RaYa SS : Polar Opposites[ Shot 2 Pg 7( 28/6/23)] - Page 7

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Posted: 1 years ago
#61

😍😍 how sorted are these two. No beating around the bush & no pathetic crying. The stairs analogy was too real Nita. I could visualise the whole thing. The whole scene right from Priya’s mood while climbing all the stairs to see Yuvi & while descending down after the whole conversation with Yuvi & Kriti is so beautifully written.

Ram is so adorable here. The way he understands Priya, he wanted to make sure she is safe. He also didn’t dismiss Priya’s allegations & wanted to cross verify it.


This whole shot 2 if made into an episode I am sure it will be the most talked about episode. Please write more.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Thank you for tagging me. This was a great update. I like the witch element in it. Lol

Looking forward to read more.


Thank you ❤️🤗. Glad you liked the update ❤️

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Posted: 1 years ago
#63

Wonderful update! Loved the fresh outlook on this story!!

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Posted: 1 years ago
#64

Thanks a lot for tagging me.

This is really so good! I'm definitely excited to read it ahead and tag me for other chapters also 😊😊

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Posted: 1 years ago
#65

Very beautifully written ❤️

I was anticipating ViKriti (Yuvi and Kriti ship name 🤣) cheating on RaYa, yet I felt so sad for RaYa when I read the update. Ram does the right thing by standing up for himself and for Priya. Priya did the right thing too by asking questions, but this Yuvi tries to gaslight her. Ram is already taking care of Dentist. 😍 Please give a glimpse of what happens at Shardul’s place in the next update.

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Posted: 1 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: BlurredLines

Tagging those who previously commented 🤗. Kindly ignore if not interested. If want me to tag you for future updates let me know ❤️

I just read the first shot and I loved the ride and their conversation...your endings never disappoint

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Posted: 1 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: BlurredLines

Check it out if you are interested 🤗

I love the second shot....pls pls continue this story...this has to be my favourite writing by youI loved how Ram was so caring for Priya despite being shattered himself, he put her first over his own broken heart.😭

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Posted: 1 years ago
#68

I finally got around to commenting. I really like your idea of ​​treason and the fact that Ram did not breed snot and Priya too. Those two deserve wrath and nothing more. In your story, their selfishness is beautifully revealed

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Posted: 1 years ago
#69

Read the whole story in a go........loved it absolutely.......waiting to c how these 2 broken hearts will heal eo and fall in love


Please tag me on the next part

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