RaYa SS - Dil Tujhko Chahe [Migrated to FF Section] - Page 22

Originally posted by: Mangs1303

Verrryyy nice, Mrina. Dil khush kar diya.

I don't know what to say specifically, because all of it just flows, like we'd hoped and wished for 3. No needless fuss. (However, I think I'd enjoy a bit of conflict a bit further on, but only due to circumstances or the characters' own hang ups.)

The rings are such good choices!

Little bits brought the scenes to mind, like Ram holding Priya's hand when they come to the parents and Sanjay's blessing for Ram/them both, actually.

Update whenever you can. Thanks, girl!

Again, love that DP. 😊

Thank you so much Mangs!❤️

There are no negative characters in this story. It is about how they face life together as an engaged couple and overcome hardships.😳 I will continue soon.

Haha, thank you. I love my DP too!

Ah ..this is so beautiful Mrina❤️..and rings are gorgeous too..can't wait to read the next part💕

Originally posted by: Pensive

Ah ..this is so beautiful Mrina..and rings are gorgeous too..can't wait to read the next part💕

Thank you so much Vanshita!❤️ I’m so glad you liked the update. I’m working on the next part so I’ll update soon.

Read all the chapters in 1 go......lovely story........please tag me in the next update

Originally posted by: minakrish

Looking forward to your comments Dazzu!

It's so beautiful yaar...it's beauty lies in the simplicity of the story and the ease with which the scenes and dialogues flow. It makes me smile, as though I'm standing in a corner watching all this play out in front of my eyes! So, so good! You are one hell of a talented writer!

Priya's initial reaction to the proposal, then accepting it and them coming out hand in hand The ring ceremony was perfect...heartfelt emotions, people that mattered and beautiful rings!

Dil khush kar diya aapne!

Originally posted by: Berrygoat

Read all the chapters in 1 go......lovely story........please tag me in the next update

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it. I'll tag you when I update next.

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

It's so beautiful yaar...it's beauty lies in the simplicity of the story and the ease with which the scenes and dialogues flow. It makes me smile, as though I'm standing in a corner watching all this play out in front of my eyes! So, so good! You are one hell of a talented writer!

Priya's initial reaction to the proposal, then accepting it and them coming out hand in hand The ring ceremony was perfect...heartfelt emotions, people that mattered and beautiful rings!

Dil khush kar diya aapne!

Dazzu... thank you so much dost. Your review means so much to me. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it. Itni taareef? You're making me blush.

Aapke comments ne mera dil baagh baagh kar diya. Shukriya.

Not sure how many of you are here and still want to read this story but I’m planning to update this one.

Anyone interested?

Originally posted by: minakrish

Part 3 is posted too: Here!

I haven't written any other stories on RaYa before. This is my first.

But since you are active on PSF, you might be interested in some of my older stories. Not sure which other ITV shows you've watched. You can check out my Index.❤️

Mrina's Index

Haha, even if I haven't watched the shows, I still wanna read your stories. I never watched BALH, but still came here to read stories written by my friends.

I loved their ice cream date in chapter 3...even though shalini was with them😂 but aisi cool MIL ho toh, kya mast life hogi I hope she stays this way and has a good bond with Priya even after marriage

Chapter 4

I loved the format in which you wrote this part with flashbacks now I'm craving samosas too...kal banaongi

I am loving Shalini more with each chapter