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Posted: 13 years ago

Episode 12




Recap: Shravan wants to plan a special fun & romantic date for Saachi – Pratap sends him on a business project trip to Mumbai where Shravan will take Saachi. Saachi goes out shopping with Madhura & Nidhi & buys Shravan a suit..




And now for episode 12...



***Jaiswal Mansion***



Shravan is standing with a big bouquet of red roses in front of SaaVan's room. Saachi is surprised & says, "Wow Shravanji ! Aap itne romantic kabse ho gaye ? Yeh lal gulab mere liye hai kya?"

Shravan gives her the roses & says, ofcoz tumhaare liye hai Saachi.....they hug each other tightly & share a moment together (BG music: todh do khud ko tum baahon mein meri baahon mein meri baahon mein.....labon ko labon pe sajao...kya ho tum mujhe ab batao...) SaaVan look into each other's eyes & are lost in each other.....Shravan then starts to slow dance w/ Saachi...the lights are dim with candles lit around them.....Shravan twirls Saachi around & looks into her eyes....Saachi blushes & looks down.....so much love between SaaVan....they are unseparable....


Just then Shravan's phone rings...It's Pratap...


Shravan answers his phone..: Ji Papa..

Pratap: Haan Shravan, maine abhi tumhaari aur Saachi ke tickets book ki hai Mumbai ke liye...Main abhi ghar aake tum logon ko deta hu..aur kal subhe tum dono nikal lena....

Shravan smiles & says, Ji Papa, main aur Saachi abhi tayariyan karte hai...


he hangs up the phone & hugs Saachi...


Saachi: Shravanji kya baat hai ? Aap itne khush kyu lag rahe ho ? Papa ne kya kaha ?

Shravan: Saachi ! Papa hum dono ko Mumbai bhej rahe hai ek business trip ke liye...main ek special project karne jaa raha hu aur phir jab main wapas aaunga tumhaare paas hum dono Mumbai ghumenge....


Saachi gets so happy & says, Sach ?

Shravan smiles & says, Sach....!!


they hug each other tightly...then Saachi says, Shravanji aap apna packing shuru ki jiye kal subhe humko nikalna hai...


Shravan nods & starts packing...they get their suitcases out & start putting their clothes in the suitcases..

Madhura comes in the room & says, Arre Saachi Shravan ! Tum dono kahan jaa rahe ho ?

Shravan: Ma ! Papa hum logon ko Mumbai bhej rahe hai kal ek project ke liye...toh uska hi packing ho raha hai abhi..


Madhura: Mumbai ! Arre wah ! Kitni deer tak ?

Shravan: Ek hafta ke liye...

Madhura smiles & says, I'm so proud of you beta. Ab tum zimidar ban rahe ho...aur mujhe yakeen hai ki tumhaara kaam kamyaab hoga...Saachi jo hai tere saath..


SaaVan smile at each other...

Shravan: Ji Ma...Saachi mere saath hai toh kuch galat nahi ho sakta mere saath..


Saachi smiles...she then remembers the suit which she bought Shravan & wants to pack it without him seeing it as it's a surprise...She decides that he would wear it when they get to Mumbai for when they go out to dinner or some special function which would be bound to happen !



Madhura notices Saachi trying to pack the suit without Shravan looking so she diverts Shravan's attention & says, Shravan beta...tum ek minute neeche aa ja...kuch kaam hai...

Shravan goes with Madhura downstairs...

Saachi gets her golden opportunity & hides the suit in her suitcase so Shravan doesn't see.


Nidhi bhabhi then comes in...Arre Saachi ! Yeh sab kya ho raha hai ? Shravan ne suit nahi dekha ?


Saachi: Nahi babhi, abhi hum log kal subhe Mumbai jaa rahe hai toh maine abhi unka suit pack kiya aur jab hum Mumbai mein dinner pe jaayenge ya phir koi function pe jaana hoga toh phir unko gift kardungi....


Nidhi: Hmm...good idea Saachi....have lots of fun when you go to Mumbai....Wahan pe waise Tara nahi hogi...bas tum aur Shravan.....

Saachi blushes....she cannot stop smiling...

Nidhi hugs her...


Just then Pratap is calling Saachi downstairs...


Saachi: Ji papa main abhi aayi...

Saachi goes downstairs to Pratap....

Pratap: Beta, yeh tum dono ke tickets hai Mumbai ke liye...tum aur Shravan bohut masti karke wapas aana...

Saachi: Ji Papa...thank you so much...she gives Pratap a hug...


Saachi then smiles & goes back upstairs & gets ready to leave..Shravan then comes in the room & says, "Saachi, lets leave today itself...! Main tumhaare saath bohut time spend karna chahta hu toh kyu na hum log aaj hi nikal jaate hai ?

Saachi smiles & nods....SaaVan then hug each other & then prepare to leave..


they say bye to everyone & take the family's blessings & leave..


************* In the car ****************


SaaVan are all in smiles driving to the airport to fly out to Mumbai...Shravan keeps staring at Saachi & Saachi is all sharmili types..

Just then they run into a traffic jam....

Shravan: O teri...!! Ab yeh kya hua !!! Main abhi bahar jaa ke dekhta hu

Saachi sits in the car while Shravan goes out to see what is going on..


there is lots of traffic & there seems to be an accident which has halted the traffic...

Suddenly, Shravan sees Bunty & Shreya in the huddle of traffic.....Bunty is arguing with Shreya about something which Shravan cannot make out......


End of Episode 12...


Precap: SaaVan finally make it to the airport to fly out to Mumbai along with Bunty & Shreya...:P Double date it is !



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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice and interesting Amisha..carry on what will happen in mumbai,
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Posted: 13 years ago
Double date second honeymoon! BRING IT ON!!! Update soon Amisha!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
cant wait amisha, update soon.DOUBLE DATE sounds interesting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very beautiful and interesting, Amisha!!!
Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting update, cant wait for the double date!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Interesting update, Amisha!! Eagerly looking forward, to the Double Date.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Everyone -

Just wanted to shoot a quick note in regards to this ff I have started..I know quite a few of you have asked me when I will be updating etc...The reasons why I am not being regular in updating is that I am honestly not in the mood anymore to write this ff coz a lot of people have left the forum due to several reasons😕 and I do not know if others are reading my ff or not besides the ones who are very faithful in replying to my updates (thanks a lot you guys !)😳..but nonetheless I am in the middle of writing the next episode - I will post it as soon as I am done which will be after Easter...I am very busy with a number of things therefore I will be ending this fanfic very soon - I will be writing longer episodes to fill in for what I want to write -

Thanks -


Amisha
Edited by mirchi_tirchi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Oh amisha, we follow your ff.please dont stop writing.update whenever you are free but dont stop writing.U can post ur ff in FC too.dont end the story with hurry-burry just as the cv's did dear.😕

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amisha

As I have wrtitten earlier please do not stop sending updates of Saavan Ki Baat Pakki Hai.We love your writing.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ for your writing.
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