OS : Stranded in What - IF's ?[Shot 6 on Pg 15(6/2/23)] - Page 9

This was refreshing, given with the cliché-d track and glorification of poverty and "family" over money. And to be honest, I liked this Adi more, who is concious about hua friend's life like a good friend rather than letting him be.

Even though I have stopped following the show, (and I believe you have as well) these sort of sneak peaks that pop up only add to the ever existing annoyance. But reading works like yours act as the reminder of the original BALH 2, the essential reason we started watching the show.

Tagging those who might be interested 🤗

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Well done, nicely put. ❤️

Ram should realise their truth, not be so gullible or blind.

Priya should tell him once again, maybe he will listen.

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will read in morning

Damnn this was amazing!! 👏👏

Someone needed to say these things honestly and I am glad it's Adi. Because he's been pretty useless for a long time!

Honestly Ram and Priya are idiots if they still think about going ahead with this plan is a good idea. I can't believe Priya will so readily agree to have everyone in her family compromise. OG Priya would never do that!

They gave turned Priya into the typical FL from the amazing character she was before and it sucks.

I absolutely loved the "your memory is weak" taunt by Adi 🤣🤣 that too multiple times lmaoo

This was a great read!

Go adi!!!! Tell 'em what dumbasses they are! I loved how most of it was just passive aggressive Adi going at it! Great work!

Your welcome ☺️ yeah i really liked it ☺️

Fantastic shot !!! It's good that adi clearly told ram that what he is doing is wrong , giving everything away to greedy people like nandini and Shubham, not thinking do they even actually deserve it , adi insisting and telling ram that his memory has gone weak too many times , is good one 😂 Ram needs to see his family's truth , not be so gullible, hopefully ram and priya realize that giving everything away to Nandini and Shubham is. a bad idea

Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon

Loved this Nita! It’s really good and is it inspired by Dobaara or Mirage? There u had a geostorm that allowed for manipulating the past which altered the present. How I wish something like that happened when they brought in Tapsee as a guest? They could have gone back in time and none of this would have happened. Loved this TS and reading your fiction pieces on RaYa lets us envision what we wanted to see in the show but couldn’t 😭 thanks dear ❤️

Thanks Mandy for the lovely feedback ❤️. Glad you liked it 🤗.

I haven't watched both of the movies you mentioned but I did write a time travel fiction once before both times I didn't have the logic to explain it just wanted to write something that allows the characters to travel through time 😆.

P.S : I do watch lot of shows with time travel I guess that might have had its influence even K dramas 😆

Amazing one. Y r these two sooo stupid