SaaVan Ki Baat Pakki Hai..A new ff. Last Epi, pg31 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Episode 2:


Note: I had to put this sig in this episode coz it fits so perfectly !! Thanks Geetu for making such a heartwrenching sig !😳



Recap: Sachi got hit by a car & winded up in the hospital ' she had lost a lot of blood but was luckily still alive & only fractured her neck. Shravan, Pratap & Mamaji are waiting for her to recover so they can take her home.

Shravan is holding Sachi while sleeping'*BG music is playing ' hai kya yeh tere mere darmiyaan hai..andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai'lagne lagi'hai zindagi khali'bin tere..bin tere bin tere'koi khalish hai hawao mein bin tere*

*Next Morning*

The sun shines through the window into the hospital room waking Shravan up. He looks at Sachi who is still asleep..He admires her beauty & thinks, "wah Sachi tu kitni pyari dikhti hai jab soti hai"'ab tum jaldi se theek ho jao aur hum ghar challenge.."He smiles at her then gets up to get her some chai..

He comes back with a hot cup of chai on a tray & wakes up Sachi..

Shravan: Sachi utho..chai pi lo..

Sachi opens her eyes & looks around her room, then looks at Shravan. She tries to lift her head to sit up but then cries out in pain as her neck has been badly fractured.

Shravan: Sachi Sachi kya hua !

Sachi: AAAHH !! SHravan ji ! Mera gardan atak gaya ! Bohut dard ho raha hai'! Please aap doctor ko bulaye'!

Shravan runs to get the doctor & says that Sachi is in pain, she tried to sit up straight..The doctor then comes in the room & gives her some pain medications & Shravan then gives her some tea..

Sachi: Shravanji, hum ghar kab jaayenge? Mujhe ab hospital mein nahi rehna hai'.sab ki bohut yaad aa rahi hai'

Shravan: Sachi hum bohut jald ghar chalenge. Pehle tum jaldi se theek ho jao phir chalenge.

Sachi: Mujhe waise hua kya hai?

Shravan: Doctor ne bola ki tumhaari gardan ka fracture hua hai accident ki waje se.

Sachi: Lekin mera gardan theek kab ho jaayega?

Shravan smiles & says don't worry Sachi tum jaldi theek ho jaayegi..He kisses her forehead. Just then the doctor comes in & asks Shravan to leave as they have to change Sachi's dressings. Shravan refuses to leave & says aap logon ko jo bhi karna hai mere saamne hi karo main apni sachi ko apni nazron se door nahi hone dunga'The doctor tells him to please leave for formality's sake..

Shravan hesitantly leaves the room & looks helplessly at Sachi through the window..(BG music: main tenu samjhawanki..naa tere bajo lagda ji..tu ki jaane pyar mera..main kara intezaar tera tu dil aur jaan meri.) The accident scenes are shown when Sachi gets hit by the car & the pool of blood that surrounds her(BG music: sunjiyaan sunjiyaan dil di galiyan, sunjiyaan meriyaan baawan aaja teriyaan khushbuaan nu, labb diyaa meriyaan saahnvaa
aaja ve door ho jaavegi udaasi tere binaa..hayaiiii...kive karaan door udaasi dil bekarar mera, main karan intezar tera
tuhiyo dil tuhiyo jaan meri

Tears are streaming down his face as he sees the blood from Sachi's neck as the doctors are changing her dressings..

Then he feels someone tapping his shoulder & he turns & sees Mamaji looking very seriously at him .

Mamaji: Shravan tu theek toh hai na ? Kya hua tujhe ? Abhi doctor ne bola ki 1-2 din mein hum log Sachi ko ghar leke jaa sakte hai.

Shravan: Haan Mamaji doctor ne bhi mujhe bola tha'lekin main Sachi ko is tarah se nahi dekh sakta hu. Aap hi dekho itna khoon nikal raha hai Sachi ke garden se'

Mamaji then looks through the window & thinks,main kya karu apni beti ke liye?

The doctor comes out & says to both Shravan & Mamaji that they have successfully put a neck brace on her neck & they want to see how she does with it & if she does well then they can take her home tomorrow. Both Shravan & Mamaji thank the doctor & go in to see Sachi.

Sachi: Mamaji, Shravanji..

Mamaji: Beta tu ab araam kar'abhi doctors ne tujhe ek naya neck brace laga diya aur agar tu is mein comfortable hai toh kal tum ghar jaa sakti hai humaare saath.

Sachi: Mamaji mujhe abhi ghar jaana hai..mera yahan dil nahi lag raha hai'please aap mujhe ghar leke chalo..

Mamaji: Beta tu bas araam karo abhi'jab teri aakhein khulenge na phir tum ghar pe hongi 😊

Sachi somehow agrees & closes her eyes again'.she sees flashbacks of her accident & starts moving her head left & right'

End of 2nd episode'

Precap: Saachi comes home to Jaiswal mansion hand in hand with Shravan & is so happy to see the family'

Next episode coming up πŸ˜ƒ I would appreciate the feedback 😳

Edited by mirchi_tirchi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
AMAZING AMISHA!!!!!!!!
Can't wait until next update!
Do update tom!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Oooohhhh!!! Kool! Love the fact that nothing serious has happened to saachi! THANK GOD! Awesome update amisha! Keep it up!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Amisha good going keep it up,..... Now I can read all ur chapetrs in a relaxed stateπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15

So nice of you to update this soon.you are doing a great job in this fiction and the pics for each update is rightly selected.πŸ‘πŸΌ

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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Amisha, it's so good!! I want you to mail these to the donkeys at DJ's to show them how they should have written it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: momma1128

Amisha, it's so good!! I want you to mail these to the donkeys at DJ's to show them how they should have written it.


Thanks Anu 😳
OMG I sooooooooooo willl write them !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Hi Amisha I just read all ur updates wonderful start dear...wish BHPH was like this instead of this memory loss fiasco, u have captured our attention so pls continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Loved this update. Agreed with Anu above that CVs should've continued the story this way.
Keep up the good work, girl. Waiting for your next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
I just went through both ur updates...loved it...wish BHPH could have taken this turn post the accident fiasco...waiting for the next episode😊
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