Nice. But in a sense its kinda awkward for Pri to get blindsided by a proposal from Ram like this. Hopefully Ram will explain properly.
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Nice. But in a sense its kinda awkward for Pri to get blindsided by a proposal from Ram like this. Hopefully Ram will explain properly.
Your writing is β€οΈ
Nice update. π«
Looking forward to the next chapter. π―
This was so good!
Ramu is Ramu only everywhere...advance main hi khush aur advance mein hi dukhi ho gaya π€£
Bechari Pri though! Soods, Shalu, Ram, Shardul...everyone knows that Ram is the the guy, toh kisine Pri ko bataya kyun nahin..not even Ritika π
Ram ko padegi ab...he was messing with Pri on purpose inviting her for coffee π€£
Waiting for the next part now...zyaada der suspense main nahin rakhna please
Arey kya baat ...chat mangni pat vyah ππ
What a great chapter you have written di
I loved it.
Loved it Mina! Also loved the outfits you picked for them! Canβt wait to read more! Oh I hope priya says yes π€£
I read all 5 parts in one go and the reason I am loving it is the way you wrote how their relationship is developing organically. Waiting eagerly for the next partβ€οΈ
Loved the chapter. ..beautiful outfit you have picked for them....eagerly waiting for the next chapter
Saving both parts for next week, when I'll be on holiday. π
ETA:
Lolz. Ramu thought Priya dressed up for him, bechara! π
I wished during early balh3 that Ram would go fida and Priya would be happily oblivious. So, I obviously enjoy your version. It's so Ram to assume she had no reason to refuse the rishta to being a bit hilod by doubt. Ram has consistently had a really good opinion of himself, even in his dukhyaara avatars, so it's very authentic!
Texting between Ram and Priya always reminds me of post-lipatna tadna wale messages. Mazaa aata hai. π
Since I feel a bit annoyed at why Priya isn't dressed with a little more care in the serial, have to say your dress choices for her (and Ram, too) were a great addition. Ramu to flat ho gaya hoga. π€£
Waitingggg to hear Priya's response to the proposal!
Originally posted by: Banyantree
Nice. But in a sense its kinda awkward for Pri to get blindsided by a proposal from Ram like this. Hopefully Ram will explain properly.
Your writing is β€οΈ
Thank you so much.π³β€οΈ
Ram will explain properly for sure unlike Ram of S3.π
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