Jyoti🤗beautiful,bohot badiya👏
Sorry for the late feedback , too many pending practicals,projects and assignments 😭😭
The last part was so heart warming😳When he kissed her,my Latent heat of fusion fell steeply and I melted .Still not solidified 😆🤪
And how perfectly the song lyrics have matched with the story .Keep writing❤️
The blooming love between them are soo cute amd your description with this song is sooo beautiful 🖤 and that dance you described was devine 🖤
How come I saw it soo late 🤦♀️sorry yaar
But it was soo beautiful one dear
Next one jaldi se de do
Lovely os Jyoti🤗
Your description of their slowly blooming love is really beautiful 👏 even though both of them still hasn’t confessed their feelings but feelings are there.. it’s about time now slowly but steadily they are taking baby steps to reach the peak of their love.. their feelings are nicely described Jyoti.. good job dear 🤗🤗
Waiting for more one shots written by you
Hayeeeeeee... i got lost while reading this os ❤️
what an amazing piece of work dear. the way you have described their feelings superbbbb. the dance, eye locks and then the hug ❤️ loved their cute nok jok even at the end the cute nok jhok over the rosogulla was so cute.
Waiting for the next chapter of this os. post soon please.
Jyoti🤗beautiful,bohot badiya👏
Sorry for the late feedback , too many pending practicals,projects and assignments 😭😭
The last part was so heart warming😳When he kissed her,my Latent heat of fusion fell steeply and I melted .Still not solidified 😆🤪
And how perfectly the song lyrics have matched with the story .Keep writing❤️
Thank you so much dear🤗
Aww busy bee😆 hope abhi complete ho gye ho sare projects😳
@bold- kya baat hai kya baat hai sahi😆
Will update soon..stay tuned!
The blooming love between them are soo cute amd your description with this song is sooo beautiful 🖤 and that dance you described was devine 🖤
How come I saw it soo late 🤦♀️sorry yaar
But it was soo beautiful one dear
Next one jaldi se de do
Thank you so much prii🤗
Glad that you are loving the series
Han i will.update next one soon...till then🤗
Lovely os Jyoti🤗
Your description of their slowly blooming love is really beautiful 👏 even though both of them still hasn’t confessed their feelings but feelings are there.. it’s about time now slowly but steadily they are taking baby steps to reach the peak of their love.. their feelings are nicely described Jyoti.. good job dear 🤗🤗
Waiting for more one shots written by you
Thank you so much Nimu darling🤗
Yup they haven't confessed yet. But to show their growing feelings, this part was needed and yeah Bon toh already loves him, but Ani hasn't realized his feelings yet but I think woh din dur nahi hai abhi
So glad that you are finding it beautiful...it's actually means a lot when someone understand the same emotions the way I/we want to portray❤️
Hmmm next one? What about the sad one?😳
Hayeeeeeee... i got lost while reading this os ❤️
what an amazing piece of work dear. the way you have described their feelings superbbbb. the dance, eye locks and then the hug ❤️ loved their cute nok jok even at the end the cute nok jhok over the rosogulla was so cute.
Waiting for the next chapter of this os. post soon please.
Hayeeeee sachi?😆😆
Thank you so much jojyu
That nok jhok part was interesting nahi?😆
So glad that you are enjoying this❤️
Will try to update next one really soon😳
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