SaaVan Ki Baat Pakki Hai..A new ff. Last Epi, pg31 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Great update amisha!!!!,Hope sanchi is fine.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woah Amisha.. that was nice.. but then hope she dosent get amnesia now and tortures Shravan...Thanz for the pm & update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update, Amisha. Hope, Saachi is fine.....
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amisha

very nice update I liked it very muchπŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Nice update Amisha. Please continue!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Cool Amisha!!! Please do continue!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oDjB7SG5wzg[/YOUTUBE]
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: xxSheilaxx

Cool Amisha!!! Please do continue!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oDjB7SG5wzg[/YOUTUBE]



THank u SHeila for all ur help πŸ€— I finally got it to work πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Recap: Saachi leaves Shravan's house & goes to her Maayka as she wants to teach Shravan a lesson & make him more responsible.

Episode 8:

Saachi falls down on the floor & becomes unconscious as she had not eaten all day. Inder & Usha heard the thud on the ground & ran to her room to find Saachi on the floor.

Mamaji & Mami: Saachi Beta ! Saachi beta utho !!

They cradle her & pat her face to wake her up. Mami then takes a glass of water & sprinkles some drops of water onto Saachi's face..

Saachi slowly opens her eyes & looks around..she sees Mama & Mami around her.

Saachi: Mamaji, Mami aap log'

Mami: Saachi beta kya hua ? Tu theek toh hai?

Mamaji in the meantime is calling the doctor'

Saachi: Haan Mami main theek hu bas thoda sa chakar aa gaya tha'

Mami: Tu ne subhe se kuch khaaya ?

Saachi: nahi Mami mujhe time nahi mila kuch khaane ke liye' she starts feeling dizzy again & closes her eyes

Mami: Saachi beta ! Saachi beta aakhein kholo'.! She & Inder then put her in bed'

The doctor arrives & examines Saachi & gives her an injection which makes her sleep..

Doctor: Saachi ka blood pressure bohut low hai'isse kuch khaane ka dedo aur woh theek ho jaayegi'aap log isko yeh dawaai bhi time pe de dena'abhi maine usko injection diya hai woh thodi deer mein jag jaayegi'

Mamaji & Mami escort the doctor out'

Mami: Inderji, main kuch khaana banati hu Saachi ke liye..

Mamaji is looking concerned about Saachi & wonders why she is upset w/ Shravan..He decides to call up Shravan & tell him what happened..

Mamaji: Shravan beta..?

Shravan: Haanji Mamaji'Saachi theek hai?

Mamaji: Shravan main tujhse baat karna chahta hu'tumhaara aur Saachi ke beech mein jhagda hua hai kya?

Shravan looks confused & says: nn..nahi nahi mamaji aisa kuch nahi hai..pata nahi Saachi mere se baat kyu nahi kar rahi hai'maine actually usko pareshaan kiya tha office mein aur'

Mamaji cuts Shravan off & says, Pareshaan kiya ? Matlab?

Shravan: Main aapko kya batau Mamaji'.

Just then Madhura walks into Shravan's room..

Madhura: Shravan beta, neeche aaja, tere Papa tujhse baat karna chahte hai..

Shravan thinks to himself, ab yeh hitler mere peeche kyu pada hai bhai? Main toh gaya !

Mamaji hears all this & says, "Shravan beta sun !"

Shravan: haan mamaji main sun raha hu..

Mamaji: Shravan main chahta hu ke tum foren yahan aajao Saachi ko dekhne ke liye abhi uski tabayat kharab hai..& he keeps the phone

Shravan: Mamaji'..! hello? Hello? Shit yaar ! Ab Saachi ko kya hua hai ! Ab mujhe jaana hi hoga Saachi ke paas !

He goes downstairs & sees Pratap standing there looking at him with a stern face. Shravan tries to avoid him but Pratap stops him from going out-

Pratap: Shravan !

Shravan: Ji papa..

Pratap: Tum kahan jaa rahe ho ?

Shravan: Ji main Saachi ke paas jaa raha hu abhi unke mamaji ka phone aaya tha Saachi ki tabayat kharab hai..

Before Pratap could answer him back, Shravan runs out the door..

He goes into the car & rushes to Saachi's house..

Meanwhile '

Saachi dreams of Shravan & when they both got drunk in Mumbai during their honeymoon'she dreams of when Shravan sang pee loon tere geele geele honton ki sargam, pee loon hai peene ka mausam'tere sang ishq taari hai'tere sang ek khumaari hai'tere sang chain bhi mujhko tere sang bekarari hai'.


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6YOn6ykZEDE[/YOUTUBE]




She remembers all the moments she had with him- before he fell in love with her, during their journey together at the farmhouse ' the gazebo scenes'..in her sleep she says, "Shravanji, main aapse bohut pyar karti hu'main aapke bina nahi reh sakti hu"'.

She suddenly opens her eyes & sees Shravan sitting on the edge of her bed looking lovingly at her..

Saachi: Shravanji aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Shravan puts his finger on her lips & says,"shhhhhh'no questions'."



He holds her tightly & hugs her'.he says, "Saachi please mujhe maaf kardena'meri waje se tumhaari tabayat phir se bigad gayi'.."

Saachi: Shravanji, main apne mama mami ke yahan aayi hu kyu ki mujhe aapko ek sabakt sikhani hai zimidaar bane ke liye'jab tak aap zimidaar nahi banoge, main yahan rahungi apne maayke mein'

Shravan looks sad & says, "matlab tum kabhi ghar wapas nahi aaogi?"

Saachi shakes her head no'

Just then Mami walks in with a plate of paneer pakodas which she just made'

Mami: Saachi beta dekh ! Maine tere liye garam garam paneer ke pakode banaya'tum khaa lo'

She puts a pakoda in Saachi's mouth'.

Shravan smiles & says, Mami kya aap mujhe nahi khilaogi ?

Mami: Of course beta ! Yeh lo'tum dono khaa lo, main aur bana rahi hu..she then goes back into the kitchen..

SaaVan both have an eye-lock moment & continue eating'

End'.

Precap: Saachi gets better & Shravan decides to go to office regularly''Get ready for some more SaaVan moments :P

Edited by mirchi_tirchi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Nice Update Amisha..
precap sounds interesting...
she needs to go back now 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Yyeeeyyy!!! Awesome update amisha! Please continue soon. Waiting desperately for some more Saavan moments 😳
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