Rudhita OS|| Bondita Roy Choudhury - Queen of Hearts!! - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: NehaPadey_aj

Superb writing yaar

Kya likha h man ki saari bhadas nikal di

Imagining anirudh gusse me laal peela

It was 🥳 for you

Second part please

I want to read how ani explained menstruation to bondita

Thank U so much Neha😳(Assuming thats ur name.. Correct me if am wrong😆)

Tumne sahi pehchana ekdum🤣It was a bhadas nikalofying OS🤪

Im glad u enjoyed it!!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: nims23

Toto🤗

What an awesome os yaar.. whatever we won’t see in the show, you have penned it down in your os👍🏼👏

Wow.. a sensible ARC.. by looking at all those evidence he put two and two together chalo yaha pe to hamari khwaish puri hui😆😆 I liked your ARC who is used his barrister brain 😆

Good that at least he heard those evil duos convo I am pretty sure we are not going to get such a scene in the show do write how ani punishes them .. at least in your os we can see some logical scenes and dilogues!!

Over all very nice os Toto..👏👏🤗❤️

Nima🤗

Thank u so much ❤️

I too want smart and savage Ani back in the show😭Lets hope makers jaldi sunn le humari baat🤪

Show wali disspointment kam karne ke liye hi wrote the OS.. Ab fiction ke hi sahare guzara akrna padega thode din😛

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Toto123

Jyoti😳

Finally tu comment leke aa hi gayi🤗

Makers ne kya kar diya Ani ke saath dekh na... Logo ko fiction mein bhi Ani ka smart ho na hazam nahi ho raha😭( Its not just u.. Eveyone said d same thing🤣🤣)

Meine itne organs jeet liye😆Wow⭐️

Thank u so much !!!!

Han na...sab makers ki hi galti hai😆 they always end up with butchering ML's Character...

@bold han aap inko bech ke crorePati ban sakti hai🤣 infact makers ko replace kr sakti hain😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: screen22

This is really interesting but unable to understand the Hindi please can you translate because I really want to know the conversation between mother and daughter also what Anirudh had to say to both of them because all three need a payback for every crime against Bondita and her dear mother who as no idea what these three people are doing to rock the boat and also steal all money, jewellery and the respect that as been earn by all Choudhury In all the villages beyond.

someone please give a 👋 to all three and put behind bars for all life.

just my opinion

Hey buddy!!

I will surely try to tranlate it for u as soon as i get time😳

PS: U seem to be new here.. What can i call u?😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: mnm13

Toto🤗

I just finished one para and seeing this smart and intelligent anirudh, mere ankhon mai khushi ki aasu aagaye🤣

Kaash mere asli Jamai babu mai bhi itnaa dimag hota

Ruko baaki padhke comment karti hu.

First para pe itni excited hogayi ki could not wait to comment 😆

I m so happy tu itni khush huyi padke ,apni jamai ke dimaag ki wapsi dekh ke😳


Wow toto 👏👏

I loved Ani's monologue so much, i just hope teri os jaisa hota humara ani🥺

Koi nehi ban jayega 🤪

i loved it but there are some parts that i love much more ❤️

Like


Kyonki us nam ki khasiyat Roy Choudhury shabd mein nahi balki uske apne naam Bondita mein hai..

Yahi farak hai tum dono mein ..ki usey apni pehchan banane ke liye kisi RC naam ki jarurat nahi!!

Usney apni jagah khud banayi hai.. Aur maalkin hone ka auda bhi apni samjhdaari aur mehnat se kamaya hai.

Woh hai maalkin iss ghar ki ...lekin uss chabiyon ke gucche ke wajah se nahi..balki iss liye kyonki usne har ek insaan ke dil mein apni jagah banayi hai...sirf iss ghar pe nahi...lekin iss ghar ke har ek sadasya ke dil pe maalkiyat hai uski!!


Of course i knew u would love to hear ur beti ki tareef🤪Maa ka dil khush ho gaya hoga na👍🏼

Bon deserves all d tareef indeed❤️

This is so true 👍🏼 and you wrote it so beautifully 👏 keep writing dear😳

Munnu🤗

Tu ne padha OS .. Im so Glad😳

Aur tujhe acha bhi laga... I m double glad🤪

My replies in italics👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Toto123

Yes abhi Bon ko side line karke .. thoda ani pe concentrate kare makers🤪

Ani ka brain wapas lana track..

Ani ke mood swings ka reason track...

Ani ka anger managemnt track.....

🤣🤣


Usko anger management ka koi issue nahi hai..

Uske brain mei chemical locha hai... Jaha ghussa aana chahiye nahi ata aur jaha chup baithna chahiye waha bak bak shuru ho jata hai

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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Toto123

Prii🤗

Kitni achi bacchi hai tu I already know🤪

Sabki mann ke shanti ke liye hi likha hai OS😆🤣

I Know everyone is suffering like me😭

I thought lets do some Punya😎

Thank u for d tareef⭐️

Sirf thank you se mera kucchhh nehi hone wala😉mujhe iska part 2 bhi chahiye 😭

Pleeaaaaaasssseeeee

Maan jao naa 😊

Show pe kya milega uska kuch vadosa nehi

So you write 😃😉

And that too zaldiseee 😛

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Posted: 3 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Toto123

Munnu🤗

Tu ne padha OS .. Im so Glad😳

Aur tujhe acha bhi laga... I m double glad🤪

My replies in italics👍🏼

mai OS padhti hu 😳 (agar they are not about ani bon prem katha😆)

I loved your dialogues, show mai jaise hota hai tune usse similar rakkha👍🏼 that's what made it more believable 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

i wish yeh sachme hojaye

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Posted: 3 years ago
#40

This is awesome dear 👏👏👏👏👏👏

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