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Amisha plz continue writing even if it takes time. your story is as sweet as you😃
Episode 13'.
Recap: SaaVan leave for their 2nd honeymoon/business trip to Mumbai'
SaaVan are still stuck in traffic & Shravan sees Bunty & Shreya in the traffic jam'he walks towards them & says, "Arre Bunty Shreya tum logon yahan pe kya kar rahe ho ?
Bunty: Oh hi Shravan..! Hum log actually Mumbai jaa rahe hai..mujhe ek business trip ke liye jaana hai toh Shreya bhi aana chahti thi mere saath'Is ne abhi Mumbai nahi dekha'
Shreya feels embarrassed so she elbows Bunty'
Bunty: Kya hai Shreya ? Tum mereko elbow kyu kar rahi ho ?
Shravan: Acha yeh sab chodo, actually main aur Saachi bhi jaa rahe hai Mumbai'Dad mujhe ek business trip ke liye bhej rahe hai aur saachi ko bhi jaana tha Mumbai toh I thought I would take her for 2nd honeymoon..
Shreya: are wah jiju ! Yeh toh double date hoga phir ! Jab aap aur Bunty busy honge meetings mein toh main aur Saachi didi mazaa karenge'..!!
She gets excited'just then the traffic starts to move finally & Shravan runs back to the car'
Saachi: Shravan ji kya hua ?
Shravan: Saachi tumhaare liye ek surprise hai'he smiles..
Saachi: Kya ?
Shravan starts driving & says, "Maine abhi Bunty aur Shreya ko dekha'woh log bhi Mumbai jaa rahe hai'
Saachi gets excited & says, Really Shravanji ?
Shravan nods & smiles..
Saachi gets excited & hugs Shravan'
They finally reach the airport & get on the plane for Mumbai'.
******Jaiswal Mansion in the meantime*****
Dadi is pacing up & down..Madhura comes to her & asks her what is wrong.
Dadi: Madhura jabse Saachi Shravan gaye na, unki bohut yaad aa rahi hai haan..
Madhura: Arre maa, yaad toh mujhe bhi aa rahi hai unke lekin unko jaana pada naa'woh log apna honeymoon phir se manaane gaye hai aur Shravan bhi kuch kaam karega wahan pe'toh pls aap chinta mat ki jiye'
Dadi smiles & says, haan Madhura yeh theek baat hai'
***Mumbai***
SaaVan & Shrebuny :P (short for Shreya & Bunty) both check into the beach resort hotel which was reserved by Pratap'
They check into their rooms & get settled in- SaaVan's room & Shrebuny's rooms are next to each other's coincidentally'.
Shreya & Saachi are super happy to be in Mumbai which makes Shravan & Bunty happy too'
Saachi: Shreya ab hum log bohut masti karenge yahan'hum log Mumbai darshan karenge dhoom dham se !
Shreya smiles & says, haan didi ! bohur mazaa aayega !! Mujhe abhi jaana hai beach par Mumbai darshan ke liye'
Saachi: haan toh chal na'mujhe bhi Mumbai darshan ke liye jaana hai..
Shravan pokes Saachi & says, Arre, mujhe bhi jaana hai tumhaare saath Mumbai Darshan ke liye..
Saachi: haan toh aaye na humaare saath !! Bunty tub hi chal..
Shreya: didi ! Lekin mujhe tumhaare saath jaana hai Mumbai darshan ke liye'chaliye naaa'
Saachi looks clueless as she is getting pulled from both sides..she doesn't know who to listen to'
She then decides to go with everyone as she does not want to hurt anyone's feelings'so she says, hum sab challenge Mumbai darshan ke liye'she looks at Shravan who doesn't seem too happy as he wanted to be with Saachi alone !! and not double-dating'but he smiled anyway & said "lets go'" !
Both couples get ready & go to the beach & SaaVan re-live their memories on the beach ' Saachi running in the water & Shravan just staring at her & admiring her beauty'what a site it was to see his beautiful wife enjoying the beach of Mumbai'.
Saachi looks back & Shravan & motions him to join her'Shravan runs & gladly joins her & starts to splash water at her,...
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Meanwhile, Shrebuny are enjoying themselves too'Both are splashing water at each other & chase each other around'while SaaVan are having the time of their lives'.
Then Saachi comes to Shreya & splashes her'..they both are enjoying along with Shravan & Bunty fooling around with the water'
Then Shravan says, " Chale hum pani puri khaate hai'."
Shreya: Great idea jiju ! mereko Mumbai ka pani puri khaani hai'
Saachi smiles & says chalo'! Pani puri khaate hai'
They walk to the pani puri stand & order pani puris & they enjoy themselves'..they also have buddhi ke baal & Saachi notices Shravan not too happy as he is wanting to be alone with Saachi..she goes & sits next to him & says, kya hua shravan ji?
Shravan: Yaar Saachi mujhe tumhaare saath akele mein time spend karna tha yahan pe'mujhe double-date nahi karna hai..
Saachi feels a bit sad & says, lekin shravan ji, shreya yahan pe pehli baar aayi hai aur who bhi Bunty ke saath'
Shravan: Woh sab toh theek hai Saachi lekin jab hum pehli baar aaye they na Mumbai toh woh alag baat thi..tab main tumse pyar nahi karta tha..lekin ab toh karta hu na, aur main chahta hu ki main tumhaare saath bohut time spend karu aur ache khubsurat lamhe aur yaadein banau'
Saachi smiles & says, it's ok Shravan ji, hum log shaam ko jaayenge bahir aur khoob masti karenge'woh bhi akele'
Shravan gets happy & says promise ?
Saachi: Promise'!
They hug'.
Episode ends..
Precap: SaaVan are out on a date & have pav bhaji in the rain'.
Originally posted by: mirchi_tirchi
Hi Everyone -
Just wanted to shoot a quick note in regards to this ff I have started..I know quite a few of you have asked me when I will be updating etc...The reasons why I am not being regular in updating is that I am honestly not in the mood anymore to write this ff coz a lot of people have left the forum due to several reasons😕 and I do not know if others are reading my ff or not besides the ones who are very faithful in replying to my updates (thanks a lot you guys !)😳..but nonetheless I am in the middle of writing the next episode - I will post it as soon as I am done which will be after Easter...I am very busy with a number of things therefore I will be ending this fanfic very soon - I will be writing longer episodes to fill in for what I want to write -Thanks -Amisha
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