Chapter 5
Godddd Ram is making himself so obvious in front of Priya, calling it a date and teasing her. I felt second hand embarrassment for him. Itna bhi overconfident nahi hona chahiye kisi ko. I would have been turned off if I was Priya
waise, one sided love mein itna confidently hoke kaun bolta hai?|
He has guts
Priya got the shock of her life at the end. I really want her to scold Ram badly so he comes back to his senses
Originally posted by: minakrish
Not sure how many of you are here and still want to read this story but I’m planning to update this one.
Anyone interested?
Of course, Mrina! Been a bit busy, but I do check to see if you and Dazz have updated.
Neki aur poochh-poochh?
Originally posted by: minakrish
Not sure how many of you are here and still want to read this story but I’m planning to update this one.
Anyone interested?
Yessss!! Please do Continue! 
Finally caught up. Change the title, the chapter is now on page 27
I am shocked to see Priya being so nice and patient with him, and I didn't expect her to accept his proposal so soon.
Ram is so confident of winning her love, but I still found him more bearable in this chapter compared to previous one.
Now that they're engaged, the actual test of their love shall start. That's my fav part of the love journey. I want to see the ups and downs they will face and how they will survive through it, and how Priya will fall for him
Originally posted by: MochaQueen
Haha, even if I haven't watched the shows, I still wanna read your stories.
I never watched BALH, but still came here to read stories written by my friends.
I loved their ice cream date in chapter 3...even though shalini was with them😂 but aisi cool MIL ho toh, kya mast life hogi
I hope she stays this way and has a good bond with Priya even after marriage
Awwww, thank you meri pyaari Hinna. This means so much to me!
Shalini ka character show mein bhi waisa hi that so I didn't want to deviate much. She is a sweetheart.
Originally posted by: MochaQueen
Chapter 4
I loved the format in which you wrote this part with flashbacks
I am loving Shalini more with each chapter
Samosas khaae ya nahi?
I'm so glad that you enjoy my writing style. Flashbacks can get confusing for some people but I'm glad you didn't find it weird.
Originally posted by: MochaQueen
Chapter 5
Godddd Ram is making himself so obvious in front of Priya, calling it a date and teasing her. I felt second hand embarrassment for him. Itna bhi overconfident nahi hona chahiye kisi ko. I would have been turned off if I was Priya
Priya got the shock of her life at the end. I really want her to scold Ram badly so he comes back to his senses
Well, Ram is a weird one. He is adorable. He is confident and scared at the same time. He loves Priya too much but doesn't have the guts to confess directly.
Originally posted by: MochaQueen
Finally caught up. Change the title, the chapter is now on page 27
I am shocked to see Priya being so nice and patient with him, and I didn't expect her to accept his proposal so soon.
Now that they're engaged, the actual test of their love shall start. That's my fav part of the love journey. I want to see the ups and downs they will face and how they will survive through it, and how Priya will fall for him
Ab kya hi bolun... all my chapters are on differnt pages than they were originally posted, thanks to the clean-up that happened. I have lost about 900 posts myself.
Priya is the patient one and Ram is the crazy one so they will balance each other out.
Priya will bring stability in his life and make him calmer. Yes, the journey from engagement to marriage is always my favourite too and I'm looking forward to writing that. And yes, the main thing... about Priya falling in love. It will happen slowly and steadily.
Thank you for all the lovely comments my dear friend. I'll continue soon.
Originally posted by: Mangs1303
Of course, Mrina! Been a bit busy, but I do check to see if you and Dazz have updated.
Neki aur poochh-poochh?
Haha, okay Mini. I am working on the next chapter already so hopefully I am able to post it by the coming weekend.
Okay okay... kaam shuru ho gaya hai. Aapko chapter mil jaayega bohot jald.
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