Wow!! What a greeaat piece of writing 🤗
It was as pure as rain one of my favourite theme to start a story with ... I really love rains❤️ just like your story...
This is what all of us want , at least I want this ❤️❤️
I am in love with you and this OS 🥰🥰
GOING TO READ ONCE AGAIN 👍👍
Originally posted by: melodyofflowers
Wow!! What a greeaat piece of writing 🤗
It was as pure as rain one of my favourite theme to start a story with ... I really love rains❤️ just like your story...
Ahhh...you're making me emotional! 😭Thank you so so much 😘❤
I'm glad you loved it...even I love rains very much, and since iss baar show me hame abhi tak ek proper raya ka baarish me bheegne waala sequence nahi mila hai, I was thinking of writing this from sometime. Aur waise bhi mere yaha pichle kich dino se kaafi baarish ho rahi thi, to baarish enjoy larte karte likh diya!😁❤
This is what all of us want , at least I want this ❤️❤️
Yess exactly, everyone wanted this. Whatever complains and rants we do in the edt about the show, I tried to solve all of them here in my OS...so everyone wants this to happen in the show, but waha to nahi ho raha, to yaha hi sahi ❤
I am in love with you and this OS 🥰🥰
Aww, thank you sooooooo much once again for so much love...loads of love back to you 🤗😘❤
GOING TO READ ONCE AGAIN 👍👍
I'm so happy reading this...😘😭
Replies in bold.❤
Haha, mujhe kyun tag kiya?🤔
Main jaanti hu ke main teri favorite hoon.🤗😆❤
Originally posted by: minakrish
Haha, mujhe kyun tag kiya?🤔
Main jaanti hu ke main teri favorite hoon.🤗😆❤
Oops shit!😛
Are aap dono ka username m se hai na, to upar neeche hai ek ke baad ek, to thoda galti se mistake ho gaya 😆
Waise favourite to aap meri hooo😉😆🤗❤ ye baat to sach boli aapne
Originally posted by: NityaAhuja15
Oops shit!😛
Are aap dono ka username m se hai na, to upar neeche hai ek ke baad ek, to thoda galti se mistake ho gaya 😆
Waise favourite to aap meri hooo😉😆🤗❤ ye baat to sach boli aapne
Chalo isi baat pe, Chapter 4 tumhare naam dedicate karte hain.🤗❤️
Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy...love you mrina! You are actually the bestest 😘❤❤
Wow Nitya finally RaYa OS from your side🤗
What a beautiful start ! Baarish and RaYa❤️
You have written so beautifully about nature. Description about nature is too good.
Ram always thinks about food first 😆 and then RaYa banter. Too good
Aww Ram is missing his old family where he was happy with his parents. Though he is rich and having everything but that love can't be earned that family is missing in his life but Priya only can fill that gap in Ram's life.😳
I really love the part where both are playing with Rain drops. honestly I can feel this moment. Ram is so happy with Priya. 😊
And yes workaholic Ram is missing now a days. New version of Ram is so 😎 who always wants to spend time with his wife 😉
Oh Gosh ! How beautifully you have mentioned Bade ache lagte hain song here RaYa's fav song that's nice and interesting.😉
Finally RaYa in Baarish I actually remember S1 scene when Priya was drunk and both were in Rain 🌧️
Awww that soft kiss ❤️ and their confession both are so beautiful and unique
Keep writing Nitya 🤗
Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03
Wow Nitya finally RaYa OS from your side🤗
What a beautiful start ! Baarish and RaYa❤️
You have written so beautifully about nature. Description about nature is too good.
Ram always thinks about food first 😆 and then RaYa banter. Too good
Aww Ram is missing his old family where he was happy with his parents. Though he is rich and having everything but that love can't be earned that family is missing in his life but Priya only can fill that gap in Ram's life.😳
I really love the part where both are playing with Rain drops. honestly I can feel this moment. Ram is so happy with Priya. 😊
And yes workaholic Ram is missing now a days. New version of Ram is so 😎 who always wants to spend time with his wife 😉
Oh Gosh ! How beautifully you have mentioned Bade ache lagte hain song here RaYa's fav song that's nice and interesting.😉
Finally RaYa in Baarish I actually remember S1 scene when Priya was drunk and both were in Rain 🌧️
Awww that soft kiss ❤️ and their confession both are so beautiful and unique
Keep writing Nitya 🤗
Thank you so much, firstly for taking out the time to read it, and secondly giving such a nice comment! I'm really glad you liked it 🤗❤
Baarish and RaYa have always been my eternal favourite, so how could I not write on them 😆
Aa gayi main...finally!! 😆
I'm so glad I didn't read the OS in a hurry. Aaj fursat se padhi...and such wowie feels! It also helps that it's pouring right now...and baarish, Ram and Priya are a match made in heaven ❤️
Beautiful conversations, heart fluttering feels wala romance (reminded me of S2 Ram's birthday wala baarish scene) and most importantly the monologues. Kudos to you for penning down their dilemmas so well even as they are both being lead by their heart towards each other.
You are getting better and better with every story you write! Shaabash mere sher! 👏
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