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Posted: 13 years ago
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~Kaash Mere Hote Part 11~

Anokhi reached home and realized that her maid hasn't left as of yet,who informed her that she has some unattended calls and some recorded voice messages.Anokhi went to refresh herself and checked those calls after some time,amongst which Shreya had left a message as well.Anokhi was stunned to hear the message that Shreya had left her,inviting Anokhi for the bike race due the day after tomorrow and Anokhi had called Shreya instantly.

Shreya was sound asleep,like a dead rock.The constant ringing of Shreya's mobile ringtone woke Saachi up who smiled upon seeing Anokhi's name.

Saachi:Anokhi,why are you calling Shreya when she's asleep?

Anokhi:She's asleep??So soon???

Saachi:Uffo,time toh dekho...

Anokhi:Uff,my bad!!Bata nahin chala ki raat ki bara baj chuki hain..

Saachi:Kuch kaam tha kya?

Anokhi:Usne mujhe ek message chodi thi..Bas woh clarify karna chahthi thi..Saachi,yeh bike race mein achanak tumhe interest..Kaise???

Saachi:Woh actually Anokhi,Amanji ne invite kiya tha...Woh bike race mein paat le rahe hain..

Anokhi:Aman??Achanak??Lekin uske paas bike kaha hain??I mean..

Saachi:Tum itne yakin ke saath kaise keh sakte hoke Amanji ke paas bike nahin hai??

Anokhi:Saachi dearie,uske paas gaadi hai,bike nahin...

Saachi:Kya tum uske ghar gaye the??

Anokhi:Nahin toh..Kyun??

Saachi:Toh tumhe kaise??

Anokhi:Uffo Saachi,kyunki maine usse ek gaadi mein dekha tha...

Saachi:Kab??

Anokhi:(bit her tongue and thought to herself)"Agar maine usse aur kuch bhi bataaaya,toh woh mujh par barosa nahin karegi...Chup kar Anokhi!!"..Woh Saachi,shaadi ke mandap par dekhi thi...(heaved a sigh of relief)

Saachi:Anokhi,jiske paas gaadi ho,yeh zaroori nahin hai ke unke paas bike naa ho..Aaj kal,sab ke paas sab hote hain na??

Anokhi:Point noted,Ms Saachi..

Saachi:Tum aaoge na bike race par??

Anokhi:Main aa kar kya karungi??Tumhare pyaare Amanji ko support karne ke liye mere paas faltu time nahin hai,ok??

Saachi:Tum abhi tak naaraaz ho mujhse??

Anokhi:Haan,kyun??Koi problem hai tumhe??

Saachi:Anokhi,please meri baat samajhne ki koshish karo na...

Anokhi:Agar tumhe bhaagna hi nahin tha,toh nahin bhaagna tha na...Bewaja tum...

Saachi:Tumne aur Shreya ne milkar..Main kaise mami ko dukhi karoo??

Anokhi:Tum aur tumhare mami ka dukhi naa karne ki melodrama..Seriously,main sunn sunn kar thak gaya hoon...Aur main ab bhi tumse keh rahi hoon ki Aman se shaadi karke tum sirf aur sirf apni zindagi barbaad karoge,aur kisi ki bhi nahin...

Saachi:Meri zindagi barbaad ho jaayegi na,kisi aur ki nahin na??

Anokhi:Pagal ho gayi ho tum??I mean it literally..Tumhe koi haqq nahin banta apni zindagi khud barbaad karne ki aur tum uparwaale ko iss tarha beizzat karna chahthe ho??

Saachi:Nahin Anokhi..Main bas apni mama mami ko khush karna chahthi hoon..Aur filhaal sab iss rishthe se khush hain!!

Anokhi:Aur tum??Kya tum khush ho?

Saachi:Main..Main khush hoon Anokhi!!Aur mujhe bohat neend aa rahi hain,so good night!!

Anokhi:Hhmm,good night!!(hung up)Tum kab samjhoge Saachi ki yeh zindagi tumhari hai,kisi aur ki nahin jo tum sab ko apne hukm chalaane ki ijaazat de rahi ho..Apne zindagi khud jeena tum kab seekhoge??Kisi bhi tarha main yeh shaadi nahin hone doongi,Saachi..Tujhe meri dosti ki kasam!!!

~Bike Race~

Saachi and Shreya managed to get the household chores done by the early afternoon and both of them got Inder's approval to go to the bike race to watch Aman contesting in the bike race amongst several other bike racers having had come to win the golden cup and prize money of 1.5 lakh rupees.Minutes before the start of the bike race,Saachi went to Aman and wished him the best of luck.

Just as she was walking over to the opposite side where Shreya stood,she almost got hit by a yellow bike.Shreya quickly went to see if Saachi was alright and looked at the biker but she had no idea who it was since the biker had already worn his helmet.Shreya glared at the biker for a while and grabbed Saachi's arm but Saachi didn't move.

Shreya:Saachi di,kya hua??

Saachi:Meri dupatta atak gayi hai..

Shreya:Tum???(saw Shravan taking off his helmet)

Shravan:Tum???Oh teri ki!!Shravan,bata nahin ab tumhara kya hoga??Hatto mere bike ke saamne se..

Shreya:Humein koi shauk nahin hai tumhare iss bike ke saamne khadi hona lekin..

Shravan:Lekin kya??

Shreya:Agar tum apna bike peeche loge toh..

Shravan:Wahh..Ab aap mujhe sikhaaoge ke mujhe kya karna chahiye aur kya nahin???

Saachi:Excuse me!!Zara tameez se baat keejiye..

Shravan:Aap toh chup hi rahiye..Jab bhi tum mere saamne aate ho,toh kuch na kuch gadbad ho hi jaata hai...Hatto!!!

Shravan's words only aggravated Saachi even more and Saachi just left to go further from his bike,not caring that her dupatta got torn.Shravan didn't notice Saachi's torn dupatta for the bike race had already started and the bikers started their race in full acceleration and speed.

Shreya:Bata nahin hum uss ladke se aksar baar baar mil kyun rahe hain...Seriously bohat oversmart samajh raha hain apne aap ko...Haan,kyun nahin??Pratap Jaiswal ka puttar jo hai!!!(paused as she heard the commentator)What???Shravan Jaiswal has been winning for years??Waise,Saachi di..Aapko kya lagta hai??

Saachi:Kya??

Shreya:Aaj kaun jeetega??

Saachi:Mujhe kya bata Shreya??

Shreya:Dii,aap itne boring kyun ho??I mean,seriously woh sab chodiye na...Dekhna,uss idiot aaj toh nahin jeetega...Jeeju hi jeetenge,dekhna!!(Shreya listened intently to the commentator updating on the leading bikers and started to bite her nails in anxiety as she heard that Shravan was in the lead with Aman following up behind him)Dii,i'm going to get something to drink,k??(Saachi nodded)

Shreya got them both a bottle of Coca-cola each and as she walked towards Saachi,she saw Saachi's dupatta having torn.

Shreya:Dii,aap bhi na!!

Saachi:Ab kya hua,Shreya??Hhmm??

Shreya:Aapki dupatta...Yeh kaise??Oh god,uss Shravan Jaiswal..

Saachi:Chod na...

Shreya:Kaise chodoo??Maine aapko apni savings se yeh achi si salwaar khareed kar liya tha aur..(paused as she saw Aman winning the bike race)Wowww!!!!Aman won????

Saachi:(smiled widely)Yeahh..See,Shreya??Ab tum kisi aur ke baarein mein baat nahin karoge,ok??Yeh khushi ki pal mein kisi aur ke baat nahin...

Shreya:Theekh hai,Saachi di...Come,let's go and congratulate Aman jeeju..

Saachi:Ek minute,woh dekho Anokhi..Woh toh keh rahi thi ki woh nahin aa rahi hain kyunki usse bohat kaam hai,toh phir..

Shreya:Maine bulaya tha..Saath mein kuch masti karenge na iss liye kaam khatam karke aa rahi hain...(smiled and winked at Saachi)Hello,Ms Workaholic...

Anokhi:Hi gurlzz....Kaun jeeta??

Shreya:Aman jeeju...

Anokhi:Le...Aman ne jeeta???

Shreya:Kyun??Khush nahin ho??Haan bhai,tum khush kyun hogi...Tum toh yehi chahthe ho na ke...

Anokhi:I mean,congratzz to Aman..

Shreya:Serious??

Anokhi:Haan,haan..bilkul!!!(looked around to see if she could spot other bikers and much to her surprise,she saw the bikers whom she was looking for)Erm,excuse me...

Saachi:Ab kaha jaa rahi ho??

Anokhi:Erm,woh ek important call karni thi....Excuse me,k??(Saachi and Shreya nodded)Hii,Shravan Jaiswal,right??

Shravan:Tum??

Anokhi:(smiled)Haan,main...

Shravan:Dekha tum dono ne,uss ladki ke kaaran aaj main har gaya...Jab bhi woh ladki mere saamne aati hai toh kuch na kuch bura ho jaata hain aur aaj uss Aman ne...Aur tum abhi tak yaha pe kya kar rahe ho??Hasna hain mujh par??Ki uss stupid Aman ne jeet liya??

Anokhi:Actually i'm quite surprised ki tum har gaye...I mean,my colleague's an avid fan of your biking and she's quite disappointed...I'm not a great fan of these bike races but she is and after she got to know that you lost...

Shravan:Okie,wohi ruk jao,samjhi tum??I lost because of that idiotic Aman..He cheated and...

Anokhi:KYA??

Shravan:He did and I'm not lying about it!!I had never expected him to even enter the race and when he did,he won by cheating...

Anokhi:And you let him win???Mr Shravan Jaiswal let someone take the prize money and the golden trophy and that too for someone who cheated right before his eyes??Tch tch tch tch...

Shravan:Just stop it,whoever you are!!!

Anokhi:The name's Anokhi Mishra!!!And i'm not being rude or sarcastic here but seriously i'm appalled!!!!I mean,how can you let just someone snatch something which you've always been passionate about and something which you truly deserved??Don't you wanna get back at him??(Shravan,Bunty and Viren looked at each other blankly)

Shravan:Tum exactly kya kehna chahthe ho??

Anokhi:Tum jaante ho ki main kya kehna chahthi hoon...In fact,mujhe tumse ek favour chahiye...

Shravan:Kaisa favour??

Anokhi:I want you to feed me all the details about Aman Mathur,your friend...I mean,your ex-friend....Dekho,baat bohat saaf hai...Main apni kareebi dost ki shaadi uss Aman se bilkul bhi nahin karna chahthi aur mujhe aapki madat chahiye....I wanna know everything about him,his college life,habits,his social circle,etc....And i need your help in this!!!

Viren:Why should we help you??

Anokhi:Because i'll do anything in return for you guyzz,provided it's a mutual and one-on-one deal...You can trust me on that!!I can do anything to help you get back at Aman,if you want me to!!

Shravan:Why would you want to ruin your best friend's wedding with Aman??Don't you think he's a great guy for having saved a girl's reputation from being tarnished???

Anokhi:It's quite apparent to me that Aman has other motives in his head ever since he went to talk to Saachi personally and i totally loathe him for winning Saachi's mami's heart in a way that he shouldn't have..And the subtle smile made a strong confirmation in my heart to trust my gut instinct at all times..Aur mujhe yakeen hai ke Saachi kabhi khush nahin rahegi Aman ke saath..If you'll help me,you'll be saving an innocent girl's life and her future...

Bunty:Shravan...

Shravan:Mujh par umeed hi matt rakna..Uske waje se aaj main har gaya...

Anokhi:Theekh hai,agar tum yeh sochthe ho,toh yehi sahi...Par phir bhi,main apni card tumhare haath mein rakthi hoon...Kabhi bhi zaroorat padthi hai,toh iss number dial karna..Main kal tak intezaar karungi kyunki mere paas zyaada waqt nahin hain...Saachi ki shaadi iss weekend par hogi;main ab bhi umeed karna chahthi hoon tum logon par...

Viren:Suniye,ek minute...

Anokhi:Gotta run..Thande dimaag se soch kar bataana mujhe...I'll wait for your call!!!(left from there to catch up with Shreya and Saachi)

Viren:Yaar Shravan,ek ladki ki zindagi tumhare haathon mein hain...

Shravan:Bilkul bhi nahin...I'm not..

Viren:Agar tum usse madat karoge toh,uske saath saath tum apna badla bhi poora kar sakte ho na??

Bunty:Woh kaise??

Viren:Dekh..Agar hum Aman ke baarein mein Anokhi ko sab kuch bataa the hain,toh woh bhi humein madat karegi na...Shravan ko apna badla bhi toh...

Bunty:Aisa kya baat hai Aman ke baarein mein jo hum Anokhi ko bata sakte hai aur yeh shaadi toot jaayega??Hhmm??Bolo bolo....

Shravan:Viren,bohat saare baatein hain...Jo hum jaante hain aur Anokhi aur Aman nahin...Ek hi jatke mein Aman par badla bhi poora ho jaayega...

Viren:Shravan,yeh tu kya keh raha hain??

Shravan:Iss ladki khud humaare paas chal kar aayi hai...Woh nahin chahthi ke yeh shaadi ho..Agar main uski madat kar rahi hoon,toh sirf apna badla lene ke liye,uss ladki ke dost ki zindagi bachaane ke liye nahin...Ab koi uss Aman ko bachaa nahin paayega!!!Har dishaa mein hum Aman ki baand bajaayenge!!(Shravan had a wicked smile plastered on his face)

Bunty:Arre Shravan par kisi ko bata chal gaya toh??

Viren:Bata chal bhi jaaye toh kya farqh padhtha hai??Yeh shaadi toh toot jaayega na..Aur yehi toh hum chahthe hain!!!Aur Bunty,tum yeh toh nahin bhula hain na ki Aman ne kaise Shravan aur Tara ki dosti mein daraar paidha karna chahtha tha??

Shravan:Hamesha usse maaf kiya hain maine,aur woh bhi sirf Tara aur Nidhi dear ke kehne par lekin ab aur nahin....Ab usse bhi bata chalega ki Shravan Jaiswal bhi kya cheez hain!!!

P.S:Sorry for posting the part late for i had no internet access for quite a number of days...Sorry for the inconvenience!!!Please do post your comments for each comment is truly appreciated!!!
Cheers,
Jassie
Edited by jassie_17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice story Jassie! Want to say I'm surprised Shravan lost, but I like the revenge thing..😉 Can't wait to read how this will continue 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow jassie very nice story.. But sad Shravan lost.. but revenge hmmmm
Its more like reading a drama as your dialogues take centre stage.👏
Very nice flow of the lang...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow !!!
very nice update pls continue soooooon !!
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~Kaash Mere Hote Part 12~

Shravan was riding on his bike from a workshop nearby as he recalled what Anokhi had said.He was damn sure of the fact that he was going to retaliate for what Aman had done to his bike and how Aman had won the race by cheating.He recollected the days when Shravan and Aman used to be casual friends.They had the same passion for biking and adventurous stunts but ever since Aman had known that Shravan had a liking for Tara,Aman's classmate,Aman started to stay distant from Shravan and started to act like a total jerk.There were several occasions on which Aman had totally attempted to ruin the friendship between Tara and Shravan,almost shaking the belief that Tara had in her friend,Shravan.

Tara had always believed and gave more importance to Aman instead of Shravan and for today's bike race,Tara had cheered on for Aman,which irked Shravan to a great extent and to add on top of that,he had met Saachi a few minutes before the start of the bike race,which according to him,was a bad omen and the reason for his first loss.

Shravan brushed his hair after taking off his helmet and rang the doorbell of his home.Neeta and Nidhi opened the door and welcomed him.

Neeta:Maa,dekhiye toh sahi ki kaun aaya hai..Aapka laadla jo aaj ki bike race unfortunately nahin jeet paaya...

Madhura:Neeta,uski taang keechna band karo...Aaja Shravan...

Dadi:Neeta,aaj woh har gaaya toh kya??

Neeta:Kuch nahin Dadi..Bas kisi ne mujhse yeh kaha tha ki woh har haal mein yeh race jeetega...Isi liye keh rahi thi!!

Nidhi:Shravan,tum fresh ho kar aa jao...

Shravan:Haan Nidhi dear...

Pratap:(walked down the stairs)Janab aa gaya haarke??

Shravan:(closed his eyes in frustration and opened them,standing before Pratap)Nidhi dear,mujhe khaana nahin chahiye...(went away in anger)

Nidhi:Arre par...

Dadi:Pratap!!Kuch acha agar nahin bol paate ho,toh bura bhi matt kaho na!!!Woh tumhara beta hai;kam se kam usse...

Madhura:Aapko toh har waqt mere bete mein sirf kamiyaa hi nazar aate hain...

Neeta:Papa,aapse ek zaroori baat karni thi woh nayi collections ko lekar...

Pratap:Haan,aao Neeta!!!

Madhura:Aao Nidhi,khaana serve karte hain...

Nidhi:Haan Maa,aati hoon...

Meanwhile,Anokhi was having dinner with Saachi and Shreya at Saachi's place.She was looking at her mobile constantly,hoping to get a confirmative call from Shravan to help her out to ruin the entire wedding of Saachi and Aman which was about to take place 4 days from now.She knew what Shravan had thought about Saachi but nevertheless,she still decided to remain hopeful and stared at her Blackberry.

Saachi:Kisi call ka intezaar kar rahe ho tum??

Anokhi:Huh??Nahin toh...

Saachi:Nahin,tum kuch parishaan lag rahe ho aur upar se baar baar apna mobile check kar rahe ho...

Anokhi:Arre,woh kuch khaas nahin hain...(ate her dinner before Saachi could ask her to speak up)Waise,yeh khaana tumne banaya hai kya??

Saachi:Hhmm..

Anokhi:Seriously,tum itne achi khaana kaise banaa lete ho??Main toh aisi khaana sirf apne sapney mein banaa sakthi hoon....Seriously it's yummy!!!

Shreya:Toh aur lo naa...(Shreya and Anokhi giggled while Saachi helped to serve more dessert)Kya baat hai didi...

Saachi:Kya??

Shreya:Aaj Aman jeeju ne bike race kya jeet liya,aap toh humein desserts khilaaaye jaa rahe hain??Kuch toh unke liye bhi bachaa kar rakhiye...(Anokhi stopped smiling and got slightly disturbed)

Saachi:Shreya,chup kar!!Mami sunn legi!!

Shreya:Toh sunne do na Maa ko...

Saachi:Sshh!!Yeh kya Anokhi??Tumne khatam nahin kii??

Anokhi:Bas..peth bhar gaya...Tum mujhe pack kar ke de dena aur waise bhi kaafi dher ho gayi hai aur mujhe nikalnaa bhi hai warna tum toh jaante ho na Dad ko...

Shreya:Uncle UK se laut aaya hai??

Anokhi:Lauta nahin hai lekin meri maid se mujh par nazar rakne ke liye kaha hain..Can you believe it??

Shreya:(bursted out laughing)Lollz Anokhi!!

Anokhi:Hasso matt!!Khayr,main chalti hoon...Mama mami se keh dena,theekh hai...Bye!!

Shreya:Bye...!!

Anokhi:(sat in her car)Abhi tak Shravan ne phone nahin kiya??Bata nahin ki phone karega ya bhi nahin aur main hoon ke ab bhi uss par umeed rakkhe baithi hoon...Bhool ja Anokhi,ab toh sirf tumhi kuch kar sakte ho!!(started to drive back home)

~Next Day~

Shravan was still sleeping when Dadi had gone up to his room with Nidhi.Both of them smiled at him and Dadi got the blanket away from Shravan and Nidhi placed the breakfast on the small table near his bed.Shravan gently opened his eyes and saw Dadi and Nidhi and closed his eyes instantly.

Nidhi:Ugghhh Shravann!!!Aankhen khol..Dus baj gaya hain!!

Shravan:Kya Nidhi dear aap bhi na...Dus hi toh baja hain!!Hi Dadi...(turned his head to the other side and resumed to sleep)

Dadi:Yeh aise nahin maanega!!!Isse toh main..(pulled Shravan's ear and woke him up)

Shravan:Ouc..Ow!!!!!Dadi...please,please,please...Mere kaan chodo na Dadi!!!(Dadi let go of his ear)Sss...Ouchh!!!!Dadi,mujhe ek raaz bata chal gaya hain...

Dadi:Raaz??Kaisa raaz??

Shravan:Yehi ki Hitler sirf aapka beta ho sakta hain...Aap mujhe apni neend se jagaa rahe ho aur Hitler..Hitler toh neend kharab karke hi chod tha hain...

Dadi:Badmaash kahi ka,apne baap ke baarein mein aise bolte hai kya??Aaj college nahin jaana hai kya?

Shravan:Dadi,do baje ko lecture hain..Abhi se jaa kar kya karunga??

Dadi:Phir bhi,tu uth jaa,mujhe tujhse kuch kaam hai...Nashtha table par rakhenge..Yaha nahin,dining table par..Chalo Nidhi!!(Nidhi got amused as she took the breakfast that she brought for Shravan and followed Dadi out of Shravan's room)

Shravan got up,dragging his legs and his towel to refresh himself and get ready.After some time,he heard Nidhi dear calling out for him and he got seated at the dining table.

Shravan:Nidhi dear,Dadi kaha hai??

Nidhi:Kyun??

Shravan:Nidhi dear for your kind information,Dadi ne khud kaha tha ki unhe mujhse kuch kaam tha...

Nidhi:Tu pagal toh nahin ho gaya hai??Dadi bas aise hi keh rahi thi...

Shravan:Yeh Dadi bhi na...

Nidhi:Bas tumhe uthaane ke liye aise hi kuch funda try kiya tha aur kya baat hai,Shravan??Unki koshishen safal ho gayi...

Shravan:Nidhi dear,stop!!Mujhe khaana khaane doge please???

Nidhi:Suit yourself...

Just then,Shravan's mobile started to ring and Nidhi stopped.

Shravan:Nidhi dear,what??

Nidhi:Tumhari mobile..Uthaao na..

Shravan:Aapko kaam thi na,toh jaayiye!!

Nidhi:Fine!!

Shravan:Hello..

Tara:Shravan,hi..

Shravan:(almost choked)Tara,tum??Look,uss din ke liye i'm really sorry..Maine apna wallet bhool gaya aur na jaane tumhe kya kuch...

Tara:Even i'm sorry Shravan..Main bhi itni silly thi ki maine tumhe wahaa pe akela chod diya,apne gusse ki kaaran...Aur uski waje se main toh Aman ke liye cheer kar rahi thi bike race par...Sorry!!Maaf karoge mujhe??

Shravan:Hhmm,sochna padega...

Tara:Shravan!!

Shravan:Maaf kiya..Happy??

Tara:(smiled widely)Shravan,you're so sweet!!Acha,agar tumne mujhe kiya hai,toh kya tum aaj mere saath Aman ki ghar chaloge??He's having a pool party and dinner celebrations upon his victory at the bike race..

Shravan:Tum uss bande ko bulaa rahe ho jisne bike race haraa tha..

Tara:Pleasee,mere liye Shravan!!Aaoge na??

Shravan:Kya Tara,tum bhi na...Ok,tum itni pyaar se bulaaoge toh main aaonga..But what time is it??

Tara:In the early evening..Aaj tumhe classes hai??

Shravan:Haan,ek supplementary class hai uske baad hum saath chal sakte hai ya phir main tumhe Aman ke ghar par hi milta hoon...

Tara:Hhmm ok,i'll meet you at Aman's place,k??

Shravan:Ok,i'll talk to you later then..

Tara:Bye!!

Shravan:(hung up)Hamesha yeh ladki Aman ko hi zyaada importance deti hain..Bata nahin ki kab main...

Madhura:Shravan,kisse baatein kar rahe ho??

Shravan:Good morning Maa..Nahin kuch nahin..Main bas yeh soch raha hoon ki main Papa ko kaise samjhoo..

Madhura:Kya??

Shravan:Kuch nahin Maa..Main aise hi badbadhaa raha tha..Nice breakfast!!Bye Maa..

Madhura:Pagal ladka!!Sambhal kar jaana....

Shravan:Bye Maa!!

~4:00pm~

Shreya:Hii Dii,chale??

Saachi:Kaha??

Shreya:Uffo dii,aap bhool gaye??Aman jeeju ne aapko bulaya tha na unke ghar par pool party aur dinner ke liye??Chaliye na...Maa bhi aapko ijaazat de diya tha na..

Saachi:Bata nahin,Shreya..

Shreya:Main kuch nahin sunnaa chahthi hoon,dii..Chaliye..I'll get you something nice to wear..Come!!Here you go..Go and get dressed!!!(pushed Saachi to the dressing room)

~After some time~

Shreya:Wow Saachi di,aap kamaal lag rahi ho..Dekhna,iss party mein sab aapko dekhtha hi reh jaayenge...Come!!!

Along the way to Aman's house,Shreya got a phone call from one of her friends,reminding her of the meeting that they were supposed to have to complete their group project.Shreya entirely forgot about the meeting in the midst of the excitement to see Aman's house and be part of his celebration.She informed Saachi and dropped Saachi at Aman's house while she went to her friend's place to wrap up her project work.

Saachi waved at Shreya who left in the same autorickshaw to her friend's place.Meanwhile,Saachi felt quite lost as she saw a terrific,large bungalow before her,the kind of house which she could only have dreamt of seeing in the movies or even in her dreams.She walked forward and entered the house and wondered around until she saw a lot of teenagers around the pool.There was loud blaring music being played in the background and they were all in their casuals.Saachi bravely went towards a few of them to ask about Aman's whereabouts earnestly,"Ji,aap mujhe batayenge ki Amanji kaha pe milenge??".However,all of them laughed at her and made fun of her question,imitating her.She rephrased her question and asked about Aman Mathur instead but still,no one responded to her.

Meanwhile,Shravan was looking around for Tara around the poolside as well and just then,he spotted the one girl he so didn't want to meet--Saachi,who was still clueless of where Aman was.Shravan tried to hide away from her sight and searched for Tara instead.Saachi looked to her right and left,pretty much aware of the fact that the teenagers were making fun of her behind her back but she tried not to bother about them.Suppressing her tears,she continued to search.However,just then,someone mildly pushed her from behind and she fell into the pool with a thud.As she adjusted her hair,bringing her hair away from her face,she saw the entire crowd of teenagers from every corner laughing at her,without having the tiniest bit of courtesy to help her out.As she turned,she saw the guy whom she had seen several times,just looking around elsewhere as soon as she noticed him looking at her.

Edited by jassie_17 - 13 years ago
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very nice update jassie👍🏼keep it up and post the next one soon
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Wow Jassie! Amazing! Please continue soon, can't wait to read what will happen next!
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wow !!
awesome update !pls continue sooon !
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love the update plzz contiuee😉
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~Kaash Mere Hote Part 13~

Shravan didn't know why he was feeling bad for Saachi and despite trying to ignore her and look for Tara,he instantaneously looked back at Saachi and saw how everyone else were simply laughing at her instead of helping her out.As he turned to see Saachi,he saw her wiping her tears and having got out of the pool by herself.Shravan continued his search for Tara and forgot about the whole incident till Saachi coincidentally came before him,having bumped into him and dropping all his flowers which he had brought for Tara.Saachi didn't see Shravan in front of her as she knelt down to pick up the flowers and as she stood up to apologize,she stopped herself and glared at Shravan for some time,realizing that he was a part of the very same crowd who only cared enough to laugh at her.Shravan tried not to look at her,feeling a slight tinge of guilt for not trying to help her out.He was about to say something but just then,Tara came before both of them,witnessing the scene before her.

Tara:Shravan,hi....(Shravan was startled for a second)I didn't know that you had brought a guest with you...

Shravan:Tara..Hi..

Tara:Who's this girl??Your girlfriend??(Saachi grew slightly agitated and placed Shravan's flowers in his hand and just walked away)

Shravan:Hhmm,where were you??And why are you asking me about this girl??Feeling jealous??

Tara:Me??No wayzz...Why would i be jealous??

Shravan:Really??You don't care if a girl were to come before me and dance with me??

Tara:She danced with you??

Shravan:Oooo,why do i sense something burning,Tara??

Tara:I don't care Shravan..Seriously i'm only surprised that you've got such a taste...Look at me and the rest here,so well-dressed and look at that clumpsy,illiterate girl who's only here to become a laughing stock..

Shravan:Whatever you may say,you're still jealous!!Waise,these flowers are for you!!!

Tara:Really??And not for that girl??

Shravan:Who,Saachi??

Tara:You know her??

Shravan:Yeahh,i met her quite a number of times,why??

Tara:Shravan...!!Now,let's not talk about her,please...

Shravan:You're the one who's asking about her...You love these flowers??

Tara:They're simply perfect!!!(hugged Shravan and pulled him closer to her)Again,you're really sweet!!!(withdrew from her hug as she saw Aman and brought Shravan with her)Hi Aman...Waise,i'm truly sorry for not having come to your supposed wedding date...But i haven't met the girl of your dreams as of yet and you promised that you're going to introduce her to me nad the rest of us...Where is she???

Shravan:You're going to introduce her here in this party??

Tara:Uffo Shravan,yeahh that's also another reason why he held this party!!!

Shravan:Oh crap!!

Tara:What's wrong Shravan??

Shravan:Nothing at all,Tara...(got confused about what's about to happen next,feeling a bit worried for Saachi and what might happen to her and thought to himself)"Ok dude,tum uss ladki ke liye kyun parishaan ho rahe ho??Yeh tumhara problem nahin hain na,so just chill,stand back and enjoy the fun!!"Tara,would you like something to drink??

Tara:Sure,the usual..let's start with something light!!

Shravan:I'll be right back..

Shravan was heading to the drinks corner when he came across Saachi who was queueing to get a glass of orange juice.He stood behind her and ordered Tara's mojito while Saachi was waiting for her orange juice.Just a few moments later,the bartender handed Shravan his drink and this infuriated Saachi to a great extent,as evident in her tone towards the bartender,"Excuse me..Main yaha pe inse pehle aayi thi aur kaha hai meri drink??Just because woh ek glass orange juice,aap itne waqt lagaa rahe ho aur baat aayi alcoholic drinks ki,toh aap jatt se inhe de diya??".

Shravan:Erm..Please serve her,her drink first..

Saachi:Aap samajh the kya ho apne aap ko??Nahinn...Aap ameer hai iska matlab yeh toh nahin hai ki aap..

Shravan:Ok,just hold it...Yaha mere ameer hone ka sawaal kaise paidha hua??And why are you blowing things up??It's just a stupid drink...

Saachi:Stupid drink??Dekh liya; tumhare jaise insan toh kabhi pehle orange juice nahin peeya hoga...Utthe hi sharaab aur so the bhi toh sharaab ki sang!!(Shravan started to get a lil agitated)Kyun???

Shravan:Tumhari problem kya hai??Huh??(Saachi rolled her eyes and looked at the bartender)

Saachi:Ab khade khade mu kya dekh rahe ho??Jaldi se mere drink laao...

Shravan:Dekho,yahaa pe toh sab alcoholic drinks serve hota hai..I mean,tum aisi atmosphere mein kar kya rahe ho??

Saachi:That's it!!!(slammed the longitudinal table in front of her and moved forward,towards Shravan)Tum apne kaam se kaam rakho,samjhe??(took Tara's drink by mistake and drank it entirely in one gulp,leaving Shravan speechless and shocked)Do bara tumhare shakal bhi nahin dekhna chahthi...(walked from there)

Shravan:Oh no!!Bata nahin ab kya hoga...(looked at the bartender who called him,asking him about the orange juice)Orange juice??Khud pee lena aur jaldi doosra mojito serve karo...!!(thought to himself)But why the hell am I concerned for someone who's always been a source of problem for me..(took the glass of mojito and went towards Tara who was waiting for him across the opposite side of the pool)

Meanwhile,Saachi was slowly getting a lil dizzy as she walked,looking for Aman.She saw a smoothie bar and stopped there when she met Aman surrounded by Tara and some of his mates.

Saachi:Amanji..

Aman:Saachi,tum??Tum yahaa??

Saachi:Aapne nyota diya tha na...

Aman:(looked to one of his friend who ridiculed her)Nyota,as in invitation...

Tara:Not bad yaar..Your Hindi is definitely improving,lollz...Waise,you still haven't introduced us to the girl of your life...Tum toh chuppe rustam nikle yaar!!

Aman:(smiled at Saachi who smiled back,blushing)Surely,come inside..

Shravan:Hi guyzz..Has Aman introduced his girl yet??

Aman:You're also just in the nick of time...Come inside for refreshments and a splendid rain dance party at the penthouse upstairs...Saachi,you too!!It's a beautiful surprise for you,which is going to change your life forever!!!

Saachi didn't exactly understand what Aman had just said but she just followed him blindly while Shravan smelt that something extremely fishy was going on and though he loved to gain some psychic abilities to find out what was going on in Aman's mind,the newly acquired sensation from Tara's touch simply brought him to another world and he followed suit.

PRE-CAP:Saachi is extremely shattered as she saw Aman dancing with another girl so intimately and everyone else were dancing in pairs except for Saachi who was totally lost after Aman had announced that he was never at all going to marry her in the first place!!!

Edited by jassie_17 - 13 years ago
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