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Posted: 15 years ago
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shuv's mou- thanks so much for ur comments, they really encourage me to keep on writing
shubh_astha4eva- i love ur ff also!!!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzz update, thanks for the comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ok so i am very very mad at these stupid creatives!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😡
my god, i hate what they have done to this show!!!!!!😡
they've basically killed it🤢
it used to be my favorite, but now it's my least favorite, and if siddharth leaves then..................😭
well anyways i thought i'd write a sweet shubh and aastha scene and not care about what's happening in the show!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
there is going to be a little leap in this story!
(for the past three months shubh and aastha have gone to where they used to live and they have resumed their studies, but both have not been able to forget the other😳)
------------------------three months later--------------------------
aastha has just returned from london, and is going to the ranawat house
aastha: hello anyone here??
anu: AASTHA!!!
aastha: di, i missed u so much
anu: aww so how were ur studies
aastha: great di, u are now looking at a doctor
anu: im so proud of u
aastha: where's everyone else
anu: Saksham, papa, mama, deepa
sol: arre anu beti kya hain
anu: mama look who's here
sol: arre aastha beti, when did u come
aastha: just now aunty
(aastha touches solchna and vanraj's feet)
s & v: jeeti raho
aastha: where's jiju and deepa
anu: i don't know they were just here
sak: hey aastha
aastha: hi jiju
sak: hey kiddo how r u
aastha: im fine jiju, but looks like u made di get fat
anu: aastha, im going to hurt u
aastha: sorry di i was just joking, waise where's shubh
anu: he's coming back tomorrow
aastha: what about payal bhabhi
sol: payal and swayam should be back soon
aastha: ok di im going to go, ill see u tmrw
anu: haan thik hai bye
aastha is about to leave when anu faints
saksham: ANU!
they run to her side and take her to the room
(a few min later aastha comes and says)
aastha: congrats jiju ur going to be a daddy
sak: what
aastha: ya anu di is pregnant
sak: omg that's great can i go meet her
aastha: yea sure
aastha: aunty i think i should leave now
sol: nehi aastha i have just talked to ur mother and told her that u are going to stay with us until anu delivers
aastha: but aunty
sol: no buts, ur mom and dad r coming over with ur stuff, and anyways i think that it would be good for anu if she has her sister with her, and especially since u r a doctor now
aastha: ok aunty
sol: come let me show u to ur room
aastha: ji
(btw her room is right next to shubh's😉)
-------------------------the next day-----------------------
everyone is standing doing the pooja, when the doorbell rings
saksham opens it and it's SHUBH
sak: hey shubh, how r u?
shu: im great bro
(they hug)
shubh: mom
sol: wait right there
(she goes and gets the pooja tray)
she does shubh's aarti, and when shubh is about to take the blessings he knncks over the sindoor, and it falls into aastha's mang
everyone is stunned including shubh and aastha
shubh: woh, im sorry it just dropped
sol: koi baat nehi shubh
aastha: its ok shubh
anu thinks: don't worry shubh, soon u'll fill aastha's mang on purpose, and look even god is with me on this
shubh: waise aastha what r u doing here
aastha: what i can't come here
shubh: no i didn't mean that, it's just that.......
aastha: im just kidding, woh anu di is pregnant so im staying here until she delivers
shubh: wow im going to be an uncle, congrats bro
sak blushes: thanks shubh
shu: wow i didn't know u guys were that fast huh (winks)
everyone laughs while anu and saksham blush like crazy
sol: ok bus, stop teasing them, and let's go eat breakfast after that u kids should go and have fun
they walk to the dining table
anu is about to start sering when aastha stops her: no di, u sit and i'll help serve
anu: but aastha
aastha: di its a doctor's order
deepa: ya bhabhi u should sit payal bhabhi and i will help aastha serve
payal: haan anu, u can't do any more work around the house
aastha serves everyone and then she comes to shubh
she puts a paratha on his plate
shubh: one more
she puts another one
shubh: one more
she puts another one
shubh: one more
she puts another one
shubh: one more
aastha: sorry shubh katam ho gaye
sak: shubh r u going to eat all those
shubh looks at his plate and there are about ten parathas
shubh: ya of course
he slowly starts to eat
everyone is done eating, but shubh is still there
aastha knows that he is not going to be able to eat all the paratha's so
aastha: shubh its ok u don't have to eat all those
shubh: but bhaiya
aastha: shubh go no one is here it's ok

Shubh: thanks Aastha

Aastha: no problem

-----------------------------later in the afternoon----------------------------

Shubh: so what should we do today, there is no work or anything

Anu: lets go shopping

Deepa: great idea bhabhi

Sak: no way im not going

Anu: come on saksham

Sak: no ways

Aastha: how about we go to a theme park

Shubh: great idea

Anu: but I cant go on any rides

Aastha: u never do, come on di they have cotton candy

Anu: thik hai let's go, but only because of the cotton candy

-----------------------at the theme park--------------------------------

Aastha: I want to go on that roller coaster, deepa come with me

Deepa: no way Aastha, im not going on that

Aastha: I don't want to go alone

Shubh: ill come with u

Aastha: ok let's go, any one else want to come

Everyone: no way

Aastha: losers

On the roller coaster

Aastha is feeling kinda nervous, but she trys not to show it

Shubh: Aastha u ok?

Aastha: yea, just knida scared

Shubh: hey don't worry

The roller coaster starts and Aastha feels even more scared

She holds on to Shubh

Shubh: Aastha relax

Aastha: Shubh im scared

Shubh: Aastha just close ur eyes everything will be ok

Aastha closes her eyes and holds on to Shubh and before she knows it the ride is over

Aastha: thanks Shubh

Shubh: dosti mein no sorry no thanks

Aastha: dosti mein

Shubh:ya we're friends right

Aastha: right

They walk over to the rest of the group

Anu: so how was the roller coaster

Shubh: it was great (looks at Aastha and winks)

That's all for now

Luv,

---------raji

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Posted: 15 years ago
#33

RAJI,HATS OFF U.

SORRY,I AM LATE BECAUSE OF CRUEL EXAMS.
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