Dil Ki Bhasha - AbhiRa OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Magnolia2

I enjoyed it thoroughly. Thanks for writing.

Originally posted by: .vishrutha.

Wonderful OS! ❤️

Their convo was penned so beautifully!!

Would love to read more from you! 😊

Originally posted by: --Amulya--

Hey, its beautifully written...

Keep writing.

Originally posted by: peeyara

Thanks for writing n for credit too :P
Loved the convo...u managed to keep intact their basic characteristics for example Ji for a Ji 😆
I like you instead of I love you and i too liked it
Their convo, reading each other mind n that peck 👍🏼

Originally posted by: basket_101

I honestly wouldn't have written this had you not suggested so, therefore the credit was given rightly so 😳

😆 I was imagining them two speaking out the dialogues, and the Meera in my head replied in that sense. It was both cute and funny, so thought of including it :P

Awwh, thank youu 😃 I know it was supposed to be a ILY sequence, but I couldn't fit that properly because I didn't go much into depth with their story. So like had to suffice 😛

Thank you for your comment and for your suggestion :D Do let me know if you ever think of any more ideas and wouldn't mind me turning them into stories! 🤗

Originally posted by: basket_101

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006600">Hello to everyone :)</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006600">I am Hinal, as some of you may know. I have finally had the chance to write out a piece on Abhishek and Meera. As suggested by @peeyara, this is based on the dream sequence. I was personally not satisfied with the turn of events on the show, so this is kind of how I'd have liked it to pen out.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006600">Please please please do comment and let me know what you think! I usually enjoy writing pretty dark stories that play more on the veiled emotions, but that sort of a depth isn't something I can achieve even in my thinking about these two characters [not as of yet at least]. So here's an attempt for a light-hearted piece :)</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006600">*And also note, I usually write everything in English, so this is a huge leap for me to actually try and write the dialogues out in Hindi. Don't mind the grammatical errors, or actually any errors for that matter😛</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#006600">Enjoy!😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"><font color="#006600">And don't forget to like/comment🤗</font></font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">Dil Ki Bhasha OS</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">We spent the night under the stars, memorizing the list of
"current affairs" together. Ironic was
the solace I felt sitting there with Meera as we discussed the world's crises.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">While I was so focused on the future, she lived in the
moment. What type of an influence will I be on the kids in the house? How will I manage to save up for the pending
expenses this month? These were the
types of things I'd be worrying about.
But Meera ji? I smiled. She'd probably focus on doing what makes her
feel happy, instead of worrying.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Meera ji, ek baat puuchu?"</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Haan, pucho, Abhishek ji" she flashed her crooked
smile. I caught her implication, but
continued on anyway, "Meera ji aap yeh kaise kar leti ho?" I asked, genuinely
fascinated by how easy-going she was.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">But as if she didn't get what I was talking about, she
looked around her at first, and then back at me. "Kya?
Main kya kar rahi hu?"</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I chuckled, shaking my head with a no at her. "Mera matlab hai
ki aap kaise koi bhi pareshaani ko bina tension liye solve kar deti hai?"</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">She crossed her arms before speaking, "Tumhe kya lagta
hai? Tension nahi hoti mujhe?" She waited for a reply, but I just
shrugged. "Of course hoti hai, par main
na hamesha se tension ko ignore karti hu.
Waise bhi mera dimaak nahi chalta tension mein. Toh tension leke kyun apni problems
badhaau? Hai na?"</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I nodded; but it also
mattered on your situation in life I suppose.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Nope!" she said immediately, catching me by surprise to be
honest. "Ji kuch kaha aapne?"</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Main jaanti hu tum kya soch rahe ho. Jawab hai naa!" She got up from the grass and sat on the
ledge of the gazebo. I followed suit;
"Aapko kaise pata?"</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Itne dino mein tumhe, thoda sa hi sahi, lekin jaan gayi hu
Abhishek ji. Haan pata hai ki tumhari bahot saari
responsibilities hai, bahot mushkile jhelni padti hai tumhe. Uske comparison mein toh meri life bahot
simple hai boss. But yeh baat bhi sach
hai ki tension toh sab ko hoti hai. Of
course ab tension same nahi hoti sab ki life mein. Jaise ki meri tension filhaal toh yeh hai ki
main Aman ki yeh boring si party
kaise jhelungi. Aur tumhaari tension yeh
hai ki tum property tax ke payment ko kaise chukaoge."</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">She kept going on, but more than listening to her talk, I
looked at how expressive she was. Her
hands flailing as she went on, her eyes widening when she talked about her
biggest stress in life, her look of - wait,
was it admiration? - when she spoke about my family and our financial
situation. Her simple perspective on
life wasn't something I hadn't thought about, but it certainly was more
persuasive than I ever was thinking about it.
I snapped out of the trance and focused on what she was saying. Yes, she was still speaking. I couldn't
stop myself from smiling at the sight.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Meera ji!" I suddenly interrupted her, catching her off
guard. "Kya hua?" a look of confusion
crossing her eyes. "I like you!"</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">There I finally said
what I was thinking. For the first time
in my life, without any hesitation. Finally. Pheww.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Whaat?"</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"I like you Meera ji! Aap bahot acche ho!"
A goofy smile erupting on my face before I could stop it.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Tum bhi naa
Abhishek. Aisa koi achanak se kehta
hai?" she remarked. "Ab friends hoke tum mujhe like nahi karte toh friendship meaningless ho jaati na?" she giggled. "Waise Abhishek,
tumhe pata hai, tumhaare pehle mera kabhi koi itna accha dost nahi tha. Pant Bhavan mein pata nahi kitne din rahungi,
lekin yeh zaroor pata hai ki ek rishta toh ho hi gaya hai iss Homestay se, aur
uss Homestay ke logon se," she finished off slowly, resting her back on the
pillar while fixing her cardigan.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Aur aapse pehle mere life mein kabhi bhi mujhe aisa nahi
laga ki main itna hasna seekh lunga, itna muskuraane lagunga" I confessed to
her, realizing how many changes she had brought to my life.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Chalo ab mujhe channe ke jhaad pe mat bithaao," she
laughed. "Anyway, ab kaafi der ho chuki
hai. Riya di mujhe jagaane aa rahi
hogi," she sighed. "Stupid si party ke
liye tayyar bhi hona hai. Toh phir hum
raat ko milte hai, theek hai?"</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I nodded wordlessly, of course with a smile though. It was funny how often I found myself smiling
these days, that too without any reason in particular.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Bye!!"</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">"Bye Meera ji," I waved back. I was about to leave but I saw her approach
me again. I was just about to ask her
what happened when she pecked my cheek.
"Thank you for everything Abhi!" she smiled, a hint of affection visible
in her eyes.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3"></font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Yeh dil hai dil ki bhasha
dil hi jaane.</font><i></i>

Originally posted by: swth1310

Wow... Its very nice.. I m reading it now.. U have written it so well.. Very sweet . I could imagine the conversation happening between the two.. Sorry I read it so late..

Please do keep writing more.. 😊 👏