SaaVan Ki Baat Pakki Hai..A new ff. Last Epi, pg31 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
😆 😆 oh amisha! Too funny yaar! simply love the masti that's happening between them. Hitler doesn't seem to be that strict on Saavan which is really good! 😊 but do us a favor huh don't make Saavan face obstacles like they did in the show so that they yearn for a kiss. Pleas yaar! Otherwise superb! Keep on going!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Amisha Lovely update 👏.BHPH is ove😭 but continue to write SaaVaan story 👏👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
nice update!!! wish we could watch all this masti in the show...the story is just the way we all wanted it to be in the show...pls continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks everyone for all your feedback & appreciation 😳 It means a lot to me ! 😃 I will be updating with episode 7 hopefully by this weekend. Please do bear with me as I have been extremely busy & haven't had time to write new episodes...Please continue to give me your feedback...😳 Thanks !
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
OMG stupid Pratap! 😭 Great update, Amisha! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
Now what plan sanchi has in her mind? nice update Amisha.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Stupid Pratap, nice update!!!

And....very romantic 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice update, Amisha!!! Wonder, what is brewing in Saachi's mind? and Where is she..?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Episode 7-

Recap: Saachi is very upset at Shravan for what had happened in the office..she thinks to herself, "ab mujhe kuch karna hai jo Shravanji ko bilkul zimidar banega.."

Saachi decides to sneak out the house & go to her mama mami's place before Shravan comes home..She opens the bedroom door to go downstairs & sees no one is there & she looks down to see if anyone was in the living room'she finds the coast is clear & she goes down the stairs & out the door'she looks at the door one last time & sighs'.then takes the car to her maayka'

Meanwhile'Shravan is getting antsy in the office as he is feeling bad for what had happened when Saachi was in the office'He thinks to himself, "aisa kya kiya maine jo Saachi ko itna bura laga'." "Mujhe shayad ghar chalna chahiye aur usse maafi maangni chahiye'" He looks at the clock & sees that it's 5:00PM'he then looks around to see if Pratap is around..whom he doesn't see so he sneaks out the office 😆 & goes home'.

Saachi has reached her maayka & her mama mami are sitting at the dinner table talking about Shreya's marriage when they look up & see Saachi..


Mami: arre saachi beta ! Tu yahan kaise ? Sab kuch theek to hai na ? she gives Saachi a hug..

Saachi: Haan Mami sab theek hai bas mera mann bohut kar raha tha aap logon se milne'.toh maine socha ki main aa jaau'.

Mama: Sachi beta tumhaari tabayat kaisi hai ab ?

Saachi: Mamaji main ab theek hu'

Mamaji hugs Saachi..& sits her down at the table'

Mamaji: Chalo acha hai tu bhi aa gayi ~ hum log Shreya ki shaadi ke baare mein baat kar rahe they'.

(Shreya is listening to all this from the corner of the family room & getting upset)😡

Saachi: Shreya ki shaadi ke baare mein matlab? Shreya ko kissi se pyar ho gaya hai kya?😳

Mamaji & Mami look at each other & say nahi beta humne ek ladka pasand kiya hai uske liye'.

**In Shravan's car***

Shravan is driving home & thinking of Saachi'.he is thinking of all the moments he had with her'(BG music'tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi')


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oDjB7SG5wzg[/YOUTUBE]



He smiles as he thinks about the time when he got married to Saachi'& the pheras he made with her'the time when he was on the honeymoon with her'the Mumbai moments'.He then reaches home & runs inside to find Saachi is not there'He runs up to their room & calls for Saachi'he looks in the bathroom & looks in the balcony where Saachi is not there..

Nidhi happened to hear Shravan calling Saachi's name..


Nidhi: Shravan kya hua ?

Shravan: Bhabi dear Saachi ghar pe nahi hai kya? Main usko kabse dhoond raha hu..

Nidhi: Arre aise kaise ghar pe nahi ho sakti Saachi..Shayad woh Dadi ke saath hai ya phir Ma ke saath'Dhoond naa usko'

Shravan gets tense & starts looking for her through the whole house & doesn't find her..He goes back to his room, sits on the bed & thinks, "Saachi shayad apne maayke mein gayi hai'main abhi usko phone karta hu.."

He calls Saachi on her cell phone'
Saachi sees Shravan's number & decides to ignore the call'

Mamaji & Mami see this & ask if everything is ok'

Saachi thinks to herself, "ab main Shravanji ko ek sabakt sikhadungi'." She smiles to herself'.😆

Shravan in the meantime gets scared & wonders if something happened to Saachi'He calls her again & Saachi doesn't pick up the phone again'

He gets upset & throws the phone on the floor. Then Pratap walks in the room'

Pratap: Beta kya hua ? Tum itna pareshaan kyu lag rahe ho ?

Shravan: Papa main kabse Saachi ko phone laga raha hu woh apna phone nahi utha rahi hai..pata nahi kahan chali gayi hai mujhe chod kar..

Pratap: Oh ho'! Ab tumne kya kiya Saachi ke saath Shravan? I sometimes don't understand you! Tu bohut nalayak beta hai'!!

He walks out the door'.Shravan on the other hand thinks, ab main Saachi ke maayke mein jaaunga aur Saachi ko ghar wapas leke aaunga'.! Woh zarur apne maayke mein gayi hai..

He calls up Inder- and of course he picks up the phone..unlike Saachi..lol

Inder- Haan Shravan beta, kya hua ?

Shravan: Mamaji, main Saachi ko dhund raha hu..woh aapke ghar pe hai kya?

Inder- Haan beta woh idhar hi hai'usse baat karni hai kya tujhe?

Shravan: haan Mamaji mujhe Saachi se baat karwado please.

Mamaji brings the phone to Saachi & she pushes the phone away & walks to her room..

Mamaji: arre beta, kya hua ? Shravan phone pe hai woh tere se baat karna chahta hai'

Saachi gives him a stern look but takes the phone'Mamaji walks out the door but then decides to listen to their conversation from the door'

Saachi rolls her eyes & Shravan says, "Saachi tu kissi ko bina bataye apne Maayke mein kyu chali gayi ?"😡

Saachi does not reply & Shravan keeps talking..

Shravan: Saachi tu sun rahi hai kya ? Hello ? Saachi please tu ghar wapas aao na..main tumhaare bina nahi ji sakta 😒

Saachi hangs up the phone as she didn't kno what to say'As much as it hurts her to not talk to Shravan, she had to make him responsible somehow. And by not giving him attention she decided that this was the way to make him responsible'Saachi sat on the bed & started to cry'.she kept thinking about the moments she had had with Shravan'all the good times & the bad times'the time when they were in Mumbai on their honeymoon'all the moments up til Saachi's accident'.Saachi then started to feel dizzy & she falls down on the floor'😭

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NOTE: I have been trying several times to embed this VM which Sheila made for me but it is not showing up here 😕 So please click on the URL to watch this video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oDjB7SG5wzg

Precap: Mamaji & Mami find Saachi on the floor unconscious'.Mamaji & Mami: Saachi ! Saachi Beta utho !! Koi doctor ko bula !!!! 😭

Edited by mirchi_tirchi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Wow really great update cotinue sooooon plzzz😊
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