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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaravali

You are awesome author😎

Awww, thank you!🤗❤️
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Posted: 1 years ago

Absolutely Lovely bantering Convo🤪...... Loved the chapter❤️...... Both characters came so perfect👏


Yeh RK ko bolana hai mujhe jyada metabolism pe bharosa mat rakh.... Itna khaayega toh denstist Priya ko gastroenterology ki degree leni padegi.😆

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Posted: 1 years ago

Love the chapter..everything about it! I seriously love your style of writing ..there's such a lovely flow of actions and dialogues, it makes me feel like I'm witnessing the scene unfolding before my eyes ❤️

PS: Thode tips humein bhi de do


Ritika-Priya ka banter, the way Ram and Priya are so naturally gravitating towards one another..my Ramu boy is a goner already 🤣.

Shalu is such a sharp mom...sab pata hai usko already. I love this bond 🤗

Ab bas unke yum yum ice cream date ka intezaar hai...Ramu I have high hopes from you, mauke pe chauka marna!smiley37

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Loving2Missing2

Absolutely Lovely bantering Convo🤪...... Loved the chapter❤️...... Both characters came so perfect👏


Yeh RK ko bolana hai mujhe jyada metabolism pe bharosa mat rakh.... Itna khaayega toh denstist Priya ko gastroenterology ki degree leni padegi.😆


Thank you so much Neha!🤗 I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it.❤️

Hahahaha... RK ka pait nahi, kuan hi hai.🤣

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: DazzlingLight

Love the chapter..everything about it! I seriously love your style of writing ..there's such a lovely flow of actions and dialogues, it makes me feel like I'm witnessing the scene unfolding before my eyes ❤️

PS: Thode tips humein bhi de do


Ritika-Priya ka banter, the way Ram and Priya are so naturally gravitating towards one another..my Ramu boy is a goner already 🤣.

Shalu is such a sharp mom...sab pata hai usko already. I love this bond 🤗

Ab bas unke yum yum ice cream date ka intezaar hai...Ramu I have high hopes from you, mauke pe chauka marna!smiley37


Dazzuu...🤗 Thank you so much yaar.😳❤️ Tumhe mera writing style pasand hai aur mujhe tumhara.😃 Mutual love and appreciation of each others work.

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Ramu boy is a goner indeed.😆

Ramu boy is fattu in this one too. Utna fattu nahi hai jitna BALH3 mein hai but hai... Bechara Priya ko date ke liye bhi nahi poochh paya. Ice-cream ki rat laga rakhi hai only because Priya offered to take him in return of the icecream they have with Shalini Aunty.🤣

But, I'm trying to see what is the best way to go about it.😉

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Posted: 1 years ago

Res. Will catch up soon, mrina.♥️


I don't know why I like Priya's 'jokey' thing. It makes me smile. 😊

I also smiled (at what turned out to be a prediction) when Priya was asked if she still loves Yuvraj. Ewww, indeed!

I really liked the conversation between Ritika and Priya, between Ram and Shalini. Instead of slow poisoning us with 50,000 villains, I wish there'd been more family interactions such as this. Ditto for bits like Ram landing up outside her clinic to take her to dinner at his place and what follows. Ordinary moments, building a relationship.

Aur pyaar ho gaya Ramu ko! Rishte ki baat also happening. I'm happy I can read the next part right away!

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Mangs1303

Res. Will catch up soon, mrina.♥️


Looking forward to your comments Mangs!🤗

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Posted: 1 years ago


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Posted: 1 years ago


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Posted: 1 years ago

Tagging a few more people!smiley31

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