Love story:Shravan Sachi FF Updated

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My Maaneet ff luv story with a strange twist is having a leap.Shravan & Sachi are the lead couple after the leap.I just introduced them as children in my new part.plz do read & post ur comments

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Love story with a strange twist:Part 21(2nd version)

After a few months..
All are in the drawing room.
Dev:We are thinking of going to US.
Maan:Good.Have a nice trip.
D:Bro...what i meant is..i'm joining a company over there.
All are shocked.
M:What?
D:Better job.Better salary.
Karthi:Dev!
Muskaan:Sharavan will get better education also.
G:But Muskaan...
Mus:Please Geet...
Srivastav:I told him to go to US.Because i want my children to be independant.Maan has a business of his own here.Dev was an established business man.But he left everything and went to US.Now Dev should also stand on his own toes.It's better to do a good job in US.He deserves it.
All are upset.They all are silent.

Dev and Muskaan hug everyone with tears before going.
Shravan and Pari weep.
Sh:Bye Pari.
P:Bye bhai..
Sachi comes running.
S:Shravan..are you going?
He is upset:Yes.
S:Will you forget me?
Sh:No.
Sachi removes her chain and gives it to him.
S:Keep it with you.Let the chain remind you of me.
Dev,Muskaan and Shravan get into the car.They wave their hands to say 'bye bye..'

After 20 years...

Geet is busy cooking.
Maan peeps into the kitchen.
M:It's time for Shravan to reach.What are you doing here?
G:I'm making his favourite carrot halwa.
Maan smiles.
G:Shravan will be really excited.Right?All these years we were visiting them in US.After 20 years Shravan is coming back to India.
Maan smiles.
Pari comes to the kitchen.She is fair and cute.She is extremely goodlooking like her parents.
P:Shravan bhai has reached.
G:Really?
Everyone runs to the front room.
Shravan is standing there with a smile.
He touches everyone's feet.He hugs Pari.
Sh:How are you my dear sis?
P:Cool.How are you?
Sh:Fine.
M:How was the journey?
Sh:Good.Badi maa..where is my carrot halwa?
M:How did you know that Geet has made halwa for you?
Sh:How can she not make it for me?I'm her son.
Geet and Maan smile.
G:I will serve the halwa now.
She feeds him halwa.
Sh:Wow!So tasty.You are the best.
She pats him on his back.
Sh:Ok then i will fresh up and come.
G:Ok.
Shravan goes.Pari follows him.
M:I was waiting for them to go.
G:Why?
M:I want you to feed me halwa.
G:Maan...you are so naughty.
Maan giggles.
She smiles and feeds him halwa.
Maan also feeds her halwa.
They both smile at each other.

Pari:Bhai...you did'nt ask me about Sachi.
He is shy.
P:I know that you are longing to see her.
Sh:What are you saying?
P:Don't hide it from me.You are my brother.I know what you feel for Sachi.All these years you were hiding your silent love in your heart.
He smiles.
P:After bathing,we will go and meet Sachi.
Shravan is excited.
Pari goes out of the room.
Shravan takes the chain which Sachi gave from his bag and keeps it closer to his chest.
Sh:You are my bosom Sachi.

Shravan dresses up.He bends down and looks at the mirror.
Sh:Am i ok?
He smiles.
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