"Can I do this to Bondita?" An Aniruddh/Kaka OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Ashley_m

Just re-read the OS. I have a small correction for you... When you mention that a girls character is based on her hymens the word to use for character is 'charitra' not 'kirdar'. Kirdar also means character but it refers to roles or parts like in a play.

Ashley_m

Ohhh thanks a lot, buddy... ❤️ I will correct this mistake. 😳

Actually, in Urdu, Kirdar is used for 'character' as well as for 'roles' in a play.

But you are right. Charitra sounds way better in this context. I will edit it right away. 👍🏼🤗

Originally posted by: nims23

Awwww Ayesha 🤗🤗 thank you so much for your sweet gesture 🤗

What are friends for dear? I just wanted you to write again and I am glad you did

🤗Nimmmzzyy wimmzzyyy... thank you thank you buddy! ❤️👍🏼

First of all kudos to you Ayesha for picking this topic ... when I started reading this story all I could see is a doctor writing a journal .. it’s truly educational.

😆 Thank you, buddy. Also, I assure you that a Doctor's journal is really very interesting. Full of stories... 😊❤️

You have described Ani’s emotions really well-say it his pain, anguish, guilt, anger and sadness for not being able to understand what was going around and getting trapped in a web planned by Kaka !! His horror thinking what would have happened if something bad was done by him to Bon in his intoxicated state!! I can so imagine this ani in the upcoming episode -guilt ridden, angry and scared!

I am dreading the guilt-trip actually... God knows kia hoga agay agay... 😕 I just don't want our RudhiTa to hurt or be apart... basss...

Kaka has only this knowledge that once girl hit the puberty it’s her duty to start a family!!. No matter what her age is!!

😔It happens now also, Nima... trust me... I don't work in a hospital anymore, but trust me, aise aise cases dekhne aur sunnay ko milte thay ke rooh kaamp jaty thy.

And that’s the mentality of kaka ani tried change in your os..

Arey kaka ko tou miene halka dikhaya hai is mien... usually people do not even realize ke unhone kuch ghalat kia hai aur unke actions kisi ke liye kitne hurting hue... uss zamanay mien tou loag aur ziada stuck up hote thay mentality wise.

even though he is his father figure, ani knew he had to explain to him in a detail so kaka stops pressurizing him for starting a family.!!!! Kaka needed to know Bon is not ready physically or any child bride cant be ready until she is not turned into an adult !!

You know, I recently found out that in some South Asian countries, child marriage or marriage of a girl who is under 18 is a documented crime and there are laws to prevent it. It all comes under the section of rape. (My law knowledge is minimal and I dont know about the laws in India. So please forgive me if I say something wrong or factually incorrect.)

Ani’s detailed description of a case he studied in London about a small girl from India is shocking and heartbreaking !!!

It is a real case, waise. Not from India though. Woh miene sirf story ke context mien likha tha.

All his words were a slap to Kaka and the society who thinks it is ok to make child bride to go through a hell which she doesn’t deserve that too without her consent and also taking away her innocence in the process!! The whole part was very heartbreaking !!! That poor girl has to go through a hell💔

I knowww... 😭 Sad reality is that these practices are still prevalent in many rural as well as urban regions.

finally Kaka understood ani’s point and was devastated to know what crime he was about to commit!! Bon was lucky enough, ARC is her husband but not every girl is lucky enough we can not even imagine the pain of girls went through in that era.. you have showed little bit of glimpse of that cruel custom ..!! How girls were treated that too without their consent and how boys were taught to handle girls .. disgusting !!

I am glad you felt the pain that I wanted to express through this write-up. 🤗 You are a very sweet person, Nima... and you have a sensitive soul too. Stay the same always. ❤️

I am not surprised of what kaka did this to ani.. he himself is coming from the same society then how could we expect to him do something different ?

Yea and plus he himself never had a wife or sister jiska kisi qisam ka koi pain dekha ho. That was the reason he was so indifferent to such things...

Ani’s guilt won’t fade away but at least he could made his point clearly ...👍🏼

I am glad my Ani did a good job here with Kaka... 😎😆

Very nice os Ayesha.👏. we can’t imagine how many girls must have went through this because of lack of knowledge!! Kudos to you dear 👏 I can totally see a doctor in your write up 👏

😆😆 I want you to see a writer in the doctor too, buddy. You know both are my professions. 😆

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Ayesha.. 🤗

I know your both professions yaar 😆😆

I am sure in real doctor’s journal must be very interesting .. we will discuss it someday 👍🏼

Ani will go on a guilt trip for sure yaar.. and that too for no fault of him .. but like in your story , Kaka is also in for a guilt trip!

I know yaar.. still there are so many areas where people don’t consider women more than a child bearing machine !! We can’t imagine those girl’s pain😒 people’s sick mentality towards women 🤬

There’s a law for a marriage at certain age in India but still there are some rural areas where child marriage is still exists !!

What? the case of a girl you wrote in this os was a real one? Omg.. that’s cruel 💔 poor girl .. I can’t even imagine what she must be went through
It’s a heartbreaking incident Ayesha .. we don’t know how many girls had went though this in that era

You also keep writing doctor sahiba 🤗🤗

It's really fantastic. Proper sex education is really important. So many lives are put in danger due to lack of sufficient knowledge. People should really stop shying away and talk freely about sex. But unfortunately it's still considered taboo in our society.👍🏼

I finally got the time to read it.

And I have to say I was shook by that story about that girl..there was so much information that I didn't know about before so it also helped me personally. Thank you so much for sharing this ❤️❤️

Ayesha, you are the best.

You have written every little aspect so descriptively. And the way Your Anirudh made Trilochan kaka understand the deeper aspects of dangers of having physical relation at a young age was so 👏(I am unable to describe my feelings in words)and the story Ani used as example😭. I feel sorry for the girls of that time. They had to go through such barbaric and inhuman torures and sufferings. It's a sad reality. And you upholded every aspect of that social fault.👏👏

You and your story deserves standing ovations👏❤️

And the last bit, kaka realizing "the LOVE Ani was nurturing in his heart for Bondita"

was amazing too. ❤️❤️

Your stories are the best and most perfect in every way describable❤️❤️❤️

Love all the stories you write

Originally posted by: nims23

Ayesha.. 🤗

I know your both professions yaar 😆😆

Heyyy buddy... 😃

I am sure in real doctor’s journal must be very interesting .. we will discuss it someday 👍🏼

Definitely! It is interesting, as well as painful in many cases.

Ani will go on a guilt trip for sure yaar.. and that too for no fault of him .. but like in your story , Kaka is also in for a guilt trip!

I know yaar.. still there are so many areas where people don’t consider women more than a child bearing machine !! We can’t imagine those girl’s pain😒 people’s sick mentality towards women 🤬

Thats so true! Its high time that we realize that women are not "child-bearing machines!" Buht hogya.. aur yeh masla abhi tak tanng kerta hai loagon ko, tou uss time tou it must have been very difficult for women to survive happily. Ya phir shayad unka apna mindset bhi aise hi mold hogya hota hoga. 😕

There’s a law for a marriage at certain age in India but still there are some rural areas where child marriage is still exists !!

Same in my country. There is a law against child marriage, yet it happens! 😡

What? the case of a girl you wrote in this os was a real one? Omg.. that’s cruel 💔 poor girl .. I can’t even imagine what she must be went through
It’s a heartbreaking incident Ayesha .. we don’t know how many girls had went though this in that era

😭 I know 3 women who went through various such issues in their marital life. Aik bhi nahi, there are 3 that I know of. Abh socho ke kitna ziada hoga ratio iss terha ke maslon ka. I also came across a case which was so horrible that I was shaken. I will tell you in PM.

You also keep writing doctor sahiba 🤗🤗

🤗Thank you, my sweet friend. You are a blessing to have here. Cant thank you enough for all your support. ❤️

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Originally posted by: Cherryrose

It's really fantastic. Proper sex education is really important. So many lives are put in danger due to lack of sufficient knowledge. People should really stop shying away and talk freely about sex. But unfortunately it's still considered taboo in our society.👍🏼

Heyyy buddy... thank you so much for your comment. 🤗

You are absolutely right. We can't stress on this enough! There are so many issues that people face when they get married and begin their sexual life. Sex education and awareness of these "issues in the bed" must not be labeled as taboo at all. Instead, help and counseling should be readily available for everyone, and that can only be achieved if people learn about these things themselves too. Unhien khud hi nahi pata hoga ke kia normal hai aur kia normal nahi hai, jab woh khud hi educated aur informed nahi honge, tabb tak yeh sufferings aise hi chalti rahien gy. Unfortunately, all these things are happening around us, in this modern age and time.

Originally posted by: Ms.akabane

I finally got the time to read it.

And I have to say I was shook by that story about that girl..there was so much information that I didn't know about before so it also helped me personally. Thank you so much for sharing this ❤️❤️

🤗 Thank you soo much buddy for your comment.

I am glad that my OS was informative enough and it helped you learn about something that is usually kept under cover because of societal norms.

That so not right. These issues are important. Sex is a part of life. Like we get heart problems, stomach problems, etc.; similarly, people have sexual problems too. There should not be any sharam in discussing these things, and as I cannot stress enough, sex education is as important as we need information about other body functions! It's high time we stop considering it all a big fat taboo.

Thank you once again for liking my OS and appreciating the topic I chose. ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: AARIAAL_432

Ayesha, you are the best.

Aaaaaariiiiii! Hiiiii! 🤗❤️ Where have you been, buddy? Long time, no see... Hope all is well at your end?

You have written every little aspect so descriptively. And the way Your Anirudh made Trilochan kaka understand the deeper aspects of dangers of having physical relation at a young age was so 👏(I am unable to describe my feelings in words)and the story Ani used as example😭.

I get you, buddy... 🤗 I am glad that you liked it all... The story is actually real. It didn't happen in India though. I used that for the sake of my OS. However, these issues and these stories are happening around us in this day too. Unfortunately

I feel sorry for the girls of that time. They had to go through such barbaric and inhuman torures and sufferings. It's a sad reality. And you upholded every aspect of that social fault.👏👏

Yea, that's right. In those times, maybe the women also were not aware of what's right and what's wrong. But nowadays, there are a lot of sexual perversions also. And both boys and girls must know what is the right practice, and what can cause physical harm to their partner.

You and your story deserves standing ovations👏❤️

😳❤️Awww yaaar.... thank you so much...really! Buht dil se buht sara thankyou, buddy. 🤗❤️

And the last bit, kaka realizing "the LOVE Ani was nurturing in his heart for Bondita"

was amazing too. ❤️❤️

😳This reminds me of the lyrics of a beautiful song, Hassi bann gaye...

Pehchaante hi nahi,

abh loag tanha mujhe...

meri nigaahon mien bhi...

hain dhoondte tujhe...

😆 yehi haal kuch humare Aniruddh babu ka bhi hai is OS mien.

Your stories are the best and most perfect in every way describable❤️❤️❤️

Love all the stories you write

❤️❤️I am speechless and in awe... 😳 You are really very very kind and sweet. ❤️ Stay blessed, dear. Love you. 🤗

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