Rudhita OS|| Bondita Roy Choudhury - Queen of Hearts!! - Page 3

Toto🤗

What an awesome os yaar.. whatever we won’t see in the show, you have penned it down in your os👍🏼👏

Wow.. a sensible ARC.. by looking at all those evidence he put two and two together chalo yaha pe to hamari khwaish puri hui😆😆 I liked your ARC who is used his barrister brain 😆

Good that at least he heard those evil duos convo I am pretty sure we are not going to get such a scene in the show do write how ani punishes them .. at least in your os we can see some logical scenes and dilogues!!

Over all very nice os Toto..👏👏🤗❤️

This is really interesting but unable to understand the Hindi please can you translate because I really want to know the conversation between mother and daughter also what Anirudh had to say to both of them because all three need a payback for every crime against Bondita and her dear mother who as no idea what these three people are doing to rock the boat and also steal all money, jewellery and the respect that as been earn by all Choudhury In all the villages beyond.

someone please give a 👋 to all three and put behind bars for all life.

just my opinion

Finally, unresd in page 2...!!😉

Toto🤗

I just finished one para and seeing this smart and intelligent anirudh, mere ankhon mai khushi ki aasu aagaye🤣

Kaash mere asli Jamai babu mai bhi itnaa dimag hota

Ruko baaki padhke comment karti hu.

First para pe itni excited hogayi ki could not wait to comment 😆

Wow toto 👏👏

I loved Ani's monologue so much, i just hope teri os jaisa hota humara ani🥺

Koi nehi ban jayega 🤪

i loved it but there are some parts that i love much more ❤️

Like

Kyonki us nam ki khasiyat Roy Choudhury shabd mein nahi balki uske apne naam Bondita mein hai..

Yahi farak hai tum dono mein ..ki usey apni pehchan banane ke liye kisi RC naam ki jarurat nahi!!

Usney apni jagah khud banayi hai.. Aur maalkin hone ka auda bhi apni samjhdaari aur mehnat se kamaya hai.

Woh hai maalkin iss ghar ki ...lekin uss chabiyon ke gucche ke wajah se nahi..balki iss liye kyonki usne har ek insaan ke dil mein apni jagah banayi hai...sirf iss ghar pe nahi...lekin iss ghar ke har ek sadasya ke dil pe maalkiyat hai uski!!

This is so true 👍🏼 and you wrote it so beautifully 👏 keep writing dear😳

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Res😊

I have read it but unres nai karungi just to ... you know...

annoy 👍🏼

Unres:

Okay so finally mere boss ne time de diya comment karne ka 😭

Yaar partner thank you soooo much for writing this! This was much much needed 😈

I liked the way Ani was SENSIBLE enough to understand what was wrong with Bondi 👍🏼

This can only happen in fiction 🥱

Yes partner... Abb toh shayad fictions ke sahare hi we have to be happy😭

Sampoo 🤬 and Mami 🤬

Both these 😡 are kalank on being a woman! 🤢👎🏼Mami should have been sent to jail after selling Bon off to HM 😡 dekh lo bachaa ke kya hua 😭😡 I hate these two 😡 tune unke dialogues likhe kaise partner?? mujhse toh padhe bhi nahi jaa rhe the I was so angry 🤬

U know ki How much I hate them tooo🤢But dialogues likhne hi pade... maa vrata ani ko kaise belive hota Sampoo ka sach!!! Uske muh se suna .. yab jaake bulb jala ani ka😃

Okay! Let me calm down!

Thank God kahi toh Ani ne sunn liya inki baate 👏🥳 varna toh ye insaan kaan me tel daalke baitha rehta hai 👍🏼

Loved how he band bjaaoed Sampoo 👏 Kamaal! Dhamaal! Bemisaaal!🥳 aisehi I want him to do in the show as well aur agar ye na hua toh 😡🤬

I loved these lines :

Mujhe likh ke bhi utna hi maja aya jitna tumhe padhke🥳

Roy choudhury kehlane ka shouk hai na tumhe bohot..par ye samajhlo ki tum jo bhi kar lo lekin BONDITA ROY CHOUDHURY ke barabar kabhi nahi bann sakti..

Kyonki us nam ki khasiyat Roy Choudhury shabd mein nahi balki uske apne naam Bondita mein hai..

👏👏👏🥳

Overall bohot maza aaya padhke 😳 Now I am even more eager for this band bajaana in show as well

Thank u for d tareef rimi🤗❤️

My replies in Italics😳

Originally posted by: Home786

Shrads...🤗

Wow!! Kya likha hai tumne behen.. It's just wonderful...

Everything is just so beautiful.. Especially the dialogues is so apt and perfect.. 10/10 for diaogues...👏👏

Khash Ani ke paas aise dimaag show mein hota... Me want this to happen in show too.. But he wants to be dumb na.. Usko sirf last moment mein Hehsaas hota hai dimag hone ka..

Padhke acha laga.. Kya dhoya hai Ani ne Sampoo ko...

I loved your dialogues re... Perfect❤️❤️..

That dialogue where he praises Bondu's name Bondita Roy choudhary is my favorite.. It's just have another feel... Superb..❤️👍🏼

Shradu such a beautiful Os.. Much needed work...You're truly a great writer..

I want you write an Os on how Ani consoles Bondu.. How he brings her out of darkness in which she is submerging.. Please likh do na behen..😳

Hey shaheen🤗❤️

I m so glad u liked it so much😳

Yes Ani ka dimaag sirf fiction mein hi dikhta abb bass😭

Sabko thodi khushi mile sampoo ki band bajte dekh .. issi liye toh likha tha OS🤪.Im so glad my purpose was fulfilled🤣

I"ll try to write next OS too shaheen!!

Thank u so much⭐️

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Real ho ya unreal.... Maza bohot aya 😆

Kabhi kabhi lagta hai bhad mei jaye menstruation track... Pehle "Ani got his brains" track lao

Yes abhi Bon ko side line karke .. thoda ani pe concentrate kare makers🤪

Ani ka brain wapas lana track..

Ani ke mood swings ka reason track...

Ani ka anger managemnt track.....

🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Totooo Hiii!🤗🤗

I am traveling aur abhi airport per hun between flights. Socha forum ka chakkar lagaya jaye and my good luck, I got to see your OS!👍🏼❤️

Very well written, buddy. 👍🏼 Too good. I was like..

yeh Ani show mien bhi kaash apne kaan aur dimagh khol le thoda tou kuch aqal ajaye gadhay mien. 🤪

It was so nicely written that I wanted to read more. 😆 If possible, please write about how Ani would tackle Bondu's issue and how he will comfort her. 😳😊

Also, there was nothing OTT anywhere. Ani jab phatay ga tou aise hi bolay ga. 😆 Mager gadha hai, iss liye phatnay mien abhi time hai aur humien iska maa jaap aur baqi bakwas bardasht kerna paday ga. 🤢

Lastly, thank you soo much for such a wonderful OS. 🤗

Hey Ayesha🤗

Thanks for reading even during ur busy schedule buddy❤️

Ani ke dimaag ka bomb blast is much awaited🤪Im so happy u liked the story

Originally posted by: Priiii

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Nehi karunga 🤣 acchi bacchi hu na😛 os padke jitni shanti mili ahhaaa

Man to dhitang dhitang ho gaya, atleast kahi to Ani ke pass dimag hain 🤗

Magar saari ke saari galti aplogpki hain

Aplog hi reason ho episode acchi na hone ki

Arrreh kya karu! Itni shundar shundar lilhtoho aur expectation to asmaam pouch jati hain 😊

Fir episode main kya milta hain? ghanta😊sampooMa🤢

Iska part 2 bhi likhdo pleasseeeeee

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Show main milega bhi ya nehi uska pata nehi, tum zaroor likhna 🤗

Prii🤗

Kitni achi bacchi hai tu I already know🤪

Sabki mann ke shanti ke liye hi likha hai OS😆🤣

I Know everyone is suffering like me😭

I thought lets do some Punya😎

Thank u for d tareef⭐️

Originally posted by: rikara94

Toto darling main aa gyi comment ke sath🤗

Btw it's awesome😳

Iss OS mein hi sahi but finally Ani got some brain😆 waise digest nahi ho raha tha but still🤣

Maza aya the way he sunayofy his so called sampoo maahhh😆

I just loved that dialogue where he said, BONDITA ROY CHOUDHURY ki barabari kabhi nahi sakti. Kyunki uss nam ki khasiyat Roy Choudhury shabd mein nahi infact uske apne naam Bondita mein hai.

Dil, jigar, kidney, lungs sab jeet liya😆

❤️

P.s. I have posted the next OS now itcs your turn to make VM that...if possible 😛

Jyoti😳

Finally tu comment leke aa hi gayi🤗

Makers ne kya kar diya Ani ke saath dekh na... Logo ko fiction mein bhi Ani ka smart ho na hazam nahi ho raha😭( Its not just u.. Eveyone said d same thing🤣🤣)

Meine itne organs jeet liye😆Wow⭐️

Thank u so much !!!!