The unsaid emotions - A Rudhita OS (part 2 updated on pg 6) - Page 7

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

Bholi Sana 🤗

It was beautiful ❤️ Jitna rulaya tha last part me, isme I'm equally happy 🥳

Loved the way you have penned their emotions on reunion... 👍🏼

And last kiss mai 3 - 4 baar padh li 🤣🤣 it was bheeerryyy Hawwwtwa 😳☺️

Thanks for writing this part sana ❤️🤗

Thank you behena❤️

Happy now k tujhe achaa laga🤗

Tu nehii sudhregii.. Itna simple se likha tha phir v tujhe hawwwt laga🤪🤣

But thank god at least kisiko toh hot laga🤪😆

Welcome🤗❤️

Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Apu it was wonderful Specifically the 1st part, I got emotional reading that ❤️ Do write more plz. Yesterday my mood was off n this OS really helped me thank you for that 🤗

Thank you so much Arpi❤️

Haan I had written it as one part only.. But many wanted to read a happy ending so I wrote part 2. 😆

I am happy my story helped in lightening your mood.❤️😳

Yess will write more.. 🤗

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Apsana ❤️ Aaj dikhi nah 😳 Kal v dikhungi 😆❤️

Tum eid ka chand ho chuki ho ek do baar dikh jao kafi hai🤪😆

Part 2 padhi ki nehi????

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Thank you so much for writing another chapter 🤗

Welcome Nupur❤️

Originally posted by: Home786

Will read and reply you soon behen.. 🤗

Okk.. will wait🤗

Originally posted by: Doc.love

Areeeeyyyyy! 2nd part aaj padha miene iska! 😕 Late hogai yar! But man! Kitna accha likkha hai yar! 👍🏼👏 Kitne acchay se un dono ki emotions describe kiye... I could feel each and every emotion. I absolutely loved this bold Bondita... Patibabu buddhu rehne walay thay ager Bon humari khud hi step na lety! 😆

All in all, superb. Sakun mil gaya padh ker... Thank you so much for wiritng such an amazing fanfiction for us. 🤗

Last time you had asked me for the link of the OS that I have written here... I am sharing the link now. Itna accha tou nahi hai like yours, but it is about her menstrual cycle tou I really want the makers to touch that important aspect of her growing up too... 😊 Abh makers dikhayein na dikhayein, miene socha mien hi likh dety hun...😆

Chalo, here is the link. Do let me know jab padho tou. 😊

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/barrister-babu/5191267/the-growing-up-conundrums-a-rudhita-os

Ayesha 🤗

I was thinking tum kahan gayab ho gayii😆

Haaan sare readers chahate the part 2 toh likhna hi tha... And I happy that it made you happy❤️

Haan maine socha patibabu toh buddhu hai toh bold Boni likh deti hun🤪😆

Woww I wanted to read somthing on this and you have written it. Achha hai k nehi yeh toh mein hin bataungii.. 😳

Will read soon and let you know🤗

Appu

Late ho gayi main is bar padhne mein

It was a beautiful chapter I felt sukoon after reading it as you gave a proper and indeed a satisfying closure to their longings for each other

I was blown away by Bon's bold avatar..Her actions gave her Patibabu 440 volt ka jhatka..

I laughed at the part where Ani immediately said "Ab bura nahi lagta" when Bon inquired about the ghurnoo thing..🤣It took him no time to melt by such a simple gesture of Bon..☺️Uska guilt and all tel lene chala gaya..🤣

Ekdum bindaas nikli Bon tumhari tarah..

The confession part was penned down beautifully

The last scene had me blushing and I was going all gaga over them..

Kudos for writing such a brilliant masterpiece!! 😳

Beautifully written and so heart warming that the moment of 3 years away was gone and back on the docks where saying goodbye was so heart breaking but time had stood still for them with 3 year’s grown within them.💔

Bondita had grow up in the last 3 years and she can read and understand her pati Babu tell him that she only 💕 him.

how sweet it is to be 🥰.

please if you have time translate the following for me, I think I understood but not 100%, so if you can

Then she continued, "wese aapke pehele prashn ka jawab hai mere paas..aap se kuch zaruri baat karni thi isliye toh ana pada mujhe."

And Anirudh expecting it to be something about study was ready to clear her doubts but what she said made his heart to shatter as he felt his worst fear coming true.

Noticing every expressions of his she went on," aap ko yaad hai naa patibabu 3 saal pehele aapne mujhse ek wada liya tha. Toh mein chahati hun ki ab us wade ko pura karun. Mujhe aapse kuch kehena hai.."

Anirudh closed his eyes as she completed her sentence but then masking a fake smile in his face he said," bolo Bondita kya kehena chahati ho?? "

ab mein woh choti si Bondita nehi rahi patibabu 21 saal ki hun mein..ab toh mujhe hak hai naa apne bare mein sochne ka" and she said huskily,"toh apko nehi janna mere dil mein kya hai??"

said in pain, "in ankon mein bahut dard chupaye rakhe hai apne patibabu woh bhi najane kitne saalon se."

He couldn't belive what just happened and Bondita laughed and said, "buddhu hai aap patibabu apko kya laga meri jaruri baat kya hogi.."

And staring at him intensly she continued, "jab se pyar ka matlab samjha hai na tabse ye Bondita Roy Choudhury sirf apse pyar kiya hai patibabu.. Utna hi jitna pyar aap mujhse karte hain" and tear dropped from her eyes. And with this she hugged him tight resting her head in his heart.

par patibabu apka mujhse dur bhagne ki wajah kya thi??"

Anirudh sighed and said in serious tone, "humari umra Bondita aur tum toh mere hi ankho k samne badi hui ho.. Toh jab bhi tumhare bare mein esa wesa kuch sochta tha toh khud ko bura lagta tha.. Mujhe lag raha tha shayed mein kuch galat ka.." and Bondita put her finger in his lips shutting him and asked with a frown,"apne biwi koh ghurna galat lagta tha apko patibabu??" Anirudh smiling at her cuteness, pulled her cheeks and said,"lekin ab nehi lagta.."

A very big thank you🥳

Originally posted by: Aashna05

Lovely!❤️

Thank you 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Scarlett_15

Appu

Late ho gayi main is bar padhne mein

Aur mein tumhara intezaar kar rahi thi🤗

It was a beautiful chapter I felt sukoon after reading it as you gave a proper and indeed a satisfying closure to their longings for each other

Thank you ❤️❤️

I was blown away by Bon's bold avatar..Her actions gave her Patibabu 440 volt ka jhatka..

Pati kuch nehi karta toh Patni ko hi karna pdega naa🤪

I laughed at the part where Ani immediately said "Ab bura nahi lagta" when Bon inquired about the ghurnoo thing..🤣It took him no time to melt by such a simple gesture of Bon..☺️Uska guilt and all tel lene chala gaya..🤣

Mauke pe chhake marne hai isko🤣☺️

Ekdum bindaas nikli Bon tumhari tarah..

Mein bindaas🤪😆

The confession part was penned down beautifully

The last scene had me blushing and I was going all gaga over them..

Kudos for writing such a brilliant masterpiece!! 😳

Thank you so much meri fifa behen❤️🤗

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