SaaVan Ki Baat Pakki Hai..A new ff. Last Epi, pg31 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Amisha,It was a nice sabzi family touch by bringing alooooooooooo in your ff๐Ÿคฃ

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great job Amisha!!!!!
Veery loooooooooooooong!๐Ÿ˜† Just SUPERB!!!!!!
Excellent JOB!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amisha wow great update .so romantic.. Aloo seems to have got deeply ingrained into ur FF.. bagwan ab Saavan ko baccha do.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update! :D

Not gonna comment on the aloo for my sanity :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update, Amisha!!! Loved the touch of aloo that you have incorporated ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
๐ŸคฃShravan: Saachi mujhe aalooo ke paratha banado....bohut saara aaalooo us mein daalo :P


Amisha - what a great update!! Love the above homage to the besharmi Sabzi family!! ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amisha

I was sad that BHPH was over๐Ÿ˜ญ.But after going through SaaVan Ki Baat Pakki Hai my face become๐Ÿ˜† DJ should consult you how to write and execute the romantic scene from you.Well done.
Expecting more from you.We love to read it๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘


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Posted: 13 years ago
Amisha this a beautiful update!! i love how you always have the lyrics of the BG music, its makes it even easier to picture the scene....loved this update!!๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago

Episode 11:


Recap: SaaVan have finally consummated wink wink & Saachi fed Shravan aaalooo ke parathe * courtesy of sabzi family * :P :P




And now for episode 11 -


Shravan is sitting in his office daydreaming about Saachi......He wants to do something very special for her & thinks of planning a date which she will never forget. He wants to give her a romantic but yet fun date...just like the one they had when they were in Mumbai.....* wink wink *


Just then Pratap walks into Shravan's cubicle...he notices Shravan is staring into thin air & has a smile on his face....

Pratap: * AHEM *

Shravan looks up & says, Ji Papa....aapko kuch kaam hai ?

Pratap smiles & says, haan beta, mujhe tere se kuch kaam hai...zara mere office mein aana...tere se zaruri baat karni hai..


Shravan gets up & walks to Pratap's office.

Pratap explains to Shravan a special project he wants him to do & says that it is very important that he goes to Mumbai to complete this project..Shravan gets happy & thinks this is the perfect chance for him to take Saachi with him to Mumbai & relive their memories minus Tara :P Shravan is hardly paying attention to Pratap explaining about the project & he goes into his dream world where he sees Saachi dressed in a white saari & they are dancing to aa bhi jaa sanam...yuh na kar sitam teri baahon mein mar mitenge hum.......Shravan closes his eyes & is so in love.


Pratap notices Shravan in his dream world & pokes him....


Pratap: Shravan beta ! Kahan kho gaye ho ?

Shravan gets back into reality mode & says, "sorry papa main..."

Pratap knows what Shravan was thinking & says, "acha beta...toh tum Saachi ke baare mein soch raha tha haan?"


Shravan blushes & says ji papa....main actually Saachi ko ek romantic aur fun date pe leke jaana chahta hu aur yeh mumbai trip toh ek dum perfect rahega hum dono ke liye....jab main kaam se wapas aa jaaunga hotel toh main apni Saachi ko bohut ache se ghuma dunga poora Mumbai sheher mein.....

Pratap smiles & says, "very good beta, lekin please tum apna kaam pe bhi dhyaan rakho....yeh project bohut important hai.....don't loose track haan.."


Shravan: Ji papa....main apna kaam bhi karunga aap chinta mat karna....main yeh project bohut dhyaan se karunga...


Pratap: Very good beta...I'm proud of you my son ! Chalo, ab tum apne cabin mein jao aur taiyaariyan karo....kal subhe tum aur Saachi ko bhejdunga Mumbai...


Shravan gets excited & leaves Pratap's cabin & as he leans against the wall he has a big smile on his face.....(BG music: tere liye....wada hai mera main hu tere liye....honga kabhi hum na tum judaaa....)



*****Jaiswal Mansion ****



Saachi too is in her dream world....she is so happy that she has finally won Shravan's heart & that Shravan is so much in love with her...

Just then, Madhura walks into SaaVan's room & sees Saachi lost in her own world....


Madhura: arre Saachi beta !


Saachi: Ji ma ?


Madhura: kahan koyi ho ?


Saachi blushes & smiles....: Nahi ma main wohh.....


Madhura: Kya ? Madhura senses that she is in love with Shravan..


Achaa....! Main samajh gayi...toh tum Shravan ke baare mein soch rahi thi ?


Saachi blushes again & turns red.....ji maa...main bohut khush ki ab Shravanji mujhse bohut pyar karte hai aur aaj subhe wohh office bhi gaye hue hai....main bas chahti hu ki Shravanji hamesha successful rahe aur wohh apne mann laga ke kaam kare....aur main hamesha unke saath dungi...


Madhura smiles & says, "hmm....yeh hui naa baat....mujhe itni achi beti mili....ab main tujhe bahu nahi bulaungi...tum meri beti ho...." she gives Saachi a big hug.....& says, acha beta tu mere saath bahar chalegi ? Main shopping ke liye bahar jaa rahi hu...



Saachi thinks to herself, haan main Shravanji ke liye kuch kharidungi....

Saachi: Ji maa, main bhi chalti hu aapke saath...

Madhura smiles & says, :chalo....!

Saachi gets ready to go with Madhura for shopping & Nidhi comes by & asks Saachi where she's going...Nidhi too wants to join Madhura & Saachi...


Saachi: Chalo Babhi lets go for shopping....


All 3 ladies go for shopping....they are all browsing the stores & Saachi tells Nidhi that she wants to buy Shravan something really nice which she wants to gift him...

Nidhi smiles & says, "chal Saachi main tujhe ek acha sa store dikhati hu jahan tujhe ek acha sa outfit milega Shravan ke liye"..


Saachi goes into the store & sees something nice for Shravan..she then thinks about the time when she was in Mumbai with Shravan & he was trying on different outfits for his date with Tara :roll:


Saachi sees a nice black suit with a light pink shirt which would look so hot on Shravan :P :P


she goes to the salesman & tells him to pack the suit for her...she takes the suit & smiles....

the other ladies are picking out saris for themselves & Madhura tells Saachi to pick out a sari for herself too...

Saachi thinks, ab mujhe nahi pata ki Shravanji ko kounsa sari ko pasand aayenge....


she then says, "nahi ma, mereko sari nahi chahiye, main bas Shravanji ke liye kuch dekh rahi hu...."


Madhura: Arre beta kuch le na apne liye...tum hamesha Shravan ko sochti ho...kabhi toh apne liye bhi kuch liya kar...!


Saachi smiles & says ok...she looks around at the saaris & chooses a black one with lots of beadwork on it....just like the one Shravan had gifted her when he confessed his love to her....this sari had a backless blouse & was very sexy....:P

She tells the salesman to pack the sari & all the ladies leave after buying their outfits.


Saachi comes into her room & finds Shravan standing there with a bouquet of red roses for her....



End of episode 11



Precap: SaaVan go to Mumbai together & relive their honeymoon memories......this time, minus Tara...& ofcoz with lots of love....



Edited by mirchi_tirchi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amisha!!!!!!!!!! ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—
It feels sssooooo good to see your posts once again! We all missed u so much! Can't wait to talk to u once again...do come on SC soon!! Will be waiting for u!
And ur ff?? What can I say?? Saachi and Shravan going on a second honeymoon..in a way...freaking awesome!!! I can't wait for another update!! Now I can say (since u got ur net connection) UPDATE SOON!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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