Girl! This was so intense..! 💔
My heart feels heavy after reading this. Well done Sana... You have made me all emotional about Bon's education. Things like these raise our expectations from the show... I want something like this now😭
Thank you so much Akshu❤️❤️
Okk no idea about the show but yes I am happy that I pleased you with the story. 🤗
Pleaseee pleasee don't end it here!!It's so so amazing!You're such a wonderful writer,each and every emotion , movement,situation has been depicted with such sheer intricacy and profuse detailing that I could nearly visualize my mind.Anirudh's inhibitions and his heart rending sacrifice for his beloved Bondita was so alluringly described!It leaves me crave for more,rather infinity !Hope this doesn't abruptly end at their getting drifted apart!
Hey dear what can I call u??? 😳
Thank you so much for this lovely comment.❤️ I honestly have no idea that this story is worth of such reviews.❤️
@bold I can't promise but yes will think about it. 🤗
Originally posted by: Doc.love
Hi Apsana...
Hii Ayesha🤗
First of all welcome to the forum❤️
We dont know each other as I am new to the forum and I have just posted an OS here before. I havent had the chance to interact with all the amazing people here, but I am so glad that I got the opportunity to read this beautiful write up by you today! It was so beautifully written.. every emotion you described, every moment you mentioned... Sab kuch dil chhoo gaya!❤️👍🏼
Very very good!❤️❤️
Thank you so much for loving the story.❤️
I am a very greedy reader. Buht jaldi khatam hogya aur mera dil nahi bhara... 😳 If you ever feel like tou please do continue this story... You know... I would honestly love a scene where she returns from London after 3 years and hes the first person who meets her at the dock! Just like he promised.
Also, I would want more exploration in that insecure promise that he took from her ke kabhi bhi koi baat kerni ho tou be-jhijhak ker lena. I think he feels that she may fall for another person once she gets to know what Love is... Its so sad that he doesnt know that she already loves him with all her heart. 😊 Haye!
Heyy it is making me to think about some ideas for the upcoming.😆 I am not sure but will try to write one more part.👍🏼
Chalo ager time milay tou do write more, dear. 👍🏼🤗
If you want you can read my other stories too.. It's in the index. 😳
Love,
Ayesha
waiting to have some more interaction with you.❤️
My replies in bold. 🤗
By the way you told about posting an os. I think I have missed it. It's not in the index too I think. I want to read it.😳
Can you share me the link???🤗
Hii🤗
Aaj kal aap kaha gayab hai??? 😆
Thanks by the way❤️
Not sure about writing one more part. But if I write will pm you for sure. 😳
😭😭😭😭
anirudh 🤗😭😭
it's beautiful❤️
but i am sad, it feels like actually they got separated again....let me go and cry in a corner😭
Munnu🤗
Sorry behen tujhe rula diya.. 😒🤪
Thanks wese❤️❤️
Itna mat ro thik hai..😆😆
Originally posted by: madhutanu
What a beautiful write up dear...made me emotional too picturing the scene...plus write the second part after 3years gap where as promised he will be waiting exactly at the same place and her asking what is in her heart without backing out as she promised 😍.... and do write more....thank you for writing something precious ...
Thank you so much Madhu❤️❤️
Actually I am getting so much request for writing one more part. 😆
I think I have to write now.. 🤪
Thanks again🤗
Originally posted by: Scarlett_15
Ah, jeez, my heart hurts now. 😒Your sadistic writing broke my heart and made me sob, you horrible guava brain.😆
Behenaa tujhe rula diya maine😒😆
Jokes apart, this story is written so well Apsana👏 The sadness/despair is well depicted; you have an excellent gift of carving and weaving emotions into your narrations.⭐️
Well done, my friend, well done👍🏼
Thanks yaar❤️ I was clueless how the story was going to be. But now I think I did justice.😳
(And now please excuse me while I cry due to my feel.!😭Very well written, I must emphasize, and very sad. Still I really enjoyed reading this. You have a gift of putting hard thoughts into words)😳
Ye koi gift nehii Rudhita kliye obsession hai🤪😆. Okk I am not so habituated to so much praise actually.🤗
I want you to continue the story as I want to know what exactly is going to happen after 3 yrs and will Bon find Ani standing on the same dock as promised by the latter😃
Are isse likhne k wakt socha nehi tha.. Ye acha hoga ar koi 2nd part bhi chahega😆
Lekin sab puch rahe hai ab. Now I think I have to give it a second thought.🤪
Thanks once again 🤗
My replies in bold👍🏼
Oh my god! I can't believe i was this late in reading this beautiful o.s. What an absolutely amazing portrayal of broad spectrum of emotions. Oh my god, i love love looooovvveed reading it. This o.s is absolutely true to it's heading "unsaid emotions". You nailed it Apsana, 👏 in depicting such intense, unsaid emotions in a piece of written art.
Kudos to you🤗
Soma🤗
Thank you so much yaar❤️❤️
Bahut soch k ye title rakha tha.. Now I am glad that you understood the meaning. 😳
Mu bhabinthli e story ete bhala lgiba boli.. 😆
Odia odia😆🤗
🤗😆it's ok. now i am fine 😳Originally posted by: Apsana14
Munnu🤗
Sorry behen tujhe rula diya.. 😒🤪
Thanks wese❤️❤️
Itna mat ro thik hai..😆😆
keep writing dear. i don't read FFs , so OS and drabbles hi likhna 🤣🤣
just joking🤪
Originally posted by: Apsana14
Soma🤗
Thank you so much yaar❤️❤️
Bahut soch k ye title rakha tha.. Now I am glad that you understood the meaning. 😳
Mu bhabinthli e story ete bhala lgiba boli.. 😆
Odia odia😆🤗
Arey bhala kemti habani... 😳When a writer puts her heart and soul into something the outcome will definitely be fruitful.❤️
Indeed odia odia😉🤗
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