RAM-PRIYA-RAJAT KAPOOR -LAST PART PAGE 13 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Hmmm loved it ..but plzzz dont make priya cry ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
awesome but yaar sab priya ko itna rulate kyu hu?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
your back...yipeee!!!!...
ab suspense wala updates milega...i do so love suspense ones...
got to read two parts back to back...woohooo...
i just loved it...
sorry for commenting late


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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
hey nice story. do continue this
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Awesome update...waiting for next one
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
what is cooking in ram and priyas mind.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Priya felt tears ...it visited hr corners,,, and to hid it... mein washroom se hoke ati hun...


The night covered with priya being fired on ram ayesha's lovely convos... and ram's words about his dead wife...
which was actually Priya...

The next scne starts...

loud horns...

Priya looked here and there... again she heard the horns


Ram : priya ??????

Priya looked to ram...

Ram : aaj ... Rajat nahin aa sakta ...

Priya went and sitted up to ram's car... putting her hands COVERING her head,,,, as bcz it was rainng heavily...

priya got up...: Rajat kyun nahin aya ???

Ram : wo busy hain...

Priya : driver ko kya hua ???

Ram : uski saas mar gayi ...

Priya : kya ??? aur koi nahin tha kya jo aapko aana parha ????

Ram : wo kya hain na...wo Rajat mujhe aapna naukar samajta hain... isliye mujhe bhej dia...

Priya : o my god... Mr..kapoor... aap apni biwi ko chhod ke itne derr kaise rahenge... yeh Rajat ne bilkul thik
nahin kiya !!!

Ram was about to give his naughty smile... whe she interrupted..: kahan hain apki biwi ????? mari wali nahin
aap jisse bohot pyar karte hain uski baat kar rah hun...

Ram : mere dil pe...

Priya with her attitude turned towards the other side...

Ram : humme ab kuch hain bhi nahin... so can i ask a question... casualy lene... if agar...

Priya : kya hain????

Ram : mm... jub tum zinda thi... ek baar bata nahin sakti thi... ki tum zinda ho...

Priya : kia tha...

Ram : kya ?????kab??

Priya : jab kia tha... tab aap kisiko complement de rahe the... ki aapki earing bohot sundaar hain... and
tab mujhe laga ki wo koi aurat hi hogi... normally ladkia hi earing and all.. to mujhe laga ki aap ne aapni nayi
zindagi shuru karhi lihe ... to meine bhi kardia... !!!

Ram : earing ??? meine ????????? (RAM GAVE THAT PENDING NAUGHTY SMILE ) oh haahaa... a6i chiz pe complement dena meri aadat si hain...


Priya : ofcourse... !!

Ram : mmm !! ek aur baat puchu ???

Priya : zaarur !!!

Ram : puri dubai mein ... koi jaga nahin mili... jo tum shahar se itni dur parhane ati ho ???? na koi a6a transport ... aur itna dur ????

Priya : aapko koi prblem hain???????????

Ram : nahin,...

Priya : uff !! yeh barish !!

ram looked strangely to priya !!!!!!!!



AFTER SOMETIME... DHrrr !! DhRRR !!!

Priya : kya hogaya ??????

Ram : dekhta hun... shit yaar... gari mein paani chala gaya !!!

Priya : oh god !! kuch kijie na !!!

Ram : arrey pagal ho ??/ kya karu mein...

Priya : kuch bhi... !!

Ram : mein koi machanic nahin hun...

Priya : yahaan kaise ???

Ram : galti tumhaari hain... itni dur tum kyun aati ho... yaha se na koi mechanic milega... aur na koi transport,...

Priya : to kya puri raat yahi pe rahna parega ???

Ram : mein iss gari pe nahin rahe sakta puri raat !!

Priya : to ??

Ram : to kya ??? utro ???

Priya : iss pani mein ????

Ram : obviously !! chalo ... aur chalte chalte koi madat dhund lenge...

Priya : hahaha !! mujhne bhigne mein koi intrest hain nahin... aap jayie aur madat dhundh k layie...

Ram : tum nahin jaogi right ...

Priya : right...

Ram : Fine !!!

Priya : FaaINE !!!


THE NEXT SCENE STARTS WITH RAM AND PRIYA WALKING ON THAT WATER LoGGED STREET ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
gud 1... do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
thanks.

next part wil be interesting.waiting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Too short...anyways waiting for next one..hope you'll update it soon
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