SaaVan Ki Baat Pakki Hai..A new ff. Last Epi, pg31 - Page 17

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow great update ranbir going to get close to sachi shravan not gonna like that contuine soon plzz😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amisha, your update is sooo wonderful and how devious of, Ranbir!!!!!😡(the pre-cap of next update...)
can't wait until shravan slaps him!😉 🤣 LOOL
great job, di!!!🤗 do continue soon... actually when you have time okay didi?😊 thanks!!!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!! Can't wait for next episode.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amisha

What happened after 14th epiosde no news from you about (I means sanchi and Shravan story ) We are all waiting for your update??😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anasuya43

Amisha

What happened after 14th epiosde no news from you about (I means sanchi and Shravan story ) We are all waiting for your update??😭


Anasuya, I am not in the mood of writing anymore episodes right now due to some personal reasons...it will be some time before I update again...Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by anasuya43

Amisha

What happened after 14th epiosde no news from you about (I means sanchi and Shravan story ) We are all waiting for your update??😭

Anasuya, I am not in the mood of writing anymore episodes right now due to some personal reasons...it will be some time before I update again...Thanks

Hai Amisha

Thanks for your reply.👏Take your own time.When you feel like writing you can update.We enjoyed your sanchi & Shravan story very much👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!! cant wait for the next one!!
Ranbir came back!!😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
To those who have been faithfully reading my fanfic this note is for you -

I want to thank you all for taking out the time to read my fanfic & for your valuable comments/suggestions. I will be updating this ff soon - Til then stay tuned & keep supporting me with my ff...!

Thanks,


Amisha
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Posted: 13 years ago

Episode 15…..

Recap: Ranbir Malholtra is back in the picture trying to create trouble for SaaVan….

And now for Episode 15…

Shravan is sitting in the conference room & listening attentively to the presentation..in the back of his mind he is a bit worried that Ranbir would come close to Saachi..he decides to text Saachi to see if she is ok..He texts: Saachi tum theek toh ho na? Kahan hai ?

He hits the send button & looks up at the presentation going on…in the corner of his eye he sees Ranbir giving him an evil look….Shravan rolls his eyes & decides to not pay attention to him.

Saachi in the meantime is sitting in the room talking with Shreya about what plans they want to make for the rest of the day & for the evening. Saachi's phone then buzzes & she sees Shravan's message. She smiles & replies back & tells Shravan that she is with Shreya in the room.

Shravan is relieved & continues with his meeting while still keeping an eye on RM.

Just then Pratap walks in the conference room. Everyone stands up & welcomes him in the room. Shravan gets a bit surprised & says, ab yeh Hitler yahan kyu aaye hai….O teri…!! Main toh gaya…!! Pratap is welcomed into the meeting & starts his presentation on the next project which is about to be launched…..at the end of his presentation he says, Ab main aap logon ko batane wala hu ke is project ko handle karne wala koun hai…He looks straight at Shravan & says, ladies & gentlemen, ab main yeh project ko Shravan Jaiswal ko dunga…..Everyone turns & looks at Shravan who turns totally red in the face. He has no clue what he is supposed to feel & what to think. All he knows is that this is one big responsibility put on his shoulders by Pratap.

He looks at Pratap & gives him a look..

Pratap: Shravan,beta aa jao stage pe..

Shravan gets up & looks around at everyone who is looking at him. All eyes were on Shravan..even RM..!! Who was standing in the corner full of smoke..LOL….He was super jealous of Shravan as he wanted this project..He had come to Mumbai for this objective only..and this was not accomplished. No. This was NOT done.

Shravan looks at RM with a dude with an attitude look…..Shravan walks to the stage & gives Pratap a hug…they both are surrounded with a round of applause from the audience..

Pratap whispers to Shravan: Beta ab tum yeh project sambhal ke karna…main nahi chahta ki is mein koi bhi mistake ho jaaye…

Shravan smiles & says, ji papa main yeh project ko ache se sambhalunga…He hugs Pratap & then goes to the mic…

Shravan: Ladies & Gentlemen, abhi aap logon ne dekha ki maine yeh project ko accept kiya apne dad se, and I am proud to take this project…The audience gives him a round of applause & as they are clapping shravan is looking around for RM & wonders where he went. He gets nervous & starts thinking about what if RM went to pareshan Saachi…

He turns to look for Pratap but Pratap is no where to be seen now..He runs from the podium & out the conference room…

He looks at his phone & sees 2 missed calls from Saachi..

Shravan quickly runs up the stairs to the hotel room & knocks the door…No one is opening the door…Saachi..!! Saachi..!! Saachi darwaaza kholo..!! Saachi…!!

Saachi is in the meantime outside trying to get away from RM…Shravan gets scared & thinks, oh no, kahin who RM ka bacha meri Saachi ko pareshaan toh nahi kar raha hai?...

He runs back downstairs to the lobby & sees Saachi fighting with RM outside by the poolside…

RM: Saachi tum itni stupid kaise ho sakti hai? Tum andhi ho..!! Tum nahi jaanti ke Shravan itna irresponsible hai, woh is project ko nahi handle karega, isse beter toh main kar sakta hu…..After all, I am Ranbir Malholtra, I am the best…..!!

Saachi rolls her eyes at him & says, Dekho Ranbir, mujhe tumse baat karne ki koi dilchaz nahi hai, main tumhaari koi bhi baat nahi mane wali hu…

She turns to leave & sees Shravan standing there..

Shravanji…!! Saachi hugs him tightly…
Shravan: Saachi tu theek toh hai na? Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?
Saachi: Shravanji please mujhe bachao,yeh RM mujhe bohut pareshan kar raha hai…!

Shravan: Acha main abhi dekhta hu…

Shravan turns to RM who has a big smirk on his face….**wicked**

Shravan: Ranbir Malholtra…..before I do something to you you better leave NOW !

Ranbir: Shravan tujhe English bohut ache se bolna aata hai…waise tum maano ya na maano I'm the best & nobody can handle that project better than me. Toh isse pehle ki main tumhaari Saachi ko kuch kardunga, tum mujhe woh project dedo aur chal phut yahan se..!!

Shravan gets pissed off & says don't you dare..!! He pushes RM into the pool & grabs Saachi's hand & runs..

Saach: Shravanji yeh sab kya ho raha hai? Yeh Ranbir Malholtra kyu humare peeche pada hai ?

Shravan: Mujhe nahi pata..bas chalo yahan se…we'll go find another resort away from all this nonsense..

Just then RM comes up behind Saachi & tries to pull her hair but Shravan sees this & slaps him on the face…RM falls down & hits his head on the ground real hard….

SaaVan look back & see that RM has fallen down & is unconscious.. Shravan gives a revengeful smile & says..Ranbir Malholtra..You are DONE !

Saachi: Shravanji, aap sach mein hero ho..

Shravan: haan haan…! Akhir main tumhaara hero hu…:P :P

SaaVan hug each other & smile…..

Shravan: Chalo, ab hum chale doosre resort mein ? Taaki koi humko disturb naa kare?

Saachi smiles & both SaaVan walk to the ever famous Taj Hotel & Resort….

Saachi: Wow Shravanji…!! Hum yahan kaise paunch gaye hai? Taj Hotel & Resort…!! And indeed it was a very nice hotel….all nicely polished granite floors…a big water fountain in the front of the lobby & everyone dressed professionally….

Shravan: haan Saachi, main chahta hu ki main tumko bhi ek acha sa treat du yahan pe..jab main apne project ke saath busy honga to tum Shreya ke saath yahan par busy reh sakti ho aur jab main shaam ko wapas aaunga toh main tumko kahin ghumne ke liye le chalunga..what say?

Saachi smiles & hugs Shravan….She was too excited…too happy….she could not wait to be with shravan alone after work….

Shravan: Chalo Saachi let's go to our room….

SaaVan check into the hotel & they take the keys & go to their room which happened to be a luxury suite reserved for them…

They open the door & see the beautiful room in front of them…it was fully furnished & the whole bed was decorated with flower petals & there were candles lit all around the room..

Saachi: wow Shravanji..!! Yeh sab aapne kiya ?

Shravan closes the door & lightly pushes Saachi towards the wall…He puts his forefinger in front of her lips & says..shhh…..no questions…..SaaVan have an eye-lock moment…..Shravan then slowly leans forward to kiss Saachi & Saachi closes her eyes & Shravan kisses her soft sweet lips….he hugs her tightly & then starts kissing her cheeks softly…..Saachi starts to feel a bit ticklish as Shravan was a bit scruffy..hehehehee…..Shravan doesn't notice Saachi trying to move back so he keeps kissing her moving down to her neck…Saachi is filled with passion & with ecstacy…..(BG music..jaadu hai nasha hai…madhoshiyaan…tujhko bhula ke ab jaau kahan….)

Precap: SaaVan are in bed….not caring about anything in the world….after all this is their real honeymoon ;) ;)

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hai Amisha

I am surprised and very happy to see your update Episode15😆🤗
🤗 Keep it up 👍🏼
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