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Day off today, so I can continue!!!

-------------------------The Wedding---------------------

So the barat arrives and everyone is happy

Aas and her friends are making a plan to take saksham's shoes

A: k everyone know what they are going to do right

Friends: yes aastha don't worry!

Sway: dekho shubh, you have to take care of shaksham's shoes

Shu: don't worry bhaiya I will keep them with me

Sway: ha if the girls get them tho humari naak kat jayegi

Shu: shubh will never let that happen, after all no onw can outsmart me

(Swayam hands shubh the shoes)

Swa: here keep them with u and don't let the girls get them

Aas sees that shubh has the shoes

Shubh takes the shoes and put them underneath his seat where no one can see him, but his bad luck, that aastha saw where he put the shoes

Aastha calls her cousin, shilpa and tells her where the shoes are

Aas: k I will go and distract shubh and you take the shoes

Shil: don't worry aastha di I will take the shoes

Aastha walks over to shubh

Aas: hi shubh

Sh: (thinks: wow she looks amazing)

Shu: aastha hi

Aas: shubh do u need anything, something to eat or drink?

Shu: no aastha im fine

Aas: umm I think that aunty was calling u, she said it was really important

Shu: mom? Umm (thinks that no one will find the shoes) ok ill go, but I don't know where she is, you should come with me. (thinks: now she wont even be able to take the shoes)

Aas: (thinks: wow shubh u think that u are very smart, but not as smart as me) yea sure (while walking away she winks at shilpa)

Shilpa nods and after SA leave she takes the shoes

Shu: mom did u need something

Sol: ha shubh where were u? dekho its ur brothers wedding u should stay with him

Shu: sorry mom, ill go over to him, just one min

He goes back to get the shoes

Aas: aunty I think mom was calling me so im gonna go, k

Sol: think hai aastha beti

Shubh gets back to his seat but doesn't find the shoes: what the???????? I had put them here so where did they go

Mean while:

Aas: shilpa did u get them

Shil: haan aastha di I got the shoes, here

Aas: im going to go hide them in my room k

Shil: k let's go

Sol: chalo shubh shaadhi shuru hone wail hai

Shu: haan mom, bhaiya mandap mein baith gaye?

Sol: aur tum bhi chalo

Shu thinks: maybe swayam bhaiya took the shoes

So they go to the mandap and the pandit says to call the bride

Ruk: aastha, go and get your sister

Aas: ji mom

So aastha brings anu to the mandap and the wedding happens

After the wedding

(shubh walks over to swayam and they talk, but they are whispering)

Shu: bhaiya shoes are safe? (asks kind of like a question, but swayam doesn't understand the tone)

Swa: I knew they would be

Shu: yep now we can give them to shaksham bhiaya

Swa: ya so go and give them to him

Shu: haan tho give them to me

Swa: what r u talking about chote, the shoes are with u

Shu: enough joking around bhaiya

Swa: arre chote you're the ones who's joking around

Shu: what r u talking about bhaiya the shoes are with u

Swa: chote I think you've gone mad, don't u remember, I gave the shoes to u?

Shu: (worried) bhaiya didn't you take the shoes from under my chair

Swa: why would I do that

Shu: uh oh bhaiya I don't have the shoes with me

Swa: chote I had told u to take care of them

Shu: but then who has them

Aastha is behind them and she clears her throat: ehhem

Shu and swayam turn around

Aas: hi guys

Shu: aastha tum, so that means that u have the shoes

Aas: (innocently) why what r talking about shubh

Shu: dekho aastha I know that other than u no one can take the shoes

Aas: shubh , I can't believe that u would think that

Shu: come on aastha just admit it

Aas: k fine I have the shoes, what can u do about it

Shu: I will get them back from you, I know they have to be somewhere around here

Aas: u can look for them, but I guarantee u won't find them

Shu: come on chaiya let's look for the shoes

So they look for them but they can't find them anywhere

Then shubh spots aastha's room: bhaiya im going to go look for the shoes in that room

Swa: k im going to go downstairs and look for them there

Shubh goes into aastha's room and looks for the shoes, but before he can find them he hears someone coming towards the room

Aastha walks into her room and takes out the shoes from her drawer , and shubh sees her so he comes out of the closet and grabs her hand, but to both of their surprise shubh's foot slips and he falls taking aastha with him.

Shubh falls on the bed with aastha underneath him, both are breathing heavily and have an eyelock, but it's broken up by rukmaani calling aastha

Both quickly get up and aastha runs out of the room with shubh just looking after her

----------------later--------------------

The wedding is over and it's time for the bidaai, but first aastha gives the shoes to saksham after receiving her money from him

Aastha, her mom, her dad, and everyone from the girls side is crying

Aastha hugs her sister and both are crying very hard

Sol: dekho aastha beti don't cry, you can come and see your sister whenever u want to, and anyways you guys are all coming over to our house for the party tomorrow aren't you

Aas: ji aunty

So the guys side leaves and then they have the rituals at the house

--------------------at night-------------------

Aastha is sitting by her window and she can't stop thinking about shubh

Shubh is also lying awake in bed thinking about aastha

Aas: what's happening to me? I've never felt this way before, is this………..no no aastha you're just tired, go to sleep and everything will be fine

------------------- the next evening----------------------

Sol: arre shubh you're not ready yet?

Shu: haan mom im just going to go and get ready

meanwhile aastha's mom and dad arrive

sol: arre aap log aagaye

ruk: ji hum ne socha ki aapki madat kar de party ki tayarriya mein

sol: lekin aastha kahan hai

ruk: she wasn't ready yet so she's going to come later on, we will go and get her in an hour

sol: why will u go, shubh hai na, he will go and get her

shu: ji mom, right after I get ready I will leave

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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
hmm...!!interesting!!like hum ap ke hain kaun!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
the shoe scene really reminded me of hum aapke hain kaun.. cho chwet...lol
great update!!
this is very interesting.... an di just remebered i have an ff to update...... 2 actually.oh god...lol

anwayays. i always get caried away..........

okay.... the update was fanatsatic!!!! i rly liked it.. good job. and luv ur style!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: shuv's mou

hmm...!!interesting!!like hum ap ke hain kaun!!!!

yep i was watching hum apke hain kaun, and decided to write that
thanks for the comment
Edited by rkath - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: shubh_astha4eva

the shoe scene really reminded me of hum aapke hain kaun.. cho chwet...lol
great update!!
this is very interesting.... an di just remebered i have an ff to update...... 2 actually.oh god...lol

anwayays. i always get caried away..........

okay.... the update was fanatsatic!!!! i rly liked it.. good job. and luv ur style!!

thanks for the comment
hope u update soon, i luv ur ffs
Edited by rkath - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
hey guys another note
i know i u prolly hate reading these and i hate writing them
first of all:
i'd like to thank everyone who reads this ff (even the silent readers, though i hope u'd comment, i also used to be a silent reader of things but then i started getting more involved i think u should too), this was my first attempt at writing one and i luv it, im thinking of starting another one too, anyways got carried away
second:
if anyone has any ideas that would help me improve this ff please feel free to pm me.
last:
i may not be able to update next week because i have finals so i will be very stressed, though i will try to update tmrw after i finish my i-search project.
by the way i haven't introduced myself
hi my name is raji, and i live in the us, washington state
im sixteen years old, a junior in high school
and i love BKACN and siddharth shukla😍, though that goes without saying
Edited by rkath - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27

Ya I know most people probably hate me right now, but I was really busy! First of all we had finals and on top of that bb just started!!!!!

No more excuses on with the update!!!

Hey if u guys can give me any ideas that would be helpful, please feel free to pm me!!!!

-------------------At aastha's house-------------------

Shubh arrives at the house, but aastha doesn't know that he is coming to pick her up

Aastha is in her room trying to figure out what to waer, she has clothes clattered all over the place (kind of like I do when im getting ready)

Shubh walks into the living room, but doesn't see anyone, he thinks that aastha is prolly in her room so he starts to walk up the stairs, but he accidently hits a vase and it drops, and it makes a lot of noise!

Aastha hears this from her room and she thinks that someone has broken in the house, so instead of calling out who's there (seriously when they do that in serials im always thinking r u stupid or something, if u think that someone has broken in the house u wouldn't call out to them u would try to hit them or hide or call the cops) she grabs a broom and is going to try to hit the person who has broken in.

Shubh gets to the top of the stairs and aastha can't see his face so she comes up behind him and is about to hit him when he turns around and stops her!

A: shubh tum! My god u scared me, what r u doing here

Sh: mom sent me here to get you little did I know I was going to be attacked

A: oh sorry, I thought that someone had broken in

Sh: so ur weapon is a broom (laughs)

A: hey stop laughing I was scared and I grabbed the first thing I could find (looks mad)

Sh: ok baba sorry

A: it's ok

Sh: why aren't u ready yet

A: I couldn't decide what to wear, but now u can help me

A: come on (she pulls shubh into her room, and seats him on the bed)

A: I've narrowed it down to these three outfits (a light blue lengha, a yellow suit, and a red lengha)

Sh: I think u should wear the light blue

A: really that's what I was thinking

Sh: well as they say great minds think alike

A: I know I have a great mind, but im not to sure about u

Sh: hey!

A: just kidding! Can u wait for me in the living room while I get changed

Sh: yea sure

Shubh gets up, but aastha was standing right there so he bumps into her and they have an eyelock

Sh: umm so ill just wait for u downstairs

A: yea ok

(half an hour later)

Shubh is waiting for aastha, and he is getting impatient: AASTHA!!!! Hurry up, r u ready yet

A: YA COMING!

A slowly makes her way down the stairs and she is looking divine

Shubh can't stop staring at her

A: hello earth to shubh

Sh: huh oh umm chalein?

A: umm just one more thing

Sh: what

A: woh could u halp me with this necklace (holds up the necklace she was holding in her hand)

Sh: yea sure ( he slowly moves her hair to the side and slowly puts the necklace on her

Aastha is breathing very rapidly and thinking

Why does this always happen to me when shubh is near me? What is happening to me?

I know it's short, but I will update again either wed or thurs.

Edited by rkath - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

no babyz....its simply cool

itsduration is juzt perferct...!

thnxz for the update!

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Shubh has just put on Aastha's necklace and both are just standing there awkwardly

Sh: so should we go

A: yea sure

They walk out to the car

Shubh opens the door for Aastha: aaj pehli baar koi larki meri gadi ki front seat par betigi

A laughs: I love hum aapke hain kaun

Sh; I know huh really good movie

A: u act pretty well to shubh

Sh: well I am the best!

A: right!

A: so tell me about ur family

Sh: well there's swayam bhaiya the oldest of us all he's the best, and loves me the most. U know when we were younger he always used to take the blame for me and we used to play a lot of pranks on people, and payal bhabhi is his wife, she's really nice, and treats me like her younger brother. Then there's pratham bhaiya and aditi bhabhi and saksham bhaiya nad now anu bhabhi to, then me, the hunk of the family(winks) and the youngest of us all is deepa, she's the only sister and we all treat her like an angel.

A: wow ur family is really big, in mine its only me, mummy, papa, anu di, and shilpa-well shilpa is only our cousin but she has lived with us since her parents died.

Sh: chalo batho mein hum ghar bhi paunch gaye, let's go inside?

A: yea sure

They walk in and deepa runs up to Aastha

D: Aastha di can u please help us

A: kya hua deepa?

D: well the thing is that my friend was going to perform a dance with me, but she hurt her leg, so now I need u to perform with me

A: me, but I don't even know the moves

D: don't worry just come with me and I'll teach u really quick, by the way Shubh bhaiyu is ur partner

A: ha thik hai let's go

Deepa takes Aastha and tells her what needs to be done

--------------------------------Later on--------------------------------

A: deepa im really nervous

D: what's there to be nervous about, you've performed before

A: (thinks: ab main tume kaise samjaun that im nervous to dance with Shubh)

Sol: (in hindi) ladies and gentlemen I am very happy that u could make it here today to celebrate the wedding of my son saksham and my new daughter-in-law anu. We are all very happy, and now its ur turn Shubh.

Everyone claps

Shubh blushes

Sol: we will get started with a performance

Deepa with mehan and Aastha with Shubh:

They start off with a slow song, and deepa and Aastha are standing on one end of the dance floor with Shubh and mehan on the other end

The song starts;

Pehli Najar Mein Kaisa Jaadu Kar Diya (the couples approach each other)
Tera Ban Baita Hai Mera Jiya (the guys hold out their hands as if asking for a dance and the girls accept)
Jaane Kya Hoga, Kya Hoga Kya Pata (they are slow dancing)
Iss Pal Ko Milke Aa Ji Le Jara
Mein Hu Yahan, Tu Hai Yahan
Meri Bahon Mein Aa, Aa Bhi Ja
O Jaaneja Dono Jahan, Meri Bahon Mein Aa, Bhul Ja, Aa -(2)
Baby I Love You -4 So More
Baby I Love You, O I Love You
I Love You, I Love You So More
Baby I Love You

They break apart as the song changes to a faster one:

O ladke deewaane, kahan se aaya tu
Dulhan ko le jaane kahan se aaya tu) - 2

(Shubh) Chal pyaar karegi
(aastha )Haan ji haan ji
(S) Mere saath chalegi
(a)Na ji na ji
(m) Ho chal pyaar karegi
(d) Haan ji haan ji
(m) O mere saath chalegi
(d) Na ji na ji


shubh and mehan - Arre tu haan kar ya na kar teri marzi soniye
Hum tujhko uthaakar le jaayenge
Doli mein bithaakar le jaayenge

aastha and deepa- Hum ghar mein kahin chhup jaayenge
Sang tere nahin hum aayenge

shubh and mehan - Ho, chal pyaar karegi
aastha and deepa- Haan ji haan ji
shubh and mehan - Mere saath chalegi
aastha and deepa- Na ji na ji

Then the songs changes to:

Dekho Dekho Hai Shaam Badi Deewani
Dheere Dhere Ban Jaye Na Koi Kahani

Dekho Dekho Hai Shaam Badi Deewani
Dheere Dhere Ban Jaye Na Koi Kahani

Dilbar Hai Dilkash Hai Dildaar Nazare Hain
Aaj Zameen Per Utre Kitne Sitare Hai

Atlo Hosh Na Mi Danam
Hum Hai Dil Hai Aur Janam
Bas Deewangi Deewangi Deewangi Hai
Na Koi Rahe Sam Rahe Per
Yeh Ilzaam Lage Kisper
Bas Deewangi Deewangi Deewangi Hai

All Hot Gals Put Ur Hands Up And Say
Om Shanti Om

All Cool Boys Comon Make Some Noise N Say
Om Shanti Om

Shaam Gazab Ki Humgamna Khez Ai
Iska Nasha Hi Gehra Hai Tez Hai
Shaam Gazab Ki Humgamna Khez Ai
Iska Nasha Hi Gehra Hai Tez Hai

Zulf Khuli Hai Resham Resham
Saans Ghuli Hai Madham Madham

Yeh To Ishaare Hain

Atlo Hosh Na Mi Danam
Hum Hai Dil Hai Aur Janam
Bas Deewangi Deewangi Deewangi Hai
Na Koi Rahe Sam Rahe Per
Yeh Ilzaam Lage Kisper
Bas Deewangi Deewangi Deewangi Hai

[All Hot Gals Put Ur Hands Up And Say
Om Shanti Om

All Cool Boys Comon Make Some Noise N Say
Om Shanti Om]2

Kehene Ko Waise To Sara Sukun Hai
Phir Bhi Yeh Dil Hai Ki Isko Junoon Hai

Kehene Ko Waise To Sara Sukun Hai
Phir Bhi Yeh Dil Hai Ki Isko Junoon Hai
Pal Do Pal Ko Khwaab Saza De
Isko Usko Sab Ko Bata De
Raaz Jo Sare Hain

Atlo Hosh Na Mi Danam
Hum Hai Dil Hai Aur Janam
Bas Deewangi Deewangi Deewangi Hai
Na Koi Rahe Sam Rahe Per
Yeh Ilzaam Lage Kisper

Bas Deewangi Deewangi Deewangi Hai

[All Hot Gals Put Ur Hands Up And Say
Om Shanti Om

All Cool Boys Comon Make Some Noise N Say
Om Shanti Om]2

And they end with a slow dance to:

Wada Raha Wada Raha Wada Raha

Wada Raha Pyaar Se Pyaar Ka

Ab Hum Naa Honge Judaa

Wada Raha Pyaar Se Pyaar Ka

Ab Hum Naa Honge Judaa

Yeh Meri Dhadkane Sun Raha Hai Khuda

Chahe Tumhe Kis Kadar Mera Dil

Tumko Nahi Hai Pata

Yeh Meri Dhadkane Sunraha Hai Khuda

Wada Raha

Dono Jahan Ko Bhoola Ho Main

Aisi Lagi Hai Tujhse Lagaan

Chahe Kaho Ise Awaargi

Chahe Kaho Ise Deewanapaan

Dil Ne Kaha Dil Ne Suna

Maine Tumhe Dilbar Chuna

Ab Dorriyan Naa Rahi Darmiyan

Kya Rang Layi Wafa

Yeh Meri Dhadkane Sun Raha Hai Khuda

Wada Raha Pyaar Se Pyaar Ka

Ab Hum Naa Honge Judaa

Yeh Meri Dhadkane Sunraha Hai Khuda

Dekha Tumhe To Aisa Laga

Mujhko Mila Hai Manzil Ka Pata

Chalna Hai Humko Ab Saath Mein

Tumse Juda Mera Raasta

Maine To Lee Hai Kasam

Paao Tumhe Janmo Janam

Sajde Kiye Maine Shaamo Saher

Maanga Hai Tumko Sada

Haan Yeh Meri Dhadkane Sun Raha Hai Khuda

Wada Raha Pyaar Se Pyaar Ka

Ab Hum Naa Honge Judaa

Yeh Meri Dhadkane Sunraha Hai Khuda

Wada Raha Yeh Wada Raha

Pyaar Se Pyaar Ka Pyaar Se Pyaar Ka

Wada Raha Yeh Wada Raha

Pyaar Se Pyaar Ka Pyaar Se Pyaar Ka

Wada Raha Yeh Wada Raha

Pyaar Se Pyaar Ka Pyaar Se Pyaar Ka

Wada Raha Yeh Wada Raha

The song ends, but Shubh and Aastha are still moving to the song and anu notices this, and she is happy!

enjoy😊 love raji!
Edited by rkath - 15 years ago
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omg!!
both updates were amazing!!!!

plz plz plz continue soon!!!!!!

i love this ff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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