tc
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Edited by vinu127 - 10 years ago
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