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Posted: 1 years ago

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Originally posted by: Saumya2102
Why couldn't the makers get inspired from your story and give us a sweet, simple, and old school romance?! I love how your story is proceeding. I really hope you get time to complete the story because I'd love to know what goes on in the RaYa multiverse!

Awww, thank you so much Saumya. I'm glad you enjoyed the story so far. Yes, I am definitely going to continue this story. The last 2-3 weeks have been hectic at work. Hopefully, I get time to write and update over this weekend.❤️

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Posted: 1 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mangs1303
Res. Will catch up soon, mrina.♥️

I don't know why I like Priya's 'jokey' thing. It makes me smile. 😊
I also smiled (at what turned out to be a prediction) when Priya was asked if she still loves Yuvraj. Ewww, indeed!
I really liked the conversation between Ritika and Priya, between Ram and Shalini. Instead of slow poisoning us with 50,000 villains, I wish there'd been more family interactions such as this. Ditto for bits like Ram landing up outside her clinic to take her to dinner at his place and what follows. Ordinary moments, building a relationship.
Aur pyaar ho gaya Ramu ko! Rishte ki baat also happening. I'm happy I can read the next part right away!

Heyyy Mini!🤗 I know I am late in replying to your comments but in my defense, I didn't go back to the old comments until today since I am finally writing the next part after a couple of weeks of being busy at work.😳

I am so glad that you enjoyed reading the day to day life and the ordinary moments that are beautiful and build the relationship between two people.❤️ I really wish they made shows like this with no major drama. But, unfortunately, this will only happen with fiction writers and not screen writers.😆

Going over to next chapter comments.😃

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Posted: 1 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Mangs1303
Saving both parts for next week, when I'll be on holiday. 😊
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Lolz. Ramu thought Priya dressed up for him, bechara! 😂
I wished during early balh3 that Ram would go fida and Priya would be happily oblivious. So, I obviously enjoy your version. It's so Ram to assume she had no reason to refuse the rishta to being a bit hilod by doubt. Ram has consistently had a really good opinion of himself, even in his dukhyaara avatars, so it's very authentic!
Texting between Ram and Priya always reminds me of post-lipatna tadna wale messages. Mazaa aata hai. 😊
Since I feel a bit annoyed at why Priya isn't dressed with a little more care in the serial, have to say your dress choices for her (and Ram, too) were a great addition. Ramu to flat ho gaya hoga. 🤣
Waitingggg to hear Priya's response to the proposal!

Yay! I'm so happy to know that you enjoyed my version. I really find it very unrealistic that Ram never has any self doubts. I mean, I understand confidence but to believe that he is the best (EVERYTIME) is too much.🤣

Thank you so much for your lovely comments.🤗 I have finally started typing the next chapter. Let's hope I am able to complete it my this weekend.😳