Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mayurrana1299g

❤️

Beautiful one

Such a refreshing to read 🤗


Thanks you❤️

P.s. I saw you on wattpad also...are you the same Mayurrana?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: 7APK

Awesome 😍😘😍😘


Thank you ji💃❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priiii

Aaaaaaaa it was sooo soothing 😍😍😍

And u have written it amaizingly...

Gib ur wattpad link also 👀

Priiii🤗

Thank you so much❤️

JyotiSachdeva this is my watty link...go and check😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Jyoti 🤗

Sorry behen mai zara slow reader hu so I take time to read everything achhe se 😳

Finally got some time today and it was a beautiful and very touching OS 🤗❤️


The song is amazing which you have used in this... really suits the duo

I want to see something like this in the show where Bondi puts balm on his forehead ☺️


Loved how you expressed Ani's emotions in words 👍🏼


It was really amazing jyoti.. waiting for the next part.😎

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Jyoti 🤗

Sorry behen mai zara slow reader hu so I take time to read everything achhe se 😳


Rimi🤗

Me too slow in reading stuff😆


Finally got some time today and it was a beautiful and very touching OS 🤗❤️


Thank you ji❤️


The song is amazing which you have used in this... really suits the duo


I was listening this song and then an idea came into mind...bas according to lyrics situation dal di😆


I want to see something like this in the show where Bondi puts balm on his forehead ☺️


Haina? But rangeela kab dega...dega bhi ya nahi😔 isiliye socha khud hi likh ke shonk pura karlu🤣


Loved how you expressed Ani's emotions in words 👍🏼


Thank you again😳 and next will be of her side


It was really amazing jyoti.. waiting for the next part.😎


Will post next OS soon🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

I just love the way you you discribe your story with a song ❤️ I even played hasi ban gayi in background while reading it ❤️

Your style is so subtle and smooth I'm just in love with it. No doubt this musical os series gonna be one of my fav ❤️

And I do have a song suggestion in mind 😉 wo main tujhe dm me batayungi 😆

But for this one ❤️ you deserve 1badam wali 8 handi roshogolla 👏


Btw iss part ka first react and comment mera hain, yeeeaaaaaaaa🥳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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You will make even the sternest and most practical people believe in love over and over again with your powerful weapon of writing such extraordinarily surreal stories!


I loved how intricately and perfectly you described her newly developed feelings ,the way she would give her life ,her Everything to see him happy, would practically leave nothing undone to put a smile on his face!


Such profound emotions and feelings you've penned,I think torn and tattered hearts will be healed!

Keep writing!God bless you❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: rikara94

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Thank you ji🤗

I will post next one soon❤️

You're most welcome Miss Rikara!

Btw are you a fan of Om and gauri!?😳😳Your username screams of them🤗😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Such a beautiful OS Jyoti❤️

The way u potrayed bonditas emotions was so great👏

Keep writing...waiting for more😳

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