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~Kaash Mere Hote Part 17~
Anokhi:Shravan,a pleasant surprise since tune toh kaha tha ki tum nahin aaoge..Khayr,baitho..
Shravan:Kyun bulaaya hai tumne mujhe?
Anokhi:I'm not going to beat around the bush..Sach sach batao mujhe ki Saachi,jo nikli thi Aman ke ghar ke party ke liye,woh tumhare ghar par kya kar rahi thi?
Shravan:You...you came to fetch her??
Anokhi:Obviously..Agar tumhare call ya message mujhe nahin mila hota,toh shayad main ab tak Aman se pooch bhi liya hota ki uske party mein kya hua tha..
Shravan:Aur agar tumne Aman se pch bhi liya hta th shayad wh tumhein yeh zaroor bataa deta ki party par actually kya hua tha par yeh toh nahin bata pata ki Saachi ke saath kya hua tha aur agar usse kuch h bhi jaata toh usse koi farqh nahin padhtha..
Anokhi:Theekh hai,toh tum mujhe bataa ki party par aisa kya hua tha jo Saachi itne nashe mein thi aur tumhaare ghar phanch gayi??
Shravan:(narrated his part of the story)Aur..
Anokhi:Aur tumne usse tumhare ghar par leker gaya..Aur waha Saachi th kuch aur hi soch kar baith gayi hai..
Shravan:Main nikal raha hoon kyunki mera kaam th already ho gaya hain..
Anokhi:Acha,sun..(stopped Shravan who was heading towards the dor of Ankhi's cabin)Thanks..for saving Saachi!!
Shravan:Whatever..Waise bhi,isse acha bahaana nahin h sakta tumhare dost ki jaan bachaane ke liye,yeh shaadi se!!(left her office)
Anokhi:Itna sab kuch ho gaya aur Saachi th aise behave kar rahi hain jaise kuch hua hi naa ho..Dn't tell me ki woh ab bhi yeh shaadi karna chathi hain;isse pehle ki wh kuch naa kare,mujhe th usse baat karni hi hogi!!(informed Nisha about her urgent meeting elsewhere and to take dwn important messages if there were any)
Meanwhile,Nidhi got the message from Shravan that Saachi's safe and back at home and her friend,Anokhi had picked her up last night;Nidhi felt immensely relieved and started helping out Madhura in making the dishes for dinner.
~Saachi's room~
Anokhi:Itna sab kuch ho gaya aur tumne mujhe inform tak nahin kiya?Itna bhi zaroori nahin samajh thi,hhmm?
Saachi:Par tumhe yeh sab kaise bata?
Anokhi:Shravan ne mujhe sab kuch bata diya tha..Aur tum suicide karne jaa rahi thi,tab woh tumhe dekh liya tha aur bachaa kar apne ghar par lekar gaya tha..Usne mujhe raat ko phone kiya tha aur tumhare ata pata mujhe diya tha aur main seeda tumhe pick up karne aa gayi thi..Na jaane tum kya sch rahi thi uske baarein mein..
Saachi:Haan par mujhe kaise bata hoga?Main toh..
Anokhi:Talli j ho gayi thi..
Saachi:Chup kar,mami sunn legi..
Anokhi:Toh abhi chalo mere saath uske ghar..
Saachi:Kyun???
Anokhi:Thanks kehne ke liye kyunki usne tumhe bachaaya tha aur srry usse misunderstand jo kiya tha aur bina bataaye wahaa se chali bhi gayi thi..
Saachi:Abhi?Kaise??
Anokhi:Don't worry,main mami ko koi bahaana sunaa kar hum yahaa se jaayenge..Chale??(Saachi got ready and went with Anokhi)
~Jaiswal Mansion~
Shravan had parked his bike.As he walked,he noticed two new cars having been parked and wondered who had come in those cars.He rang the doorbell and as Madhura pened the door,Shravan heard the laughter of his dad and several guests who had apparently come to his home.Madhura smiled and asked him to go and change into sme good attire and asked Nidhi to accompany him.Before he could ask anything further,Nidhi brught him to his room.
~Shravan's room~
Shravan:Aur aap mujjhe ab bata rahe hain?
Nidhi:Main tumse kabse phone kar rahi thi?Agar tumhe phone uthaa liya hta,toh shayad yeh tumhe pehle bata chalta lekin afsoss..
Shravan:Argghh!!Agar bata hota,toh kisi bhi tarha main itna late aa jaata..Nidhi dear,please mujhe bachaa..
Nidhi:Dekh Shravan,yeh toh Papa ki bohat achi business partner hain..Mujhe nahin lagta ki main kuch karpaaongi..
Shravan:Please,Nidhi dear..
Nidhi:Filhaal tum change karke neeche aa jaao!!Main kuch sch thi hoon,jaldi karna!!(went downstairs to help serve dinner)
Shravan was instructed by Nidhi to not express his frustration in front of the guests but he didn't feel like obeying her commands,mildly showing his disinterest as he had walked down the stairs to meet Pratap's friend and family.While Pratap opened up about their joint business ventures in jewellery designs,Shravan kept on loking at Nidhi who looked a bit confused and gestured to him to smile and appear interested but Shravan didn't even try to do so.He was simply hoping for a slim chance of miracle to take place as all he could think about was Tara,who had captured his heart for good.
Meanwhile,Anokhi was driving towards Shravan's home but unfortunately both Anokhi and Saachi got stuck in a heavy traffic jam and just then,Anokhi thought that she can possibly not get any other better opportunity to talk to Saachi about backing off from the unwanted marriage.
Anokhi:Saachi...
Saachi:Anokhi shayad humein wahaaa nahin jaana chahiye..
Anokhi:Kyun nahin??Jaldi baat khatam karenge aur uske baad hum seede ghar wapas chalenge,ok?
Saachi:Hhmm par kaise??Yeh traffic jam bhi na...Aur main mami se yeh keh kar aayi thi ki main ek ghante mein wapas aaongi!!Aur upar se agar kisi ne bhi hum dono ko,khas kar mujhe dekh liya toh bata nahin kya hoga..
Anokhi:Ab kya hona baaki reh gaya hai??
Saachi:Anokhi,tum ab bhi mujhse naaraaz ho??Kyunki maine tumhe kuch nahin bataaya??
Anokhi:Aur nahin toh kya??Itna badaa hadsaa ho gaya hai tumhare saath aur tum...Ab kya karne ka iraada hai??
Saachi:Anokhi,tum thande dimaag se socho aur tumhe yeh sahi lagegi..Do din baat meri shaadi hne waali hain..
Anokhi:Tum pagal toh nahin ho gaye ho??Woh idiot,kamina yeh keh chuka hain ki woh tumse shaadi nahin karega aur tum phir se yeh shaadi ke chakkar mein..
Saachi:Main kisi bhi tarha Amanji se baat karke unhe manaalungi...
Anokhi:Aur tum kaise jaaoge??Do din bacha hai aur tumhari mami tumhe jaane degi ghar se bahar??Dekho Saachi,agar woh jaane bhi deti,main tumhe jaane nahin doongi...Arre Saachi,tumhare rabb bhi yeh nahin chahthi ki yeh shaadi ho!!Tum samajh thi kyun nahin ho??
Saachi:Anokhi,bohat dher ho chuki hai...
Anokhi:Koi dher nahin huyi hai,Saachi..In fact,main toh yeh kahungi ki ab toh dher bilkul bhi nahin huyi hai kyunki shaadi abhi tak nahin huyi hai!!Main toh kehti hoon ki tum apne mama mami se baat karo aur agar tum hesitate kar rahi ho,toh mujhe bolo,main jaa kar bataa sakti hoon..
Saachi:Tum aisa kuch nahin karoge aur aage dekh kar gaadi chalaaoo!!
Anokhi:Saachi..Arrgghhh!!!!
~Shravan's home~
Meanwhile,Pratap asked his friend's daughter,Isha if she wanted to talk to Shravan in private and she simply looked at her dad who smiled at her.Pratap insisted and sweetly told Shravan to show Isha his room but he looked at Nidhi who was nowhere around for she was called to the kitchen.Shravan reluctantly got up and invited Isha.As he walked up the stairs gradually,Isha kept asking him several questions to which Shravan simply gave one-word or at the most,one-liners and brought her to the outside of his room.
Shravan:Tum hamesha se aise hi ho ya aaj kuch special..I mean,tum hamesha iss tarha badhbadaate rehte ho ya phir...
Isha:Actually,main bohat nervous hoon aur kabhi kabhi aise..
Shravan:Acha tumhe koi boyfriend hain??
Isha:Nahin..Kyun??
Shravan:Nahin bas aise hi pooch raha tha kyunki aaj kal toh sab ke paas koi na koi hote rehte hain toh maine socha ki tumhe bhi..
Isha:Dad ko agar aisa kuch bata chalta toh meri khayr nahin...Humaare ghar mein Dad ki decision ke mutaabik hi chalte hain..
Shravan:Acha??(murmured to himself)Kam se kam iss maamle mein toh hum dono barabar hain,ek doosre ke baap se darte hain...(looked at Isha)Dekho,main tumse kuch kehna chahtha hoon...(paused as he heard the doorbell ring)
Neeta opened the door and saw two girls having stood at their doorstep who introduced themselves to her as Saachi and Anokhi.
Saachi:(whispered to Anokhi)Lagta hai ki hum dono galat waqt par aa gayi..Maine kaha tha na ki aaj nahin chalna chahiye...
Anokhi:(whispered back)Chup karo...(looked at Neeta)Hii,yeh Shravan ka ghar hain na??
Neeta:Haan,Shravan yehi rehta hai par aap dono hain kaun??
Anokhi:Jee,aapko abhi abhi bataya tha ki main Anokhi hoon aur yeh Saachi..
Neeta:Zaahir si baat hai par..
Anokhi:Ohhh ab samjhi..Erm,hum dono Shravan se milne aaye the...Hum unke dost hain..(Saachi hit Anokhi's elbow)uch,kya kar rahe ho,Saachi??
Neeta:Actually,kuch mehmaan aaye huwe hain toh shayad tum dono..
Nidhi:Neeta,kaun hai??Ohh hii Saachi...Tum kaise ho??
Neeta:Bhabhi,aap Saachi ko jaante ho??
Nidhi:Haan woh kya hain na..(paused as she realized that she might get caught and at the same time get Shravan into trouble and quickly made up an excuse)Neeta,Shravan ne mujhe ek baar iski tasveer dikhaayi thi...Aa jao,Saachi aur yeh..
Anokhi:Anokhi,Saachi ki best friend..
Nidhi:Hii..Come in!!!
Shravan:(widened his eyes in shock as he saw Saachi and Anokhi and thought to himself)Yeh dono??Ab foren ghar par hi aa gayi yeh dono??Bata nahin ki yeh ladki kab mera peecha karna chodegi..Ek second!!(smiled winsomely as he thought of a brilliant plan to escape from this entire proposal and turned to look at Isha)Isha,main tumse kuch kehna chahtha hoon..In fact,tum please apne dil ko thaam lena kyunki main jo ab kehne waala hoon woh sunn kar shayad tumhara dil toothe..Main...
Isha:Tum kya??
Shravan:Main ek ladki se bohat pyaar..Bohat zyaada pyaar karta hoon aur woh ladki ab iss waqt mere ghar par hain..
Isha:Matlab?
Shravan:Chalo mere saath..(held Isha's hand and pulled her to go down the stairs to stand before Saachi)Hi Saachi...(smiled widely at Saachi who only seemed shocked and confused at the same time as she and Anokhi exchanged glances at each other)
Anokhi:(thought to herself)Bata nahin ki isse achanak kya ho gaya hain..Yeh toh hamesha Saachi ko gusse se aur irritatin se swaagat karta hai par aaj kya ho gaya hai??
Saachi:(was equally shocked)Namaste Shravanji..
Shravan:Uffo Saachi,mujhe iss tarha matt pukaarna please..
Saachi:Jee???
Shravan:Oops,main toh bhool hi gaya..Yeh hai Isha Mehta aur Isha,yeh hai Saachi..
Isha:Saachi??
Shravan:Wohi..Jiske baarein mein main baat kar raha tha thodi dher pehle..
Anokhi:(got doubtful and whispered to Saachi)Ab yeh Shravan tumhari baaarein mein myun kisi aur se baat karega??Zaroor kuch toh baat hai..(Saachi gestured to her to keep mum)
Madhura:Shravan beta,yeh tumhare dost hai?
Shravan:Haan Maa,yeh mere khaas dst hai..A very special friend indeed...Kyun??(raised his eyebrows at Saachi)
Madhura:Aao beta..(looked at Pratap and stopped herself)
Pratap:Bura matt maanno beta,actually humaare ghar par ek khaas mehmaan aaye huwe hai aur agar aap dono ko kuch kehna tha toh aap phir kabhi..
Dadi:Pratap,yeh bhi toh humaari Bittoo ki mehmaan hai..
Shravan:Haan Dadi..Aur aaj main aap sab ke saamne isse introduce karna chahunga..
Anokhi:Shravan..(grinned sheepishly as she looked at everyone else)Tum yeh kya kar rahe ho??(saw Shravan holding Saachi's wrist and Anokhi murmured to Shravan)Isha haath chod!!
Shravan:(murmured back to Anokhi)Itni bhi jaldi kya hai?Just wait and watch!!(looked at Dadi)
Dadi:Bittoo,hum kuch samjhi nahin..(Shravan let go of Saachi's wrist and winked at Dadi)
Shravan:Dadi,yehi toh hai jisse main pyaar karta hoon..This is the love of my life,Saachi..(hugged Saachi right in front of everyone else,inclusive of Pratap's friend and family members)
Shravan was ecstatic over the success of his quick thinking,which had a great impact on Pratap as Shravan could see the anger on Pratap's face.Pratap grew speechless despite his anger having escalated to a deep extent.Madhura and everyone else were starting to feel embarassed and ashamed for Shravan's action had caused a great deal f humiliation for Isha's parents who were shocked.Due to the immense respect that they had for Pratap,they just didn't wish to say anything further but simply left the place without uttering anything.Pratap tried to stop them and ask for forgiveness but they didn't stop and requested to not embarass them further in the future in the similar manner.
However,Saachi was growing real angry and she was numb with shock.She just pushed Shravan away in a harsh way and looked at him in anger.Her eyes were welled up with frustration,not knowing what she ought to have done.Ultimately,she really almost raised her hand to slap Shravan for misbehaving with her but she couldn't and glared at Anokhi who was as equally pissed as Saachi but she felt much more guilty from within.Seeing Saachi made her hesitate and she tried to turn her back to Saachi but Saachi went in front of her.
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