One Shot Description : Two unlikely souls meet at an unexpected night and gets to have an conversation where they reach an understanding that helps them move on from an uncertain future.
Author's Note : My first work on Balh3 might be my last well. Just had this idea since friday, it started as something else in my mind and ended up lot differently once I began to type it out 😆.
Wohooo! This is damn good! I really liked the aspect that Alekha asked the questions here and not Ram. Plus Alekha telling Priya about the other sida of Ram was good too, since only she can do that, no one else. Amd firing Yuvraj for Priya must have enraged him so bad 🤣
But I wonder, how did Ram fall out of love with Kriti 😆
And the last part was really sweet! So you don't need to make this as the last os on balh3 you can write more also 😉😃
Your story is traditionally based on inner feelings and immerses you in the atmosphere right away, thank you
Originally posted by: NityaAhuja15
Wohooo! This is damn good! I really liked the aspect that Alekha asked the questions here and not Ram. Plus Alekha telling Priya about the other sida of Ram was good too, since only she can do that, no one else. Amd firing Yuvraj for Priya must have enraged him so bad 🤣
But I wonder, how did Ram fall out of love with Kriti 😆
And the last part was really sweet! So you don't need to make this as the last os on balh3 you can write more also 😉😃
Thank you for the lovely feedback 🤗. I am glad you liked it ❤️.
Initially it was suppose to end with just Priya and Alekha hence titled it as Priya OS but somehow ended it differently so didn't think enough to give reasons for Ram break up with Kirti 😆.
Your story is traditionally based on inner feelings and immerses you in the atmosphere right away, thank you
Thank you for the lovely feedback. Glad you liked the One shot ❤️🤗.
Such a cute OS! Loved the conversation and the friendship between Alekha and Priya 😳 Also, loved how Ram stood up in Priya's support after learning the truth. Cute ending ❤️
It's so good.... Alekha and Priya's friendship, the way you have written is so beautiful, Just go to hell Yuvi.
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