SaaVan Ki Baat Pakki Hai..A new ff. Last Epi, pg31 - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amisha
Dont feel bad. Am for one, sure reading your lovely and wonderful story. I know how much of an effort it is to write. But you have to excuse me, as I was away for these 3 weeks.
As usual your each and every update is really romantic; go ahead with it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello readers..!! I am in the process of updating my ff...for those of you who have not yet caught up with the chapters, please do read them & get caught up...!! Comments are always appreciated😳

Thanks guys...!!
Til then stay tuned😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
love ur fanfic its realli gud just caught up with all da chapters n cant wait for the update 😉⭐️😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Episode 17'

Recap: SaaVan have their romantic moments'

Shravan is planning out the evening with Saachi. He wants to take her out for hawt coffee & pav bhaji like they had done before'..and of course there has to be rain'!!! He looks out the window & sees that it's bright sunny outside'

Shravan: Ufff'.ab barish kahan se honi hai'.bahir toh sunny hai'

He then thinks of the time when he & Saachi were in the car during the time they both had first confessed their love to each other'and when it wasn't raining, Saachi had told him to close his eyes & wish for rain'.he smiles & does the same'.Suddenly it starts to pour outside'Shravan opens his eyes & sees the rain'.he smiles & gets up to go to the room'

Saachi in the meantime is not too happy because she couldn't make Shreya happy'Shravan then walks in the room & pretends that he's very busy with something that he doesn't notice Saachi.

Saachi gives him a look so tht he would look towards her, but he doesn't. Instead he is humming a tune to himself & is smiling to himself..

Saachi: Shravanji'.

Shravan does not react..

Saachi: Shravanji'she faces him so that he would look at her.

Shravan: Kya hai Saachi?

Saachi looks a bit puzzled at Shravan's reaction.

Saachi: Woh Shravanji, kya hai na ki Shreya ko mere saath party pe jaana tha lekin'.

Shravan makes a face & says, Saachi'tum bas doosron ki chinta karti rehti hai'kabhi toh humaara bhi soch liya kar'!! Dekh na, barish bhi ho rahi hai bahir..

Saachi's face lights up & says, Barish??

She looks outside the balcony & sees the rain'

Saachi: Baarish'!! She dances around'

Shravan makes a face & says, tum pagal ho gayi ho kya? Barish mein jaayegi toh bheeg jaayegi aur tum bimaar bhi ho jaayegi'

Saachi: To mere saath chal na'.!

Shravan: Nahi Nahi..! main nahi jaaunga barish mein'

As Saachi turns, Shravan smiles & thinks to himself, aaunga toh zaroor tumhaare saath Saachi'!! Tera toh bas reaction dekhna tha mereko.

Saachi runs outside in the rain & dances'.(BG music: behta hai mann kahin'kahan jaante nahi'koi rok le yahin'bhaage re mann kahin aage re mann kahin jaane kidhar jaanu na') she twirls around in the rain & is enjoying every single drop of rain falling on her face.

Saachi then starts to run out the resort area & goes into the gallis of Mumbai'.she sees the stalls where she & Shravan had gotten hawt coffee & pav bhaji'she smiles & turns around & sees Shravan standing with a smile on his face'

Saachi blinks twice to see if she is dreaming or if this is for real.

Shravan walks toward her & says Main hi hu Saachi..!! Mujhe chu ke toh dekho'!!

Saachi pinches Shravan's cheek & says, Ohh'.toh aap hi ho..!! Lekin, abhi thodi deer pehle aapne ne bola ki aapko barish achi nahi lagti hai'toh..achanak mere peeche kyu aaye ho?

Shravan: Nahi..aisi koi baat nahi hai, main bas ghum raha tha aur phir tum mil gayi'.

Saachi: Acha toh, chale?

Shravan: Kahan chale?

Saachi: Shravanji, mujhe toh bhook lag gayi hai'.

Shravan: Toh kya khaana hai tujhe?

Saachi sees a pav bhaji stand & says, Pav Bhaji..!!

She runs to the stand & asks for 2 plates of spicy pav bhaji'

Shravan: Saachi lekin mujhe itna teekha khaana nahi khaana hai'

Saachi: Oh ho Shravanji'!! Barish ke mausam mein teekha khaana se kuch acha ho hi nahi sakta'!!

The guy at the stand gives them their pav bhajis & SaaVan sit down to eat'

Shravan: Saachi, mujhe khilao na apne haanthon se..

Saachi smiles & feeds Shravan.

Shravan exclaims: Saachi..!! Kitna mirch dala hai is mein..!!!

Saachi: Acha hai na?

Shravan makes a face & says, haan..!! his mouth was on fire'

Saachi looks at him & laughs'

Shravan ji aap bhi na..!! Ek dum bacha ho..!!

Shravan: aakhir tumhaara hi toh bacha hu na'.:P :P

Both laugh'

They finish their pav bhajis & then suddenly it starts pouring rain'

Saachi gets up & lifts her head up to the sky & opens her arms & embraces the rain drops falling down on her'she dances around & kicks the puddles'..
Shravan smiles & watches her'

(BG music: bheegi bheegi raaton mein'phir tum aao naa'.aisi barsaaton mein..aao na'.)

Shravan gets up & embraces Saachi'they both indulge with the raindrops falling on them'..

Just then Saachi starts to sneeze & Shravan says, Saachi tujhe sardi lag gayi hai'he gives her his jacket'.(Flashback from previous HM in Mumbai..shravan giving Saachi his jacket as she is feeling cold..)

Saachi smiles'.then Shravan says, Saachi tujhe hawt coffee piladu?

Saachi nods'

Both start walking towards the coffee stand where last time the coffee guy had seen them & given them coffee..

Coffee guy recognizes SaaVan & says, Miyan biwi hawt coffee piyoge?

SaaVan both nod..the coffee guy says, toh aap log phir se aa gaye hai Mumbai'

Shravan: Ji, hum phir se aa gaye Mumbai..
Coffee guy smiles & says, Aapki Jodi best hai sir'!! Miyan biwi all the best J

SaaVan smile & take their coffees..

They both click their glasses together & say cheers'.then they sip their coffee..

Shravan smiles & says, tujhe pata hai Saachi, pichli baar jab hum Mumbai aaye they, aur hum coffee pi rahe they main sirf Tara ke baare mein bak raha tha..

Aur ab jab main tumhaare saath hu, ab mujhe pata chal gaya hai ki tum meri zindagi mein kitna mayne rakti ho'

Saachi smiles & finishes her coffee'

Shravan: ek aur coffee chahiye?

Saachi shakes her head no'.they both get up & walk towards the main road where none other than Inspector Chulbuli Pandey is standing in her vardi..she is wearing the ever famous Salman Khan Dabangg shades & has her danda in her hand'she seems to be looking for Salman Khan as she wants to dance to 'munni badnam''.

SaaVan see Chulbuli & look at each other with shocked expressions

Shravan: O teri'!! Yeh kahan se aayi hai'!!!

Saachi: Shravanji, yeh wohi hai na'chulbuli pandey'! Jisne aapko chaddi dance karwaya tha pichli baar police station mein'.

Shravan holds Saachi's hand & motions her to run from Chulbuli'but Chulbuli sees SaaVan & tells them to stop.

SaaVan freeze as Chulbuli walks to them & checks them out..

Chulbuli: Chulbuli Pandey ne tum dono ko pehchaan liya'.~

Shravan: Hhhum dono ? mmmatlab???

Chulbuli: haaan'.tum Salman Khan ka chamcha ho'.~ pichli baar chaddi dance kiya tha na tumne ~

Shravan turns red & says, dekho inspector, hum dono ne kuch nahi kiya par'

Chulbuli interrupts him & says, chalo ho jaaye nach gaana'

SaaVan look at each other'& both exclaim: Nach gaana?

~~~Munni Badnam is playing in the background

Chulbuli makes SaaVan dance to Munni Badnam'as they are dancing it starts to rain again'then pour'.

As Chulbuli is dancing, SaaVan sneak away from her & run towards the dhaba where they had bought pav bhaji'

Suddenly they hear a gun shot'Saachi gets scared & clings onto Shravan who has no idea what is going on'.

Saachi: Shhravanji, woh kya tha?

Shravan whispers, Saachi shhh'.kuch mat bolna'abhi dekhte hai koun hai'

Shravan turns & sees someone's shadow'it seems that someone had been following them while they were enjoying their time in Mumbai'

Shravan gets scared & whispers, Saachi, chalo hum jaldi se wapas hotel chalte hai'

Saachi: Shravanji lekin kisne goli chalayi..??

Shravan: Mujhe nahi pata'chal, let's go back to the hotel before something happens'

They both walk back to the hotel to find a note on their bed'.

End'.

Precap: A mysterious person has been following SaaVan & is wanting to destroy them, the note left on their bed says, I know where you are & you can't hide from me.

Edited by mirchi_tirchi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am currently Reading chapter 10 .. still need to catch up.. will comment later when done :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update, Amisha!!!
Very romantic!!!!
Continue soon please!!!😛

shilpa
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amisha very enjoyable so far. So very like the original but also different. Now waiting to see whos jealous and wanting to destroy their happiness. Maybe Ranbeer?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update saavan too cute continue soon plzz😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update Amisha!!
do continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ok Amisha who is this baddie - Tara, Ranbir, the mechanic, Pappu...so many people
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