RaYa SS : Polar Opposites[ Shot 2 Pg 7( 28/6/23)] - Page 2

Originally posted by: FariaJuthi

Good start! Continue soon and do tag me!

Thank you ❤️. Glad you liked it 🤗

Wow! I love reading this different take on the series.

Looking forward to reading more.

Wow, Priya as a dentist😳

Looking forward to the next part

Originally posted by: NityaAhuja15

Thanks a lot for tagging me!!!🤗

This is really so good! I'm definitely damn excited fro what's coming up and can't help but say my usual, please update soon 🤣 . Thank you for the lovely feedback. When I started I was at the speed of writing all there shots together. Now that few days passed my lack of enthusiasm means delayed update for sure sadly.

I really liked the thing that you got them all clear in the first conversation itself, like Priya knew that ue is Ram Kapoor, and Ram knew that she is Yuvraj's girlfriend. No detective and all here ki who's my girlfriend! 🤪Well Ram and Priya not knowing each other seemed far fetch in the show considering Yuvi works for Ram and Priya must have seen at least a photo of him

Then second thing I loved is the way you have kept the core characteristic of Ram intact which we all are missing in s3. I was disappointed when he did not thank Priya for the cake and treatment, and rather showered her with a bunch of judgments and suggestions and comments, I really hated that aspect, so thank you so much for correcting it❤️ . Thank you. I want Ram to ve like able and it is not by making stupid jokes but being supportive and kind.

And thirdly, it's so exciting maaaannnn!!! I mean I'm really excited to find out as to how both of them will probably have a heartbreak on new year itself, or probably around. The last line just added fuel to my excitement!

Why is Priya in the middle of the road? Did Yuvraj dump her already!🥺. Well I know the answers to your question but you will get them with the update when it happens

@replied back in blue

Thank you for the lovely feedback. Glad you liked it.

I really love your alternate sensible take on the story.❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: teddybearcastle

Thank you for writing & the tag 😊 this brought a big smile on my face. Every line made me feel happy :) no mis understanding here as Ram & Priya already knew about each other here. Her un-interrupted rant on Ram & once she came to know he is Ram, the silence are all very real. Many of us would have been caught up in such situations. This Priya is so so real. So is Ram. He cares & loves his relationships.

Looking forward to read more from you.

Thank you for the lovely feedback 🤗. Glad you liked it and that it made you smile ❤️. Yeah this Ram and Priya won't have time for Misunderstanding as I intend to wrap it with few shots itself. Will try to update soonish,

Thank you for tagging me! Great start… looking forward to the next chapter!!

Originally posted by: Pensive

Thank you so much for tagging me❤️..Its so beautifully written.🥰

Oh...all I wanted the simple story for Bade3 ...Wish we had something like this

Thank you for the lovely feedback. Glad you liked it. ❤️🤗.

Yeah all I wanted was a good finite story. I was confident about the actors playing their parts but was worried about then writers and looks like I was right to worry 😆

I absolutely loved the start of this story.❤️ Brilliantly written.👏

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Please tag/PM me when you update.

Love,

Mina

I have loved the first version of this story for a long time, the new one is just as good. It has a very true message. If a person needs you, he will find you in the most impenetrable jungle of a career