Originally posted by: scarlet19470
Very nice ..pls continue
Originally posted by: sakshirambalh
Dont no hw to express but each scene was fantastic loved all their moments of life...ram to biwi ke liye kuch bi karne ke liye tayar hogaya,sir ko miss call diya,pyaar kya kya karwayega..want to ask u somethin where u gt ths idea of giving miss call to lecturer so tht he leaves early,evn ths idea were given little earlier means evn v could hv tried it,kya kare ab time nikalgaya tht was really nice,really priya wil think hw mad he is over her...thn nxt part biwi ko manana part was nice...flashback scene was too good,the way he worried for hr and his answer for shruti was smart...thn kiss convo mujhe pata nahi kaise comment karo uske bare mein loved ram's word in present wow where u gt statement yar..ram to biwi ko chedne ka mauka nahi chodega loved tht last line to the core..if priya thoda strict nahi huvi to ye ramji pakka sabi sports ki apni team banadega...aapki tarah writer hota to zaroor acchi tarah se comment karthi ti,loved it loved it loved it
Part 14
awww awesome RaYa's first kiss before marrige loved it OMG even Ram teasing her for that all the time awww Priya's biting lips always been her tread mark before first leap... i just loved this one so much it is really very best i have enjoyed it a lot its was awesome yaar...
Originally posted by: sandhyasn
priya ka sawal sach mein. she is so innocent.
kiss se agar bachha ho jata toh aaj sirf criket team hi nahi football, volleyball team bhi bann jaya😆yaar Priya itni darr kaise jati hai...book shop mein koi nahi dekha toh rona shuru😲...aaj kal toh mobile bhi hai...chalo Ram Priya ka peecha kar raha tha...continue soon and thanks for PM😊
Originally posted by: vironikajain
Very sweet nd lovely update sweetheart.. 🤗
Priya kitni innocent hai..kisiko dekha nhi apne pass toh itna dar gyi or ram ka gussa ( jisne usse abhi se jiju bana diya 😆)
Priya ke sawal nd their convo was too good.. 😆
Ram ne sahi kaha agar kiss se bacche hote toh abhi tak pata nhi kaun kaun si team ban gyi hoti.. 😉
Ram ka priya ko manana nd wo miss call wala idea bhi bahot acha tha..par idea ne toh kam hi nhi kiya.. 😛
Good work.. 👏
Thanx for pm..
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