Ebong Tarpor (Episode 2 Pg 2)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi dear BSFians.....πŸ˜›


Well, as me & Raisu were discussing the other day that our forum is so dull because we don't have anything to look forward for. So this is our minor attempt to live it up a little. This a Daily Serial for you written by moi(the_rain aka Bristy) and amar shonapakhi Raisu(Jai & Bani aka Raisa). If you are interested, we'll update all the weekdays just like a daily soap and the weekends will be off day. Please let us know how do you feel about this. One or two words of appreciation is always good for health. Hope you'll Enjoy our Natok - Ebong Tarpor πŸ˜ƒ



Ebong Tarpor



Episode One



The peace of the morning was broken by the shrill alarm. It kept going on and on. She opened one of her eyes and grabbed her phone. Pressing the 'snooze' button, she covered her face with the blanket yet again. After 5 minutes the heartless alarm started ringing again. She groaned and pressed the snooze button for the 5th time. Soon the alarm was ringing again. This time with a determined expression she pressed the stop button and went to sleep happily.




"Prema, get up!" her mom entered the room. "You will be late for class. GET UP!" she pulled the covers away much to Prema's annoyance. "Cmn, Ma, only 5 more minutes." She tried to grab back the blanket but her mother didn't let go, "Uhu…you'll miss the first class if you sleep more. You told me last night that you've got an important class today morning."


The words worked like magic for her. Prema jumped up in the bed, how could she forget? Rubbing her sleepy eyes she got up from the bed and went towards the washroom, swaying her long braid behind her.



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"Baba Probal, ghum theke utho."(Probal, my son, wake up.) His mother said as she shook him. "You'll be late for your class!"




"Ma! I hate to go to class." He moaned and covered his face with a pillow.




"I know son, but you have to go. You can't miss a class." His mother coaxed.




"Why Ma?" he made a sad face.



"Because you are the teacher, dear!" his mother patted his head. He sat up in the bed reluctantly, "But ma..you won't believe those girls. They keep staring. They don't know staring is bad habit."




"Aww..they can't help it. After all, my son is so handsome." She laughed.




"Ma!" Probal blushed being highly embarrassed, "tumi je ki bolo na bolo."



...............



"Hi my dear dostos…..what's up?" Cheered Snigdha. She flicked her hair and sat down on the front seat. "Haye…I'm dying to meet my handsome hunk today."


"Not your handsome hunk, Our handsome hunk Snig." Corrected Chaiti, rolling her eyes. Lira nodded in agreement, "Yes Snig, you should say Our hunk."




"What a dumb luck." Saikat sneered. "Emnitei 120 joner modhdhe 23 jon meye, tar upor shob gula jodi Sir ke dekhe pagol hoy, amader ki hobe?"




Snigdha snorted and pretended not to hear Saikat. Saikat smirked, "M'aam, I'm not regretting the fact that you are drooling over Sir. Who cares about you?"




Snigdha flared up and was about to explode but stopped as she saw Prema entering the classroom. "Here comes Miss Know it all."




Prema adjusted her glasses a bit and made a face. She wanted to reply back but just then she heard the deep male voice behind him, "I don't think blocking the door is a good manner, Ms Prema"




So, what do you all think of this? Should we contiue πŸ˜†..Any kind of suggestion, advise, comment is welcome with open arms πŸ˜›

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I am so happy that you started it!!!

And I must say you have done a great job!!

I'll be waiting for the other episodes πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
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name paonai ar
Prema!!!
nayok Probal
kon shagorer? πŸ˜›
hehehe
nice start Bristu πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
(sorry bhalo kisu mone ashtesena likhar jonno πŸ˜• )
plz cont whenever u can πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bristy nice to see you with this daily natok/ff......am loving it....hmm.......Probal and Prema 😊 ......again PP πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ....great start...can't wait to see how this teacher Probal is going to be wooed by Ms. Know it All πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

PS: Kabbyo mone ashchhe na 😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey brishty

nice start cant w for the next episode
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bristu just like we decided very very good start!!
Wonderful combination of charectors...Great story line...(Kahani ki tor jibon theke neya naki...Bio Sir) πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Anyways very good going...Next ta tui post kor...Ar ami suggestion er jonno ar vapm er jonno toh acheiiiii... 😳

BTW, Tui Amar SMS paisoch? πŸ˜›

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Taheera



Hehe....glad to hear that πŸ˜›


AW, thanks 😊



I'll post today when I've time, after all a daily πŸ˜†



Tropu



Ha, Prema ar Probal.....Old Bangla cinema concept, nayikar nam Nodi hobe ar Nayoker nam sagor πŸ˜ƒ


But naam gula ekjoner kachh theke dhar korsi 😳


Amar bashar private shagorer probal πŸ€“



Thanku (Tor valo kotha kokhono mone ashe naki, innoshent bachcha kahilka? πŸ˜›)


Okie tokie (you're being so nice? kYa chakkar hain? πŸ˜ƒ)




Appi



Haha....you've to love it...kanna shikhte chao na, naki? πŸ˜ƒ



Ha, Probal ar Prema.....amar chheler ar tar hobu bou πŸ˜‰


I can't wait to see how it happens....kisu chinta bhabna na korei likha shuru korsi, dekha jak kon dike jay πŸ˜ƒ



Mair chino? amar kabyo chai 😭


Tahmeed



Thanks, next update will be today itself



Raisu



Ha, amra likhsi valo to hoitei hoibo πŸ˜ƒ



Arey, I'm feeling flattered.....


ei shoitan, shobar shamne hate hari venge dichchish ken...anyway eita amar life story na, eto anonder kisu nai amar life e

Ok done, ajke kore dibo


Paisi chandu tomar SMS πŸ˜ƒ



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Rainu,

Amra koi likhchi...Shob toh tor chinta bhabna...So no credit to me..All credit yours...Ami hole eto shundor kokhono likhte partaam nah (Shotti bolchi, Pam marchi nah) 😳 😳

No Flattering....You deserve it sweetheart! 😳

Ki korbo ami je Shoitaan...Tuie toh bolli.. 😈Ta chara pore ar controle korte parllam nah. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Ki bolish tui eto amar i mean tor bouer opomaan....Ami ki toke konoi Anando dei nah πŸ˜‰ Dara Shashuri Amma ar Abba ke bolchi πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Very good.......Thank you choooooooo much cweetu πŸ€—


Okay πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 16 years ago
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^Achchha ja...shob amar credit...I'm so Froud of myself...



Nah tui shoitan na, tui amar bhalo bou πŸ€—..amar story toke arekdin bolbo....open forumer jonno sheita censored...πŸ˜ƒ



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Episode Two




Prema swallowed hard and turned abruptly only to bump into the lecturer. Her ears turned heated, she could feel the blush that crept through her cheeks. She heard the sniggers of the male population of the class and the hissing of the girls.


"Iβ€”I…I'm soo sorry Sir. I never knew…" she swallowed again and moved away blindly, tripping with the front bench. The book she was holding flew from her hand and landed on Snigdha's head. This time, the whole class roared with laughter.



Prema cursed her luck inwardly and gathered herself back again. Throwing an angry glare at Snigdha she took back her book and took a seat. Once seated, she settled her whole attention on the handsome man standing in front of the board, who happens to be a lecturer. She sighed and tried to concentrate on the lesson.




Probal Chowdhury, the latest addition in the Department of CSE in BUET was an extremely handsome man with sheer brilliance that made him being one of youngest lecturers. As a student he was very popular and known among all as a very confident person. But standing in the teacher's dais, his confidence somehow got lost. Teaching students who were merely 2/3 years younger than him wasn't easy. And the fact that all the girls of the class would stare shamelessly at him wouldn't help much.




"Well, class…as you know, this is your first class for course 6402, Graph Theory. Do you have any ideas about what we're going to learn?"




"Yes, off course we do." Snigdha replied smugly. "We're going to learn graphs, each graph has two axix, X axis, Y axis." She looked triumphantly at Prema.




Probal however rolled his eyes in shock and Prema giggled from her seat. Immediately, Probal's attention was turned to her.




Prema said in a confident voice, "We are not going to study class 8's Graph I think. It's graph theory, we had to deal with edges and nods."



Probal gave her an impressive nod and Prema blushed.




A wolf whistle was heard from the back.




Saikat yawned loudly from the back seat and put his head down in the bench, "Rahat, wake me up when the class is over or if one of the girls are killed by the other."


Rahat and few other boys sniggered.


……………….



"Hey Prema, we're here." Called a voice. She turned and smiled at the group sitting on the low wall in front of the cafeteria.




"Hi guys, what's up?" she sat down beside Himel.




"Alright." Ruma replied. "What's up with you?"




"I'm ok…actually no. I want to kill someone." She said matter-of-factly.




Tanim, who was the most aggressive one of the group leaned forward expectantly, "Whom? Can I help you?"




Ruma pushed him aside. "Don't be an idiot."




"Why blame poor soul. He can't help being an idiot." Himel grinned, earning a punch from Tanim. "Ouch!"


"Seriously, tell us what happened?" Ruma said.


"Don't ask. You guys are all happy being together, and I'm stuck alone with that Snigdha and Gong." Prema replied wearily.




"It's not our fault." Himel shrugged, "what can we do if you're more brilliant than us and get yourself admitted in section A, we the bad bad students have to study in section B, nah?"




Prema glared at Himel, "Funny hearing from a BUET, CSE student that he's bad bad student."




"Arey Buet, eita ekta jinish hoilo…Dilli ka laddu….khaileo postaba, na khaileo postaba."




"Yup, there's only one privilege of being a Buet student." Ruma giggled, "Bangladesher vitor, BUET er baire – Onek Shunam!"


Here is the Episode two....let me know if it's good, bad, maha bad or something without class...πŸ˜†....any kind of suggestion is welcome as I've said before....Next update will be on Monday!

Edited by the_rain - 16 years ago
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