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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
thx shreya di.... u know after writing and thinking of these ff's....... im actually beginning to like writing again...............

thankyou guys.... dont think illl update this one today.if i can i will..............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
thx zumra, i have no idea when im gena continue, i rly have atight schedule right ow. but will try to as soon as i can..............

thx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

itz.awsome...but in the first i thought itz like KULBADHu..ty[pe...but its different...!!

AWsome...

the best Author u r ..till date we hv in our this bacn ............Writing 2 ff same time...u need a👍🏼

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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: shuv's mou

itz.awsome...but in the first i thought itz like KULBADHu..ty[pe...but its different...!!

AWsome...

the best Author u r ..till date we hv in our this bacn ............Writing 2 ff same time...u need a👍🏼



rly??. i dont think so. im not that gud..........thx anyways.... rly means to me........😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
sorry guys, i was really busy
i will do an update tomorrow!


* achoo.... caught the flu....*achoo
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36

aww hope u feel better!!!

eagerly waiting for ur update!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

Recap:

Part4,pg4

Im going to sort of skip the welcome party

Im in no mood to write a 'party-update'

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Morning:

Sharad's room:

Sharad is sleeping, and Divz comes to the room and…………..ALARM GOES OFF

Sharad falls off the bed……

Ugh……… stupid alarm,

And goes back to sleeping…….

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Everyone was downstairs eating except for Sharad

Aastha, and divz, and Kripa were pouring water into glasses, and placing food on everyone's plate

Shubh's Dad: divz beta…

Divz: jee?

Sd: sharad…..

Divz: I noe.. ill be right back……..

Murmurs ten thousand things a long the way

'stupid, idiot, lazy……………………'

Divz goes to Sharad's room and sees that he's still sleeping

She leaves and comes back with a bucket of cold, freezing water….

Tiptoes to his room

And

SPLASH!!!!

SHARaD: oh god! What the………….. divz?

Gets off the bed and starts chasing her around the house

Divz: mummy….

Tries hiding behind her mom…………

Runs again……

Goes out to the yard

And rests for a few minutes…………..

Sharad catches up…………

DIVZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Divz: oh god

Strts running again

[ I can see these 2 love to run……lolz!!!!!]

Divz trips over a rock..

She suddenly feels arms, around her waist………. Holding her…………. Saving her……..

Her eyes are closed, heart beating fast…..

Opens them slowly……….. and luks into dark, black eyes

Sharad tares back into warm, light brown eyes….

Someone: ehem?

Divz luks up quickly, getting out of sharad's arms……

Divz: aastha di…….. aaise kuch nahi…….. I fell n…

Aastha: mmhmm…. Yeah. I understand [sarcastically]

Divz runs in the house

Aastha strts laughing

Whil Shard stands there awkwardly, luks at Aastha

and goes away too………

Aastha: I've got to talk to shubh….

Aastha goes to Shubh's room…..

*knock knock

Shubh: come in – luking through a magazine….

Aastha: hey …..

SHubh: hi

Aastha: shard or divz…………… I mean

Shubh: I noe……. U think they like each other and u want to tell mom and dad right?

Aastha: umm…. Aaa……. Ho'd u knoe

Shubh: my friendship telepathy

Aastha: funny……… im seriuso. I rly think they …………

Shubh: like eachother? Yeah…… but we have to ask them first.. I mean we cant just go to mom and dad and ask them to get them married….

Aastha: true, ill go to Divz, and u go to Sharad

Shubh: okay

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Aastha goes to Divz

Divz?

Jee astha di?

Aastha: umm…. Well its about shard

D: um. Yea?

Aastha: do u like him?

Divz: who Sharad ?

Aastha: no im talking about Robert………… sharad stupid

Divz: umm…

Aastha: no umm's, yes or no

Divz sits there, for about 5 minutes

Aastha: DIVZ! Yes or no

Divz: [shyly] yes..

Aastha: thx

Divz; but.

Aastha: you'll see

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Shubh: Sharad?

Sha: yeah?

Shubh: umm its bout divz

Sha: uhhhh yeah… [remerbing wat happened earlier….]

SHubh: well.. do u. umm. Like her?

Sha: uh,,,………….. umm……. Am I supposed to say yes?

Shubh: its not a joke… do u like her?

Sha: ummm…. Yeah

Why?

SHubh: nothing. Thx

Sha: but?

SHubh: you'll see

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Back in shubh's room

" YES!!"

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I know its short, but I wasn't in a mood to do an update. So it's short and crappy……..

Sorry!

Comments and suggestions are welcome!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

yay u updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aww looks like sharad and divz are getting together😳
what about aastha and shubh😉
it was a great update!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: rkath

yay u updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aww looks like sharad and divz are getting together😳
what about aastha and shubh😉
it was a great update!!!!!!!!



thx
ur just going to have to read the next update to see wat happens!
as for shubh n aastha...............
i cant say anything about it........
just wait and read

lol 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
haiii!!
amazing update yaar!! 👏
and SO CUTE! 😳😳
loads of running too 😆
cant wait to read more!!

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