SaaVan Ki Baat Pakki Hai..A new ff. Last Epi, pg31 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Very nice update, Amisha. More SaaVan moments...Wow. πŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Good Amisha..
Atleast you didnt shock us by saying Saachi forgot ShravanπŸ˜›...
FF well on course..Do plz continue..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Amisha!

You're so creative πŸ‘

Write some more and thanks for the PM πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
awwwww loved it cotinue soon plzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

Recap: Saachi gets dizzy & falls down on the floor- doctor says her blood pressure is low'shravan comes to see her..

Episode 9:

Shravan is feeding Saachi some yummy paneer pakodas & they both have eye-lock moments'.then Mami comes with more food..she made tandoori roti with bengan ka bharta & daal makhni'.

Shravan: Wah Mami ! Aapne toh kamal kiya'! Itni achi khushbu aa rahi hai'..!

Saachi's mouth is also watering upon seeing the food'

Mami: Yeh lo beta'(hands the food to Shravan to have him feed Saachi) ab tu Saachi ko khaana khilaa'main abhi aayi'

Shravan gets happy & starts feeding Saachi'

Saachi: Shravanji aapko main bhi khilati hu' she starts feeding him too'

Shravan then holds Saachi's hand as she is feeding him & he holds her tightly'.(BG music: aa ke bhar lo baazuon mein'tumko hai kasam'jaan meri ja rahi sanam'.)







[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=llIeIuSmTz4[/YOUTUBE]









Just then Mamaji walks in & sees SaaVan holding each other's hands'.he decides not to disturb them & he closes the door'.

SaaVan don't even notice that Mamaji was in the room ' they are just lost in each other's eyes'all they see is love for each other'.Shravan then decides to take Saachi back home & have their moments together...he takes Saachi in his arms & says, "Saachi..ab chale ghar?"

Saachi nods yes'.

Shravan smiles'& takes Saachi out the door where Mamaji & Mami are standing in the hallway..

Mami: Arre beta tum log kahan jaa rahe ho ?

SaaVan: Hum log ghar ja rahe hai Mami..

Saachi: Ab main theek ho gayi hu, main ab Shravanji ke saath ghar jaa rahi hu Mami..

Mamaji: Lekin beta, tum apna khayaal rakhna'.aur Shravan beta tu bhi dhyaan rakh meri beti ka'

Shravan: Ji Mamaji..main Saachi ka khayaal zarur rakhuga'Saachi meri zimidaari hai aur kal se main office bhi jaaya karunga'

Saachi smiles & they both leave..

In the car-

Shravan keeps staring at Saachi in the mirror'

Saachi notices this & says, "Kyaa hai Shravanji aap mujhe is tarah kyu dekh rahe ho?"

Shravan: Kyu ki tum bohut sundar lag rahi ho isilye'.

Saachi gets shy & her cheeks turn red'

They arrive at home & the whole Jaiswal family are not home'as soon as SaaVan enters, Shravan runs with Saachi up to their room where there is a round pink silk bed decorated with red roses & candles lit all around the room'Shravan picks up Saachi in his arms & carefully lays her down on the bed'

(BG Music: sanson ko sanson mein dhal ne do zara'dheemi se dhadkan ko bhadne do zara..lamhon ki guzaarish hai yeh..paas aa jaaye'hum'hum tum'.tum'hum tum')

He slowly bends down & kisses Saachi so lovingly'caressing her'.Saachi gets shy & turns'.Shravan whispers in her ears, "I love you Saachi" Saachi looks back at him & smiles shyly while looking down'" I love you too Shravanji"

They both hug each other tightly never to let go''

End''''''.

Precap: SaaVan are asleep in each other's arms not caring about the world around them'.

Edited by mirchi_tirchi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
Beautiful update, Amisha!!!!!
Do continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Woah Amisha so they are having their C nite.. good.. keep going..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Short and sweet update amisha.Hope sanchi doesnt divert his attention here by saying something silly.πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
^^^ haha shravanji phone utaye na.
Koi aapko baut yaar kar raha hai 🀣 🀣
Anyways...great update amisha! Lovely to see Saavan together and THANK GOD! You changed the ending of that night and made it to how it should be...at least that's what I can guess from the precap..waiting for the next one πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...so the c-night is just round the corner...😍😍 lol...pls dont make saachi say "shravanji phone uthaiye na...koi aapko badi shiddat se yaad kar raha hai"πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† anyways the precap doesnt point to that possibility....continue soon...😊
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