Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Thank you for the PM Jyoti...! I hadn't checked the MF in a while....

It was amazingly written ❤️

I have always found it a little difficult to pen down the FL's POV but you seem to be a pro here! I completely lost myself in those words and was really disappointed that it ended

Thank you such a beautiful piece. I enjoyed reading this

Thank you so much Akshu🤗

And to be honest it was easy for me to write His Pov then Hers, As I stared with his side of story. So base of the story main already set kar chuki thi and her side story mein main aisa kya dalu jo unique and pure dikhe... Fir mujhe yeh song mind mein aya and with the flow of song started writing and it turned out like this😳 otherwise I thought 'Yeh Aina' song for her side but after listening Hasi ban gaye, i couldn't not stop myself 😆 and it suited with her pov really well.


And yeah don't be disappointed...i will post next one really soo .


P.s. which right Bodi or baudi (for sis in law)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Doc.love

Awwwiee😳

Such a beautiful OS.

Both are marvellous, but 2nd OS mien jo end mien Ani smiles when she touches his face...that has allll my heart!❤️

So profound...so powerful. What they have is truly special. And your excellent choice of songs make these writeups more beautiful. ❤️

Thank you so much for blessing us all with the pleasure of these beautiful one shots.

🤗


Thank you Aisha🤗

His smile when she hold his hand was mine fav part also😳

Yeah main na bahut choosey hoon songs ko le ke....and also music is my❤️ so concept ke hisab se main song choose krti hoon and jo next os hai woh maine song ke hisab se concept bnaya h😆

Will post next soon😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

Hum bhi huwa karte they ek zamane mein😆😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

Hum bhi huwa karte they ek zamane mein😆😳

Are wahhh😆 glad to know😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: rikara94

Thank you so much Akshu🤗

And to be honest it was easy for me to write His Pov then Hers, As I stared with his side of story. So base of the story main already set kar chuki thi and her side story mein main aisa kya dalu jo unique and pure dikhe... Fir mujhe yeh song mind mein aya and with the flow of song started writing and it turned out like this😳 otherwise I thought 'Yeh Aina' song for her side but after listening Hasi ban gaye, i couldn't not stop myself 😆 and it suited with her pov really well.


And yeah don't be disappointed...i will post next one really soo .


P.s. which right Bodi or baudi (for sis in law)

Well I guess et the struggle to write HER pov.

It is spelt as Boudi. Thats what I found on Google.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely OS again Jyoti 🤗

I just love this song soo much and the lyrics were perfect to set the mood ❤️

I love how you are writing these OS based on songs


Coming to Rudi..

I loved the way Bon teased Ani to drag him to court 😎

And Ani's reply ki 'milte hain court me' sunke mai blush kyu ki I dont know 🤣☺️

I love their bonding so much ☺️

Ekdum warm and cozy feeling I got when Bon was lost in her thoughts and he was asleep

And awwww he smiled at her touch ☺️


I loved it jyoti 🤗

Mere paas song list lambi si hai... but when someone asks me a song I go blank 🤣 but abhi I'm listening to Monta Re from Lootera so I'm suggesting that 🤪


Waiting for the next OS


PS: chapter index post pe the link for this OS is not working usko theek kar do 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Lovely OS again Jyoti 🤗


Thank you Rimi darling🤗


I just love this song soo much and the lyrics were perfect to set the mood ❤️


Haina I too love this song. Manti hai fir meri choice of songs ko🤪 *flipping my hair* 😆


I love how you are writing these OS based on songs


Again *flipping my hair*😆


Coming to Rudi..

I loved the way Bon teased Ani to drag him to court 😎


The way he shout on her bat bat pe, I want her to drag him to court one day


And Ani's reply ki 'milte hain court me' sunke mai blush kyu ki I dont know 🤣☺️


Hain? Aisa kya tha uss reply mein Jo you started blushing 🤪


I love their bonding so much ☺️

Ekdum warm and cozy feeling I got when Bon was lost in her thoughts and he was asleep

And awwww he smiled at her touch ☺️


That was my favourite part😳


I loved it jyoti 🤗

Mere paas song list lambi si hai... but when someone asks me a song I go blank 🤣 but abhi I'm listening to Monta Re from Lootera so I'm suggesting that 🤪


Same here😆 I too go blank when someone asks me

I have never heard the song you are suggesting. But now I will listen this for sure😳


Waiting for the next OS


Aaj rat ko *Dekha hazaro dafa aapko*


PS: chapter index post pe the link for this OS is not working usko theek kar do 😳


Yeah I will check that. Thanks for letting me know😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#39

I would just say....

AWWWWWWW

It was cute❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: AK_2010

I would just say....

AWWWWWWW

It was cute❤️

Thank you Akshu🤗

Glad that you liked it❤️

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