SaaVan Ki Baat Pakki Hai..A new ff. Last Epi, pg31 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Beautiful update, Amisha!!!!!!
πŸ˜†- this update was so verrrrrrrry funny! Superb lines you have given to the both of them!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌ
Thanks for the pm!
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Edited by shilparoxx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Nice update amisha!!!.keep it coming .😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
So there back in the office love it continue soon plzz😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Awsme update amisha keep it up.! πŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
When are we expect next update????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Episode 6:

Recap: SaaVan in the office & Shravan irritating Saachi about his "sexy secretary"

Saachi is busy working when Pratap comes to her & asks her for a file. She is typing & doesn't look up from the computer as she is concentrating on what she is doing & accidently hands Pratap the wrong file ' It happened to be a file which Shravan left on her desk (he wrote some lovey dovey notes in there for Saachi'lol) Pratap takes the file & goes in his cabin..he opens the file & sees all the lovey dovey notes in the file & starts to laugh'he goes out & sees Saachi focusing on her work..

Pratap: Saachi Beta, tumne mujhe galat file diya, lagta hai Shravan tujhe pyar ke chits likh raha tha'

Saachi turns red & says, Oh sorry Papa, maine dhyaan nahi diya..aap kounsa file chahiye tha?😳

Pratap: Beta mujhe who Italian company ka file chahiye tha..

Saachi finds the correct file & gives it to Pratap. Pratap goes back to his cabin..

Sachi then opens the file which Pratap had originally & is wide-eyed..she sees all the chits which Shravan wrote in the file to her..he wrote things like, "Saachi kitni sundar dikhti hai us sari mein.." "Saachi ki hasi kitni pyaari hai" "Mujhe Saachi ke saath bahar jaana hai dinner pe" "Main Saachi se bohut pyar karta hu"

Saachi gets embarrassed & walks over to Shravan's cabin & says, "shravanji yeh kya hai?"

Shravan acts like he doesn't know what Saachi is talking about so he says, kya kya hai Saachi?

Saachi hands him the file..Shravan opens it & sees the chits he wrote.

Shravan: Is mein galat kya hai Saachi ? He gives her a masti wala smile'lolπŸ˜†

Saachi: Shravanji, abhi abhi yeh file papa ke haanth pe lag gaya tha'.!!! Aapko zara sa sharam nahi aati kya ? office mein aap yeh sab karte ho ?

Shravan gets up & pulls Saachi close to him & they have an eye-lock moment'(BG Music: tumko dekha..to yeh khayaal aaya'.) Shravan is about to kiss Saachi when Pratap is heard clearing his throat * ahem* !!

SaaVan get embarrassed & step back from each other'

Pratap is looking real angry at them & says, "office mein romance kar rahe ho tum dono ? Saachi beta tum ghar chali jao..Shravan aise kaam nahi kar sakta hai jab tum bhi ho uske aas paas'" he gives Shravan a look & he walks away'..

Shravan lowers his head & thinks to himself, "Hey bhagwan ! Yeh Hitler ko kyu aana tha beech mein ! Jab bhi main Saachi ko kiss karna chahta hu toh kuch na kuch aa jaata hai beech mein ~ "

Then he notices Saachi looking angrily at him..she rolls her eyes at him & walks away'

Shravan is calling out to her but she doesn't stop. He gets upset & bangs the wall'

Meanwhile Neeta is watching all the drama from the door & smirks to herself..Aakhir Shravan ne sabit kiya hai ki woh kabhi zimidar ban hi nahi sakta ~ she walks away..

***Jaiswal Mansion***

Saachi is crying & going in her room when Nidhi bhabhi stops her & asks her why she is crying?

Saachi: Bhabhi, Shravan ji bohut natak kar rahe they office mein ~ woh mujhe kiss karna koshish kar raha tha aur phir beech mein papa aa gaye they'

Nidhi starts to laugh & says, Shravan bohut pagal hai ! Usko pata nahi hai kya ki office mein romance nahi hota aur woh bhi jab papa ussi office mein kaam karte hai !!

Saachi cries all the more & says Shravanji kabhi nahi sudhrenge'.

Nidhi holds her & says Saachi ro mat, sab theek ho jaayega'.Shravan ko shayad kuch time lagega zimidar bane ke liye'lekin I'm sure he will become responsible'bas tum chinta mat kar'

Saachi is thinking of a plan to making Shravan responsible'😳

End of episode'

Precap: Shravan comes home & finds Saachi is not home'..😲

Edited by mirchi_tirchi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
OMG this is 2 good i wonder why sachi not at home when shravan comes home contine sooooon plzz😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
Shrvan tumhe pyar ke chits likhta ha awwwnn ☺️Loving Pratabh's Character here..
Awseme update amisha.. continoue soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Amisha ... Your story looks familiar yet so different... great going..eagerly waitin 4 Saachi to b back home...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
great update Amisha!!!!!!!
I now LOOOOOOOOOVE your ff sooooooooo incredibly much!!!!! Every update is just soooooo cute!!!!!
I bet the reason why saachi isn't home is because she wants to give shravan a surprise or something.......
thx
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